abnormal musician

Chapter 204 Brother Jie, You Are Really Strong! (seeking subscription monthly pass~)

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But Li Shaojie in the camera smiled warmly and openly, without any other expressions.

"Sorry, Teacher Li Shaojie, I want to know...why?!"

Deng Yujun seemed to have been greatly insulted, his eyes were red, and he asked Li Shaojie with a trembling voice.

"Yeah yeah!!"

"How could it be only 20 points?!"

"This is outrageous!"

"Wouldn't this be public revenge?!"

"Maybe, Li Shaojie seems to have always looked down on Gufeng circle."

"How can you carry private goods like this? Make a girl unable to get off the stage?"

The voices of the audience are getting louder.

Li Shaojie was not annoyed, he smiled lightly and waved his hand slightly.

Then he said very seriously.

"I'm not insulting you."

"Don't worry, I'll analyze it for you slowly."

Immediately, the audience fell silent.

At least I still want to listen to Li Shaojie's statement, so as not to be particularly riotous.

But dissatisfaction, for sure.

"First of all, it's all based on an objective perspective based on music."

Li Shaojie smiled slightly.

"I'm a music producer, so I won't judge based on subjective [good or bad], after all, everyone has everyone's taste, this is the first thing to emphasize."

Seeing that the audience around were dissatisfied, but still nodded, Li Shaojie said with a smile.

"Since it's a singer-songwriter show, my overall score is biased towards three aspects."

"Creative ability, singing ability, and expressiveness on stage, there are three kinds, each with [-] points, and the average value is taken at the end. Is this fair?"

The audience couldn't help but nodded.

Even the remaining three judges subconsciously nodded slightly.

It's fair.

"The first thing to talk about is creative ability."

Li Shaojie said in detail.

"First of all, the chord is the most basic routine 4536251 column chord, and the melody is quite satisfactory. There is no bonus item. It can only be said that it is an entry-level singer-songwriter. I gave a high score, 60 points for passing Wire."

"And the orchestration is not brilliant. The old three are flute, erhu, and guzheng. Moreover, the harmony formed by the orchestration of the three instruments is too immature. The overall concert is very empty and there is no filling content."

"Especially in the progression of expressing emotions, while taking the guzheng as the base, it didn't play a smooth rising role. The timbre of the flute happened to sound at the same time as the human voice. This could have been a good idea, but your human voice There is no color change at all, and the flute suddenly rises abruptly and monotonously, and there is no coordination."

"Not to mention the basic tones of decorative sounds and even the techniques of tonality transformation."

"The interlude of the erhu could have been fine, but also because of the design of the flute and the human voice, the color contrast between the fall and the fall is not strong enough, and there is not enough tension."

Li Shaojie shook his head again and again.

This horse riding seems to be really objective!

The venue suddenly became silent.

Only Li Shaojie's unhurried voice was commenting.

"The rhythm and drums are very monotonous without any change. It is difficult to make the song have tension without changing the rhythm. The simple rhythm pattern from the beginning to the end also makes the texture of the song loose."

"Even your deliberately turning singing style itself has seriously affected the texture of the ending of each phrase. It was originally going on and ending well, but a strange transition was added, which destroyed the original texture of the ending of the music."

"There is no big problem with the lyrics, but the specific imagery is too fragmented, and people can't grasp the main idea. I summed it up. It's almost a kind of [Jianghu Chisa] in the chaos of war with the feelings of family and country?? "

Li Shaojie's words made Deng Yujun's face darken.

But there's really nothing to argue against.

It is not a day or two that the antiquity circle forcibly creates a sense of antiquity.

"So, to sum up, I think your ability in composition has just passed, 60 points, but there are some minor flaws in the way of thinking in arrangement, and defects in harmony, adding up, deducted 20 points from you, which is very Reasonable."

Li Shaojie spread his hands.

A lot of well-founded analysis and this very rational and objective analysis directly made everyone in the audience speechless.

Listen to silly! !

Although these things, in Li Shaojie's view, are the basics of professionalism.

However, to other people's ears, it is like a bible.

Some people have even started to slander in their hearts.

