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Chapter 413 Poetry Routine
Chapter 410 Four Poetry Routine

Li Junge said with a smile: "'The crowd dare not speak clearly, and throw money secretly to tell people far away', this shy and longing, worrying about gain and loss must be described!"

Qiu girl clapped her hands: "Oh, don't say it's true, this look needs to be changed, just being focused and serious is not justified!"

Li Junge covered his forehead with his hands: "You are guarding Er Zhun every day, so of course you can't understand this kind of mood. You have to bring in the mood you felt when you were painting alone in the Shudu studio!"

Qiu girl blushed and wanted to hit him with a pen: "Oh, you are so annoying!"

Xiaozhi smiled and said: "I can't read the book anymore because of your troubles. I can't afford to provoke and hide!"

After speaking, I ran to another pavilion with my notebook.

Qiu girl said: "Look! It's all your fault!"

Li Junge said: "How can you blame me? Hey, what about your works during this period? Turn them out and let me appreciate them."

Qiu Yatou said: "That's just right. Writing poems is my weakness. Two days ago, the master called and praised you so much that he praised you so much that he scolded me for writing it, saying that Piwa wrote it in minutes. It’s even better than what I came up with in a semester! Do you still want to live? Please teach me quickly.”

After speaking, he opened the portfolio, and inside was a stack of watercolor sketches.

Li Junge picked one at random, it was an ancient courtyard in Pan'ao Township.

On the left side of the courtyard is a white wall with a fan-shaped decorative window above it, covered by green bamboos outside the window.

On the right side of the courtyard is a wooden structure house with blue tiles and stone steps. There are two stone drums beside the stone steps, and there are two pots of jade and clear orchids on it, which is antique.

The courtyard is empty, paved with bluestone slabs, and there is a moon gate at the end. On the left side of the gate is a tree of old plums, and on the right side of the gate are several plantains.

The picture is watery and empty, giving people a quiet and ethereal feeling.

Li Junge said: "Let's take this painting as an example. As soon as I turned to this painting, the phrase 'banana leaves rolling in an empty garden' popped up in my mind."

"Sentences like this are rare, so we can't let them go. Then we will use them as eyes, and the rest of the sentences will revolve around them."

"There is an old ancestor of painting poems, Wang Wei. He is a great painter himself. Everyone says that he is "there are paintings in poems, and poems in paintings." OK."

Qiu girl nodded secretly.

Li Junge continued: "It doesn't need to be too complicated to write a poem on a painting. It is enough to accurately express the artistic conception and charm of the painting. There is no need to use allusions or deep ideological connotations. For example, "the bright moon shines among the pines, and the clear spring stone flows upwards" can also be used. Become the eternal swan song."

Qiu girl seemed to realize something in her heart, and her eyes began to brighten.

Li Junge said with a smile: "There are many places in this painting that can be put into poetry, such as the bamboo outside the window, the moon gate, plum blossoms, plantains, carved windows, blue tiles, wooden floors, stone steps, stone pestles, and pillars..."

"However, if we want to take care of the charm of this painting, we must choose a few scenes that best reflect the emptiness of the painting. I think it is the bamboo leaves outside the window, the moss marks on the stone steps, and the orchids and plantains."

"The last sentence is already there. Let's deliberate on the first three sentences. First, find a small confrontation, such as green bamboo leaves and green moss marks. It's not bad, isn't it?"

Qiu Yatou nodded in agreement, and then said: "But this is not poetry!"

Li Junge smiled and said: "Take your time, the bamboo leaves are green through the window, and the moss marks are green, it's probably what you can think of now, right?"

Qiu girl smiled and said: "It's not as good as you, just now I was thinking of green bamboo leaves through the window, hehe, how do you know?"

Li Junge smiled and said: "Because I also came here like this, but if we observe carefully, we will find that the moss marks are small round spots one by one, so can we replace 'moss marks' with 'moss money', so that Is it more visual?"

Qiu girl smiled and said, "It's true!"

Li Junge said: "Continue to practice calligraphy, how do you get to the next level? If this level can be reflected in the poem, won't it be more layered? For example, if you want to write the thickness of the moss, you can use the word 'pressure', to To write that it blends with the stone steps, you can use the character 'Qin'; if you want to describe its frivolity, you can use the character 'Pu'; in short, if you write the static scenery in motion, isn't it a higher level of artistic conception?"

Qiu girl clapped her hands and cheered: "Exactly, then pick a word!"

Li Junge said: "If it were me, I would use the word 'rust', because our poem is to describe a slow change in the empty courtyard. This word can not only reflect the slow process of moss eroding the stone steps, but also reflect the The moss and the stone steps are firmly integrated, and it can also echo with the word 'money', so for the time being, this sentence is set as 'moss, money, rust and green'."

"It doesn't matter one, three, five, two, four, six are clear. The characters of Jie and Qian don't rhyme, so they must be replaced with the flat tones of 'bi', 'ji', and 'level'. Finding words with the same meaning but different rhymes is also a poem. a feat."

Qiu Yatou asked: "Level is a word with a flat tone?"

Li Junge said with a smile: "Ping Shang Qu 元, the level character is Yangping in the modern pinyin language system, but it is 元 in ancient sounds and Jiachuan dialect, and it is included in the tones."

Qiu Yatou smiled and said, "Then use the word 'level', it's not particularly uncommon."

Li Junge smiled and said: "The next step is to be simpler. The Shanglian takes care of the confrontation and needs to be changed. Money is a concrete term, so it is not appropriate to use bamboo shadows. The picture is empty, and the bamboo leaves seem to be full of water vapor. The tip is still dripping water, we replaced it with the word 'bamboo rain', isn't the image richer?"

