Excellent hand and heart doctor
Chapter 604 Half Father
Chapter 604 Half Father (Subscription)
"Hit her? Beat her to death?"
Lin Jie didn't believe it at all, and said with a smile: "Miaomiao, the two of you eat and sleep together, and are closer than sisters. You really want me to beat her like this? Eh, what about Kemeng, she is going home now ?”
"I'm willing, I'm too willing, brother, just don't be reluctant."
Lin Miao said angrily: "She knew that I would be angry, so she used the excuse that school will start soon and she wanted to go back to accompany Dad. She went home early this morning."
Seeing that Lin Miao seemed to be really angry, Lin Jie cast his eyes on Zhang Xiaoxiao and asked silently what happened.
Zhang Xiaoxiao chuckled, and said, "The novel written by Kemeng was published on the Internet, and the person who took Miaomiao as the prototype wrote something... how should I put it, it's a bit unpleasant."
"Ajie, you'll know by looking at it yourself."
That's what happened.
Lin Jie said disapprovingly: "That little girl Kemeng is only a high school student, what kind of novel can she write? It would be great if she could write a story clearly."
"As for the description of the characters, it must be very bad. Miaomiao, don't be angry. It is estimated that few people read the novels she wrote."
"Hmph, see for yourself before you talk about it!"
Lin Miao stuffed the laptop into Lin Jie's arms, and ran upstairs angrily.
Seeing this, Zhang Xiaoxiao also covered her mouth and yawned, saying, "I'm going to sleep too. Ajie, I have to admit that this little girl, Mengmeng, still has some talent for writing."
"Ajie, don't go to bed too late, remember to go to bed early."
After another reminder, Zhang Xiaoxiao also went upstairs.
Lin Jie sat on the sofa, turned on the computer, the screen lit up, and what appeared in front of him was the page of a novel called "Never Leave, Never Give Up", written by I Love Pikachu.
He also noticed that the novel already had dozens of comments.
Lin Jie looked through it, and most of the comments were praises like "It's so well written", "It's so good", "This is the best short story I've read this year".
This reminded him that when An Kemeng faced his own disbelief, he retorted that he wanted netizens to judge whether the novel was good or bad.
"Is this girl really good at writing?"
With suspicion, Lin Jie adjusted his posture, leaned comfortably on the back of the sofa, and began to read Chapter 1 with some scrutiny...
The story in the novel starts from the airport.
The protagonist in the article is Lin Anran, a handsome young doctor.
Together with his girlfriend Han Yuxin, he accompanied his younger sister Lin Qingqing who just graduated from high school, and took his pet dog Lele to Zhuhai in western Sichuan Province for a graduation trip.
"This character's name is really worthy of being a girl author."
Lin Jie criticized and continued reading.
I have to say that An Kemeng's storytelling skills are good, and the things she writes are quite attractive, making Lin Jie fall into it unknowingly...
The novel written by An Kemeng did not copy the actual situation at all, but made a lot of revisions.
This allowed Lin Jie to act as a substitute without thinking about the actual situation at the time. He completely read the article written by An Kemeng as an original novel.
While the three of Lin Anran were waiting at the airport, they ran into Han Yuxin's best friend and her boyfriend who were also going on a trip to Zhuhai.
In this way, five people, two men and three women, and a dog, started this extraordinary trip.
Ankemeng's description skills are quite good. The beauty of the bamboo sea, food, and ethnic customs are all well written, making people wish to go to the bamboo sea to experience it immediately.
In the narration of the novel, Lin Anran and others who played here had a very good few days.
In this part, the novel also points out some problems among several people. Because Lin Anran is obsessed with medical skills, busy with work, and neglects his girlfriend and sister, they are somewhat dissatisfied.
Han Yuxin's best friend actually likes Lin Anran the most. The so-called encounter is just her design.
My girlfriend's boyfriend was vaguely aware of this, and felt hostile towards Lin Anran.
After spending three days like a dream, Lin Anran and the others started hiking.
When camping at night, because of Lin Qingqing's insistence, everyone pitched the camp by the river.
Accidents came suddenly, earthquakes in the middle of the night, and floods also came unexpectedly.
An Kemeng's description of everyone in distress can be said to be quite wonderful, which makes people feel suspenseful from time to time.
Moreover, the dangers encountered were one after another. The actual encounters of Lin Jie and others that night were nothing compared to the ones in the novel.
