Chapter 166 The Indignation of the Crowd (Please Subscribe!)
The middle-aged wretched man sitting in front of the computer desk entered the last line of words: "Finally, I will give you some dry goods. Everyone, read them carefully and write them down in your notebook. The main line can only be in growth (including difficulties, feelings, upgrades, farming, etc.) ) and Suspense.
A book can have multiple main lines, but each main line corresponds to only one ultimate goal.Each thread should run throughout the book.
A book must have at least two to three main lines, and the world plot can be regarded as one main line.Upgrades are based on level promotion, and suspense is based on suspense.
The essence of upgrading is the improvement of social status, which can be reflected in multiple aspects such as treatment, fame, power, wealth, confidentiality level, and enemy level.The essence of suspense is what happened under the current worldview, which is impossible but happened.
The goal is the ending that the author wants the protagonist to reach, which is different from the protagonist's own motivation.Well, all newcomers and authors, today's lecture is over here first, the meeting is adjourned! "
The middle-aged wretched man sent the last sentence, then he got up and stretched, and said to himself: "Don't say it, I'm really tired after half an hour of lectures, it's a pity that everyone in the group It’s a rookie among rookies, I made a fool of myself, and I actually took it seriously.”
At this time, two middle-aged men who were also relatively wretched walked in from outside the door. One of the middle-aged men A said to his crotch with a demonic look: "Fan Tong, are we done with the matter? We can withdraw. The money has been transferred to an offshore bank.
Even if the Longguo officials track it down in the future, they will not be able to recover. If they cheated for two more days, they could still make another sum of money, but it is almost impossible to hide it. Now the total amount of funds is more than 100 million, which is almost , This amount of money is enough for us to be chic for a while.
Fan Tong, you are in charge of disbanding the signing training class for online writers, and then you don’t use this card, here, use this new card. "Man A handed over a new calling card.
The crotch said with a demonic air: "Okay, I'll go and disband the contract training group, and then let's change to another place. Hehe, it's still easy for these newcomers to make money, unlike those old-timers who are on the street. No more salt."
On the other hand, Yang Gao witnessed the whole process of teaching in the group with a monster in the crotch.
I have to say that there are three points of truth and seven points of falseness in the words that the crotch is evil. It still sounds a bit unreasonable. The highest state of nonsense is that even I firmly believe that it is correct.
This made him, who has no experience in writing web articles, mesmerized, as if opening the door to a new world.
"Is this the true strength of a professional team? As the saying goes, don't do porcelain work without diamonds. This professional team really has two brushes."
However, although Yang Gao carefully wrote down the evil spirit in the crotch and talked about those dry things in the group, after all, it was only a general direction, and he had more detailed and in-depth questions to ask about the evil spirit in the crotch.
So I clicked on the avatar of the group leader who has a monster in his crotch, and asked to add a friend with a monster in his crotch.
At this time, although the evil spirit in the crotch has stopped lecturing in the group, the members of the group where the online writers signed the training class are still chatting constantly.
"Do you think the dry stuff that the group leader talked about today is useful? Could it be fooling us? Any of you added the group leader's Fat Goose account, and I added the group leader, but the group leader hasn't agreed with my friend yet. Apply."
"I think there are dry goods, and they are very incisive, but we still need their help at the beginning of the writing. We will not be able to learn that kind of skill for a while. We can only write more and practice more, and accumulate more writing experience. Transform the experience that the group owner said into our own."
"You didn't add the group leader? Although I added the group leader, but I asked the group leader a question, he hasn't replied to me yet."
"Upstairs, maybe the host is tired from the lecture just now. You can write down the lecture content in the group first, and then go back and study it carefully. The class that the host of the group gave today is really something."
"Brothers here, have any of you signed a contract after being guided by the group leader?"
"Yesterday, I asked the group owner when to guide me to sign the contract. The group owner said it wasn't my turn yet, and told me to wait patiently."