【How can you analyze it after listening so little? !It can't be nonsense! ! 】

But obviously, I dare not say such words.

Having said that, it must be embarrassing.

Li Shaojie's words immediately stopped the scene! !
With a slight smile, Li Shaojie continued to speak.

"Then let's talk about the second question, your singing skills."

This time, although many viewers were dissatisfied, they listened more patiently.

It seems to be a real problem, not Li Shaojie's messing around.

There really doesn't seem to be such a thing as "I don't like listening to it so I give it a low score".

All judgments are justified! !
"Your singing skills can be heard. You haven't received any vocal training. In terms of pitch, except for superficial transposition, you can actually master other parts."

good?

Many viewers were stunned.

Since you said it was okay, why is it so low? !

Before anyone could speak, Li Shaojie spoke first.

"But I'm very [amateur]. If I were to evaluate ordinary fans, I might say it's really good, or that I sing well, but this is a professional stage for singer-songwriters. According to professional scores, it can't reach sixty. , that’s forty points.”

Li Shaojie smiled slightly.

"Also, in this performance, your vibrato is very serious, the resonance area is very weak, there is almost no mixed sound, the closing can not be said to be poor, it can basically be said to be non-existent, and the breath is even more chaotic."

"To sum up, plus your extravagant transliteration, this problem is much more serious than the creative ability, so I can only give you 20 points."

All analysis is still very objective and well-founded.

All are factual facts.

Can't pick a thorn at all! !
Even dissatisfied fans have been persuaded! !

"Fuck! What is a profession?! This is a profession!!"

In the audience, many audience members who had long felt that Deng Yujun's singing was not good were flushed with excitement.

Finally, a knowledgeable boss dared to speak out about her problem! !

But many people suddenly realized one thing.

"its not right?"

Song Yumeng burst into tears.

"Creation is 40 points, singing is 20 points, so the average is 30 points, how is it... is it?"

Then, there was a look of disbelief!

Is it possible that the stage performance is directly beaten to zero? !

After Song Yumeng's reminder, many people realized it.

Immediately, he stared at Li Shaojie with wide eyes.

"Well, you're right."

Li Shaojie nodded with a smile.

It is still an objective technical evaluation without any emotional color.

"Stage expressiveness is further divided into [acting] and [tools]. Instruments are naturally equipment. In terms of stage design, lighting, costumes, special effects, and props are all to serve the performance, but..."

When Li Shaojie said this, he shook his head with a wry smile.

"You are wearing a black robe and a red fan, combined with the red and black lighting, it is really not suitable to express a kind of war with family and country feelings [Jianghu Chisa]. After all, your lyrics focus on a The unrestrained, heavy feelings of family and country, and the sense of war are just a superficial background. However, the coordination of your clothing and lighting only highlights the heaviness and depression. For the point of [chic], not only did not show it. , and even suppressed it."

"Only the hairstyle is very casual, maybe to express chic, but... why did you use the bubble machine? Don't you think the bubble machine will destroy this atmosphere?"

Li Shaojie spread his hands again.

A sentence of soul torture made Deng Yujun speechless at that time.

A lot of stage design. The people present didn't understand it very well.

At least I haven't learned it from an academic level, at most I just learned about it.

That being said, it seems that there is such a problem!
"Let's talk about the performance of the stage."

Li Shaojie shook his head again and again.

"Obviously, you have very little stage experience, and you haven't received systematic and scientific stage performance training, so when you sing, you don't know where to put your hands, and you just stand there, which makes me feel that you are very The restraint of the song has formed a destructive force on the image of the song "chic".

"Because there is no sense of control, the stage will appear to be very empty. Not only does it not help the work, but it destroys the work. This is why I will give you 0 points in terms of stage expressiveness!!"

Li Shaojie smiled slightly.

There was still no extra emotion in his eyes.

It is still a very gentle and rational analysis from the technical level, without any personal feelings.

"So 40 points are given for creative ability, 20 points for singing ability, and 0 points for stage ability."

"Oh, if you add up the three items, the full score is 300 points. I will give you 60 points, and the average is 20 points."