At the same time, in the dangerous situations again and again, everyone's heart and hidden thoughts are exposed.
Lin Anran never leaves his girlfriend and sister, but when his girlfriend's boyfriend encounters a serious danger, he chooses to escape first...
Lin Jie couldn't stop watching. He watched the ending until he realized that it was already three o'clock in the morning.
After reading the full text, Lin Jie understood why Lin Miao was so angry.
In this novel, Lin Qingqing is described as a self-centered beautiful girl. There are two distresses in the novel, which are caused by her willfulness.
The protagonist Lin Anran even had her right hand severely injured because of her.
Lin Jie also understood why this short story was praised by everyone.
In addition to the exaggeration and descriptions are quite good, the description of the distress that night is also thrilling and fascinating, the response of several people, and the description of human nature are also quite in place, not abrupt.
Especially in the final climax, it was extraordinarily tragic and tear-jerking.
In a landslide, Han Yuxin was unfortunately crushed by a stone on his leg.
When stones rolled down from time to time, Lin Anran had to undergo amputation for Han Yuxin. Although his right hand was injured, he still gritted his teeth and persisted...
However, an aftershock struck, and a huge boulder standing next to it was about to fall slowly.
Han Yuxin yelled for Lin Anran to run away, but Lin Anran remained unmoved and focused on performing surgery on her...
At the time of danger, Lin Qingqing, that best friend, and her best friend's boyfriend resisted the boulder with their bodies...
When Lin Anran rescued Han Yuxin, Lin Qingqing, her best friend, and her best friend's boyfriend were crushed by a huge rock and couldn't escape.
At this time, another rock rolled down...
Between life and death, her best friend's boyfriend yelled "I love you", which stimulated her body's potential, carried the boulder alone, and at the cost of her own life, created a chance for Lin Qingqing and her best friend to escape...
Lin Jie was a little convinced.
Damn, what An Kemeng wrote is really sensational and touching.
This girl really has a talent for writing...
It was past eight o'clock in the morning, and Lin Jie just woke up.
At this time, Lin Miao had already left for work, and Zhang Xiaoxiao took Lele to the park for a walk to exercise.
As for Qin Gang, because he was busy preparing for his marriage, Lin Jie took his leave today and the weekend.
Lin Jie surfed the Internet on his mobile phone, checked the novel, and found that there were already hundreds of comments, many of which were long and highly rated.
He ignored his breakfast and called An Kemeng.
As soon as the connection was made, An Kemeng's eager question came: "Brother Jie, have you read my novel and how do you feel about it?"
"I finished reading your novel overnight last night."
"As for how to write it..."
Lin Jie paused for a while, and praised without hesitation: "Just like medical skills to me, you are very talented in writing, and your writing is really good."
"It's just that your adaptation of the fictional one is too outrageous, right?"
An Kemeng's triumphant and happy laughter came from the phone, and then the voice came out, "Thank you for your great compliment, I am flattered, hehe."
"Although there are more adaptations, the core of the story has not changed, which is 'never leave, never give up'. The characters and plot have changed a lot, mainly to serve this core."
"Brother Jie, I still have a documentary version here, which is recorded strictly according to the facts. This is the accumulated material for writing your biography in the future."
"You think so far!"
Lin Jie snorted, and asked again: "Kimeng, didn't you say before that if you want that hateful person to be included in the novel, you still want to write him to death? But I saw a redemptive hero who died for his beloved. Ah, even more glorious than me as the protagonist."
An Kemeng smiled and said, "That bad guy is dead, I think it would be too much to step on him."
"At the end of the writing, I suddenly wanted to write a more tragic story, so I dealt with it that way."
"Brother Jie, are you moved? When I wrote it, I was in tears."
Lin Jie paused and admitted, "I was a little moved."
"Kimeng, I found that you write novels, it's really good, you can consider it as a career."
"My career ideal is still a doctor, and writing is just my hobby."
An Kemeng said seriously: "Brother Jie, I practice the movements you taught me to exercise the dexterity of my hands every day, and I never slack off every single day."
Lin Jie snorted, but did not continue to persuade.
This is An Kemeng's own choice, and it is naturally based on her wishes.
He didn't forget Lin Miao's attitude last night, and warned: "Kemeng, let me remind you that Miaomiao is so angry that I want to beat you hard. You'd better think of a way to let Miaomiao calm down. "
An Kemeng said in a timid voice: "I didn't do it on purpose, I just wrote that character like that. Also, my sister also has a lot of opinions, because I lost one of her legs. Woooo..."