At this time, Yang Gao was looking at the group chat, and was about to speak to ask when the group owner would guide him to sign a contract. Suddenly, there was a beeping sound. Yang Gao found out that the system had sent a message, and Yang Gao clicked immediately. Opened to see, but was taken aback.
System message: Dear user, hello, the Fat Goose Group "Internet Author Signing Training Class" you are in has been disbanded by the group owner's crotch. If there is any inconvenience caused to you, please forgive me.
Yang Gao stared wide-eyed at the news that the online author's contract training class was disbanded. He was completely stunned, still unwilling to believe it was true.
"??? What's going on? Why was the training group disbanded? Could it be that the group leader disbanded because of the evil spirit in his crotch? Yes, only the group owner has the authority to disband the fat goose group, but why did he disband the fat goose group? ? Could it be that he is a liar?"
Yang Gao suddenly felt a huge sense of uneasiness, and this uneasiness became more and more intense, which could not be dispelled.
"The crotch has a wicked look, so it's not really a liar, is it? Then my 1000 dragon yuan was wasted like this? The 1000 dragon yuan was cheated, it's not the most important thing, the key is that without him to guide the signing, I am alone How to sign a contract, what should I do." Yang Gao burned inside all of a sudden.
At this time, the writers, who were also students in the training course signed by online writers like Yang Gao, were also very shocked. Some of them had already tried to call and contact You Qi in the crotch, but they couldn't reach anyone, and the mobile phone number was empty. Number.
At this time, all the students in the group panicked. They knew that they had encountered a scammer. They used the contract training as a pretext to lure a large number of new writers to pay to join the contract training group. After collecting a large amount of funds, Just disappeared suddenly, evaporated from the world.
Some people even went to check the IP address of the monster in the crotch, and tragically found that the IP address was outside the country. This team is definitely premeditated and very sophisticated in their work.
At this time, a group of authors who were deceived went to the Qihang post bar to post.
On the Qihang post bar, there is a title called "The crotch is evil, you pay me back my hard-earned money!" "Under the post, most of the deceived authors left messages under the post.
"There is a monster in the crotch, you come out on the horse, you can't be too shameless, you charged me 1000 dragon yuan, but the group disbanded when they said they would disband. If you don't give me an explanation, I will call the police!
Don't think that you can't be caught outside the country, you have cheated so many people that the Dragon Kingdom officials can't ignore it! "
"Oh my god, there is a monster in the crotch, give us an explanation, there is still Qiye, you have killed us, if it wasn't for the monster in the crotch and the screenshot of your friend, how could I easily participate in this kind of signing What about training? Seven nights, you need to give us an explanation!"
"Upstairs, I'm afraid it's not that Youqi in the crotch and Qiye are secretly cooperating to make huge profits! Qiye, come out quickly, or I will report to Qihang Chinese website that you colluded with others to make huge profits!"
"Hey, I'm really speechless. This kind of unconscionable black-hearted money has to be earned. Although 1000 dragon yuan is not much, I can't swallow this breath. I wish you have a son who doesn't have pussy eyes and goes to the toilet. toilet,
Buying cans without pull rings, buying milk tea without straws, eating watermelons are all watermelon seeds, people will always be cut in line, and will never be able to squeeze on the bus. "
"Hey, there is a monster in the crotch. It is said that he is the old author of lv5 on Qihang Chinese website, and he also knows Qiye. Now I want to ask Qiye. The monster in the crotch uses your sign to defraud you. Do you care about this matter? I will call the police!"
"Qiye, hurry up and explain why you have a friend seat if you have a monster in your crotch. He is using your sign to cheat. Now you can't find anyone with a monster in your crotch. You must compensate us for the loss!"
On the other side, in a certain room.
The famous martial arts master Jianghu Drunk Ke sat in front of the computer desk, watching the disbandment message sent by the system after the contracted training class of the online writer was disbanded.
