I have a demon in my eyes

Chapter 39 Today's Update Report
Today, a friend read the revised first fourteen chapters and gave a very detailed comment.

Both affirmation and advantages.

Of course, there are also shortcomings and shortcomings, and there are many.

Today, I will talk to you about one of the biggest shortcomings: the refreshing point is not dense enough.

Bai Yang agrees with this very much.

In fact, I realized it when I changed it a few days ago.

But the key point is, how to make it cool and intensive, I don't have the slightest idea.

All for updating and revising the text.

But today...

I stopped updating and revising the article, and thought about it carefully: how to make the cool point dense while the plot remains unchanged.

After a day of hard work, summarize the web articles I like to read: why I like to read it, and what attracts me to it.

Do this.

Really found a way.

In the next chapters, I will try to make Shuang Dian denser...

Today's report ends here.

Goodnight everybody!

See you tomorrow!
(End of this chapter)