After thinking about it, Li Shaojie seemed to have remembered something.

Said very seriously.

"If you say that you are an Internet celebrity and a layman, but you love music and want to play casually, not only will I not criticize you, but I will even encourage you, because you are based on love."

"But this is a professional stage, a [singer-composer]. Since you have positioned yourself as a [singer-composer] who combines performance and creation, then I think the criteria for judging should be extended to professional Level, because, you want to rely on [music skills] to make money."

"I don't ask you how high you are, but you must be a beginner. At least don't deceive the audience. But obviously, you have a lot of problems, and I think the level of entry is a bit inappropriate."

Li Shaojie sighed and shook his head.

"I want to give you high marks too."

The venue was suddenly quiet.

Really.

At this moment, no one can speak.

It's not the so-called insult, because it's all telling the truth.

It's not about demanding high standards, and it's not about deliberate low scores because people are unhappy.

Speaking purely from a professional point of view, it really makes people unable to find the slightest fault.

The criminal director was stunned.

Wu Junyou who was secretly delighted was also stunned.

Originally, I wanted to seize this wave of opportunities to make trouble.

turn out
Oh, it's alright.

This person's evaluation is watertight and professional.

How to attack?
Attacking others for being too professional and loving to tell the truth makes others unhappy?How funny?
Although engaging Li Shaojie is the goal, but the real first goal is the popularity of the show and making money.

This wave of comments is definitely the focus of attention. With Li Shaojie's wave, the topic, popularity, and word-of-mouth of the show may rise. As long as you are not a fool, it is difficult to do things here.

He had no choice but to pinch his nose resentfully, waiting for Li Shaojie's next wave of "explosion".

Deng Yujun stood on the stage blankly, feeling like a clown.

"Thank you teacher!"

At this time, Deng Yujun felt very embarrassed.

Although my heart is full of resentment and grievances, I still know rationally that I can't continue to fight here.

"Good guy! What is a professional!!"

Several other contestants waved their arms violently.

He looked very excited.

Finally someone can clearly and accurately identify works! !
Before, when Deng Yujun came, his nostrils were all on the top of his head, which made many singers and composers unhappy.

But dare not speak.

The flow of people is top-notch, and it is a big deal to bring rhythm casually, plus a bunch of brain fans, who can stand it? !
And if I play professional things, whether the judges can understand is still the same thing! !

But such a wave of Li Shaojie instantly conquered other singer-songwriters in the audience.

"It's really fierce! This sensitivity and professionalism are incredible!"

The singers were thrilled.

shady? !
With this big guy's comment, it is either blatantly shady to the end, or you have to be more careful, at least not to act too much.

If it is the latter type, it will undoubtedly give greater opportunities to singers who have no background but are capable.

"No! I must join Brother Jie's camp!!"

"Aren't you afraid of being targeted? Brother Jie will definitely be killed by Deng Yujun's fans after such an incident."

"That's right, maybe it will even be shady because of it"

"Brother Jie is really strong! Really, even if there is something wrong with the shady scene, at least you can learn something!!"

"What's the matter? With Jiege's fighting power, I can already imagine the picture of Jiege with his arms akimbo spraying a group of elementary school students, okay?!"

Many singers and composers are simply too happy.

[Let's invite the next contestant! 】

The mechanical sound rang.

The next contestant is about to appear!
Not only Wu Junyou, Song Yumeng and Qin Shengrong couldn't help looking at Li Shaojie with a wary look.

Naturally, he was not guarding against Li Shaojie's attack but guarding himself.

Tell yourself not to talk nonsense. If you don't recognize something professional and say something wrong, wouldn't it be a big embarrassment?
Li Shaojie was very calm.

I don't talk nonsense, do I?

As far as an objective evaluation is concerned, it is completely based on music, without any emotion.

If you still have someone to rush, then no matter how you answer, you are in the initiative!
With that in mind, the next player came on stage.

Li Shaojie glanced at it with a smile, and was a little silly to scratch his head at that time.

Strange shape.

A singer-songwriter who looked like a very young girl walked on stage in a furry bunny suit on a horse.

bouncy.
(End of this chapter)