That's right, Jianghu Zuke has changed his career and is currently trying to enter the web literature industry. Since the last hype, he has made up his mind to engage in the web literature industry.
After he determined the classification of the novel before and wrote the outline of a few hundred words, he began to write the text.Then he uploaded the [-]-word manuscript to Qihang Chinese website. Three days later, Qihang Chinese website sent a text message to inform him that his work could not be signed for the time being.
This made Jianghu drunken mind a little confused. He is confident that the manuscript he wrote is very beautiful, the plot is not bloody, and it is pleasing to read. The first few chapters are the manuscript after he has repeatedly polished it , representing the current highest level of drunkards.
"It's unscientific. This manuscript has been reposted and polished by me, and I have also passed it on to Brother Bai Yun for reading. Brother Bai Yun thinks that my writing skills this time have improved a lot compared to before. Spectrum.
Originally, I wanted to catch Qiye's popularity, but it turned out to be a good thing, I couldn't sign a contract even if I signed a contract, it's still rubbish! "Jianghu drunk complained at the beginning.
Just when Jianghu Drunk was about to change the beginning, he saw in a group of fat geese that a newcomer author was posting an advertisement with a monster in the crotch. He saw the monster in the crotch and claimed that paying 1000 dragon yuan would sign the contract Train the students in the group, and sign a one-on-one guidance package.
Especially the Jianghu drunken man also saw the monster in the crotch and claimed to be friends with Qiye, and there were screenshots as evidence, which made him let down his guard even more, so he hurriedly paid 1000 dragon yuan and became a web writer signing training A student of the class.
Today's lectures in the group with the evil spirit in the crotch were copied by the drunkards with a pen. At this time, he realized that there are so many profound skills in writing online articles.
It's just that the message from the system behind made him unbelievable.
"What's going on? Why is this signing training group disbanded? Is it purely deceiving to say that this crotch has a wicked look? He doesn't know how to teach people how to write online articles? My 1000 dragon yuan seems to be wasted." Jianghu Drunk At this time, there is a feeling of being messed up in the wind.
(End of this chapter)
The middle-aged wretched man sitting in front of the computer desk entered the last line of words: "Finally, I will give you some dry goods. Everyone, read them carefully and write them down in your notebook. The main line can only be in growth (including difficulties, feelings, upgrades, farming, etc.) ) and Suspense.
A book can have multiple main lines, but each main line corresponds to only one ultimate goal.Each thread should run throughout the book.
A book must have at least two to three main lines, and the world plot can be regarded as one main line.Upgrades are based on level promotion, and suspense is based on suspense.
The essence of upgrading is the improvement of social status, which can be reflected in multiple aspects such as treatment, fame, power, wealth, confidentiality level, and enemy level.The essence of suspense is what happened under the current worldview, which is impossible but happened.
The goal is the ending that the author wants the protagonist to reach, which is different from the protagonist's own motivation.Well, all newcomers and authors, today's lecture is over here first, the meeting is adjourned! "
The middle-aged wretched man sent the last sentence, then he got up and stretched, and said to himself: "Don't say it, I'm really tired after half an hour of lectures, it's a pity that everyone in the group It’s a rookie among rookies, I made a fool of myself, and I actually took it seriously.”
At this time, two middle-aged men who were also relatively wretched walked in from outside the door. One of the middle-aged men A said to his crotch with a demonic look: "Fan Tong, are we done with the matter? We can withdraw. The money has been transferred to an offshore bank.
Even if the Longguo officials track it down in the future, they will not be able to recover. If they cheated for two more days, they could still make another sum of money, but it is almost impossible to hide it. Now the total amount of funds is more than 100 million, which is almost , This amount of money is enough for us to be chic for a while.
Fan Tong, you are in charge of disbanding the signing training class for online writers, and then you don’t use this card, here, use this new card. "Man A handed over a new calling card.
The crotch said with a demonic air: "Okay, I'll go and disband the contract training group, and then let's change to another place. Hehe, it's still easy for these newcomers to make money, unlike those old-timers who are on the street. No more salt."