Qiu girl said: "Yes, yes, yes!"

Li Junge smiled and said: "The text seems to look at the mountains and not like the flat, and some images can be used in reverse, so I replaced the word 'wear' with the word 'fen' to create an abrupt feeling for readers. What about it? Oh, it’s not the rain, but the greenery, doesn’t it look more fun and reflect a kind of interest?”

Qiu girl praised again and again, and said: "Then these two sentences are settled, 'Bamboo rain divides the window into green, and the moss is rusty green', right?" A star and a half."

Li Junge nodded and said: "Let's do this for the time being. Next, let's deliberate on the third sentence. The fourth sentence is banana leaves rolling in an empty courtyard, and it is about space. Can we find another way in the third sentence and start with time? Time , is there anything that can stand against the word 'empty court'?"

Qiu girl thought for a long time but couldn't think of it, Li Junge reminded with a smile: "The mist is thick and the clouds are sad..."

Qiu girl's eyes brightened: "Yongzhou! Yongzhou confronts the empty court! It's wonderful!"

Li Junge smiled and said: "By the way, let's see, the three lines of this poem that have been finalized now are all visual impressions, so for the remaining line, can we change the routine and start from other places, such as..."

After speaking, the finger pointed at the two pots of orchids beside the stone steps: "Smell!"

Qiu girl laughed loudly: "I know! It's good to use the word 'Shu' as opposed to 'juan' as a verb!" The bamboo rain divides the window into green, and the moss and moss are rusty green. Lan Fang Shu Yong day, banana leaves roll empty Court.' Hahaha, it's a poem!"

Li Junge said with a smile: "It's about the same, but if I have to choose, I would rather choose the word 'Xiao', which not only describes the diffuse state of orchid fragrance in the air, but also describes the comfort of orchid fragrance. It makes people pass through the hot summer without knowing it; it also improves the direct perception from the simple visual sense of smell to the spiritual experience. Although the words "shu" and "juan" are not as strict as the words "shu" and "juan" in the antithesis, the meaning is richer. We write poems , I can’t fight to the death, because the text hurts the meaning. Therefore, under the balance of the two, I would rather choose the word 'Xiao'."

Girl Qiu suddenly noticed a problem: "Brother Erpi, there seems to be something wrong with the scroll in the fourth sentence. The scroll is from the outside to the inside, but the banana leaf grows from the inside to the outside."

Li Junge smiled and said, "Then what word do you think is better?"

Qiu girl thought for a long time and said, "I think it's better to use the word 'exhibition'."

Li Junge said: "It's good to be able to see this level. Sometimes the sentences that come from instinct are inherently problematic, so we have to think about it. The word 'exhibition' is better than the word 'juan'."

Qiu girl said: "Then this poem is finished? Hahaha, it really doesn't take much effort! Bamboo rain divides the window into green, moss and moss are rusty and green. Lanfang fades away forever, and banana leaves spread out in the empty courtyard."

Li Junge said: "'It's not hard to see people carrying burdens, but it's hard to carry burdens yourself', girl, you still have to practice, but this is the way of thinking."

After finishing speaking, he sighed: "In fact, there are many problems in this poem. For example, the first two sentences take care of the imagery, but lose the naturalness; for example, 'Lanfang', in addition to being unworkable against banana leaves, is also used in daily life. There are too many. Poetry calls this kind of characters "vulgar characters" and should be avoided as much as possible. Of course, if you are a master who can write "the desert is solitary, the long river is setting the sun", then you can use it however you like. I did not say."

Qiu girl laughed loudly: "Brother Erpi, are you jealous? Hahaha, I can hear the deep jealousy!"

Li Junge couldn't help but sighed again: "Chinese poetry is glorious forever. If one person can have ten characters in the history of poetry, that's already amazing. The demeanor of the predecessors, the younger generations can only look up to! Emperor Qianlong, fight Small is literati elite education, there are tens of thousands of poems in a lifetime, do you know any of them? Therefore, people like Li Du belong to a realm that cannot be touched in a lifetime, and you can only be jealous."

Qiu Yatou giggled and said, "My requirements are not that high, as long as my poems can match my paintings."

Li Junge smiled and said: "If you don't accumulate steps, you can't reach thousands of miles. Girl, you are already getting started, so keep working hard. When writing static scenes, the main thing is to highlight the charm, and then to write still lifes in motion, which basically meets the requirements. For example, the sentence "Banana Leaf Spreads the Empty Garden" does it feel like watching a fast shot of plants growing on TV? It makes people feel the taste of time passing slowly? You don't need to think too complicated at the beginning of poetry, it can convey a kind of If the charm can express a kind of emotion, the poem is considered successful.”

Qiu Yatou said to Li Junge with a serious face: "Erpi brother, thank you, you have helped me a lot!"

Li Junge said: "You're welcome. I'll teach you another lesson. You should copy this one down first. Don't panic and try to improve it. This stuff is all about inspiration. The so-called 'articles are made naturally', if you get into the horns, you will be dazed Throw it aside, eat, drink, play, and come back to read it after a while, maybe the inspiration comes again, and I find that many places can be changed again. This is how poems are refined. Etc. If you refine it to the point where you can't change a single word, that's the finished product!"

Qiu Yatou understood it completely, but she asked another question: "Erpi brother, according to what you said, the richer the meaning of the poem, the more difficult the poem is. Can the five-character poem be written one word at a time? ? Two sentences of ten layers?"

Li Junge said with a smile: "This kind of extreme is not unheard of in the history of poetry. The stacking of ten nouns, 'the sound of chickens, the moon in Maodian, and the frost in Banqiao' is a model!"

(End of this chapter)