On the other hand, Yang Gao witnessed the whole process of teaching in the group with a monster in the crotch.
I have to say that there are three points of truth and seven points of falseness in the words that the crotch is evil. It still sounds a bit unreasonable. The highest state of nonsense is that even I firmly believe that it is correct.
This made him, who has no experience in writing web articles, mesmerized, as if opening the door to a new world.
"Is this the true strength of a professional team? As the saying goes, don't do porcelain work without diamonds. This professional team really has two brushes."
However, although Yang Gao carefully wrote down the evil spirit in the crotch and talked about those dry things in the group, after all, it was only a general direction, and he had more detailed and in-depth questions to ask about the evil spirit in the crotch.
So I clicked on the avatar of the group leader who has a monster in his crotch, and asked to add a friend with a monster in his crotch.
At this time, although the evil spirit in the crotch has stopped lecturing in the group, the members of the group where the online writers signed the training class are still chatting constantly.
"Do you think the dry stuff that the group leader talked about today is useful? Could it be fooling us? Any of you added the group leader's Fat Goose account, and I added the group leader, but the group leader hasn't agreed with my friend yet. Apply."
"I think there are dry goods, and they are very incisive, but we still need their help at the beginning of the writing. We will not be able to learn that kind of skill for a while. We can only write more and practice more, and accumulate more writing experience. Transform the experience that the group owner said into our own."
"You didn't add the group leader? Although I added the group leader, but I asked the group leader a question, he hasn't replied to me yet."
"Upstairs, maybe the host is tired from the lecture just now. You can write down the lecture content in the group first, and then go back and study it carefully. The class that the host of the group gave today is really something."
"Brothers here, have any of you signed a contract after being guided by the group leader?"
"Yesterday, I asked the group owner when to guide me to sign the contract. The group owner said it wasn't my turn yet, and told me to wait patiently."
At this time, Yang Gao was looking at the group chat, and was about to speak to ask when the group owner would guide him to sign a contract. Suddenly, there was a beeping sound. Yang Gao found out that the system had sent a message, and Yang Gao clicked immediately. Opened to see, but was taken aback.
System message: Dear user, hello, the Fat Goose Group "Internet Author Signing Training Class" you are in has been disbanded by the group owner's crotch. If there is any inconvenience caused to you, please forgive me.
Yang Gao stared wide-eyed at the news that the online author's contract training class was disbanded. He was completely stunned, still unwilling to believe it was true.
"??? What's going on? Why was the training group disbanded? Could it be that the group leader disbanded because of the evil spirit in his crotch? Yes, only the group owner has the authority to disband the fat goose group, but why did he disband the fat goose group? ? Could it be that he is a liar?"
Yang Gao suddenly felt a huge sense of uneasiness, and this uneasiness became more and more intense, which could not be dispelled.
"The crotch has a wicked look, so it's not really a liar, is it? Then my 1000 dragon yuan was wasted like this? The 1000 dragon yuan was cheated, it's not the most important thing, the key is that without him to guide the signing, I am alone How to sign a contract, what should I do." Yang Gao burned inside all of a sudden.
At this time, the writers, who were also students in the training course signed by online writers like Yang Gao, were also very shocked. Some of them had already tried to call and contact You Qi in the crotch, but they couldn't reach anyone, and the mobile phone number was empty. Number.
At this time, all the students in the group panicked. They knew that they had encountered a scammer. They used the contract training as a pretext to lure a large number of new writers to pay to join the contract training group. After collecting a large amount of funds, Just disappeared suddenly, evaporated from the world.
Some people even went to check the IP address of the monster in the crotch, and tragically found that the IP address was outside the country. This team is definitely premeditated and very sophisticated in their work.
At this time, a group of authors who were deceived went to the Qihang post bar to post.
On the Qihang post bar, there is a title called "The crotch is evil, you pay me back my hard-earned money!" "Under the post, most of the deceived authors left messages under the post.
"There is a monster in the crotch, you come out on the horse, you can't be too shameless, you charged me 1000 dragon yuan, but the group disbanded when they said they would disband. If you don't give me an explanation, I will call the police!
Don't think that you can't be caught outside the country, you have cheated so many people that the Dragon Kingdom officials can't ignore it! "
"Oh my god, there is a monster in the crotch, give us an explanation, there is still Qiye, you have killed us, if it wasn't for the monster in the crotch and the screenshot of your friend, how could I easily participate in this kind of signing What about training? Seven nights, you need to give us an explanation!"
"Upstairs, I'm afraid it's not that Youqi in the crotch and Qiye are secretly cooperating to make huge profits! Qiye, come out quickly, or I will report to Qihang Chinese website that you colluded with others to make huge profits!"
"Hey, I'm really speechless. This kind of unconscionable black-hearted money has to be earned. Although 1000 dragon yuan is not much, I can't swallow this breath. I wish you have a son who doesn't have pussy eyes and goes to the toilet. toilet,
Buying cans without pull rings, buying milk tea without straws, eating watermelons are all watermelon seeds, people will always be cut in line, and will never be able to squeeze on the bus. "
"Hey, there is a monster in the crotch. It is said that he is the old author of lv5 on Qihang Chinese website, and he also knows Qiye. Now I want to ask Qiye. The monster in the crotch uses your sign to defraud you. Do you care about this matter? I will call the police!"
"Qiye, hurry up and explain why you have a friend seat if you have a monster in your crotch. He is using your sign to cheat. Now you can't find anyone with a monster in your crotch. You must compensate us for the loss!"
On the other side, in a certain room.
The famous martial arts master Jianghu Drunk Ke sat in front of the computer desk, watching the disbandment message sent by the system after the contracted training class of the online writer was disbanded.
That's right, Jianghu Zuke has changed his career and is currently trying to enter the web literature industry. Since the last hype, he has made up his mind to engage in the web literature industry.
After he determined the classification of the novel before and wrote the outline of a few hundred words, he began to write the text.Then he uploaded the [-]-word manuscript to Qihang Chinese website. Three days later, Qihang Chinese website sent a text message to inform him that his work could not be signed for the time being.
This made Jianghu drunken mind a little confused. He is confident that the manuscript he wrote is very beautiful, the plot is not bloody, and it is pleasing to read. The first few chapters are the manuscript after he has repeatedly polished it , representing the current highest level of drunkards.
"It's unscientific. This manuscript has been reposted and polished by me, and I have also passed it on to Brother Bai Yun for reading. Brother Bai Yun thinks that my writing skills this time have improved a lot compared to before. Spectrum.
Originally, I wanted to catch Qiye's popularity, but it turned out to be a good thing, I couldn't sign a contract even if I signed a contract, it's still rubbish! "Jianghu drunk complained at the beginning.
Just when Jianghu Drunk was about to change the beginning, he saw in a group of fat geese that a newcomer author was posting an advertisement with a monster in the crotch. He saw the monster in the crotch and claimed that paying 1000 dragon yuan would sign the contract Train the students in the group, and sign a one-on-one guidance package.
Especially the Jianghu drunken man also saw the monster in the crotch and claimed to be friends with Qiye, and there were screenshots as evidence, which made him let down his guard even more, so he hurriedly paid 1000 dragon yuan and became a web writer signing training A student of the class.
Today's lectures in the group with the evil spirit in the crotch were copied by the drunkards with a pen. At this time, he realized that there are so many profound skills in writing online articles.
It's just that the message from the system behind made him unbelievable.
"What's going on? Why is this signing training group disbanded? Is it purely deceiving to say that this crotch has a wicked look? He doesn't know how to teach people how to write online articles? My 1000 dragon yuan seems to be wasted." Jianghu Drunk At this time, there is a feeling of being messed up in the wind.
(End of this chapter)
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