She pleaded in a pitiful voice: "Brother Jie, please help me."
Lin Jie laughed, and said, "I'm not going to help you, you can solve the trouble you caused by yourself..."
After breakfast and lack of sleep, Lin Jie didn't bother to go to medical school anymore.
He thought of a workaround, and started a video directly in the study to have a one-on-one video chat with the students who were in line this morning.
After experimenting, Lin Jie felt that this method was very convenient, and the effect was surprisingly good.
It may be used frequently in the future.
Just as Lin Jie was talking with the second student, Zhang Xiaoxiao knocked on the door and said with a complicated expression: "Ajie, a person who looks very similar to you is here, he should be your half-brother." that brother."
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(End of this chapter)
"Hit her? Beat her to death?"
Lin Jie didn't believe it at all, and said with a smile: "Miaomiao, the two of you eat and sleep together, and are closer than sisters. You really want me to beat her like this? Eh, what about Kemeng, she is going home now ?”
"I'm willing, I'm too willing, brother, just don't be reluctant."
Lin Miao said angrily: "She knew that I would be angry, so she used the excuse that school will start soon and she wanted to go back to accompany Dad. She went home early this morning."
Seeing that Lin Miao seemed to be really angry, Lin Jie cast his eyes on Zhang Xiaoxiao and asked silently what happened.
Zhang Xiaoxiao chuckled, and said, "The novel written by Kemeng was published on the Internet, and the person who took Miaomiao as the prototype wrote something... how should I put it, it's a bit unpleasant."
"Ajie, you'll know by looking at it yourself."
That's what happened.
Lin Jie said disapprovingly: "That little girl Kemeng is only a high school student, what kind of novel can she write? It would be great if she could write a story clearly."
"As for the description of the characters, it must be very bad. Miaomiao, don't be angry. It is estimated that few people read the novels she wrote."
"Hmph, see for yourself before you talk about it!"
Lin Miao stuffed the laptop into Lin Jie's arms, and ran upstairs angrily.
Seeing this, Zhang Xiaoxiao also covered her mouth and yawned, saying, "I'm going to sleep too. Ajie, I have to admit that this little girl, Mengmeng, still has some talent for writing."
"Ajie, don't go to bed too late, remember to go to bed early."
After another reminder, Zhang Xiaoxiao also went upstairs.
Lin Jie sat on the sofa, turned on the computer, the screen lit up, and what appeared in front of him was the page of a novel called "Never Leave, Never Give Up", written by I Love Pikachu.
He also noticed that the novel already had dozens of comments.
Lin Jie looked through it, and most of the comments were praises like "It's so well written", "It's so good", "This is the best short story I've read this year".
This reminded him that when An Kemeng faced his own disbelief, he retorted that he wanted netizens to judge whether the novel was good or bad.
"Is this girl really good at writing?"
With suspicion, Lin Jie adjusted his posture, leaned comfortably on the back of the sofa, and began to read Chapter 1 with some scrutiny...
The story in the novel starts from the airport.
The protagonist in the article is Lin Anran, a handsome young doctor.
Together with his girlfriend Han Yuxin, he accompanied his younger sister Lin Qingqing who just graduated from high school, and took his pet dog Lele to Zhuhai in western Sichuan Province for a graduation trip.
"This character's name is really worthy of being a girl author."
Lin Jie criticized and continued reading.
I have to say that An Kemeng's storytelling skills are good, and the things she writes are quite attractive, making Lin Jie fall into it unknowingly...
The novel written by An Kemeng did not copy the actual situation at all, but made a lot of revisions.
This allowed Lin Jie to act as a substitute without thinking about the actual situation at the time. He completely read the article written by An Kemeng as an original novel.
While the three of Lin Anran were waiting at the airport, they ran into Han Yuxin's best friend and her boyfriend who were also going on a trip to Zhuhai.
In this way, five people, two men and three women, and a dog, started this extraordinary trip.
Ankemeng's description skills are quite good. The beauty of the bamboo sea, food, and ethnic customs are all well written, making people wish to go to the bamboo sea to experience it immediately.
In the narration of the novel, Lin Anran and others who played here had a very good few days.
In this part, the novel also points out some problems among several people. Because Lin Anran is obsessed with medical skills, busy with work, and neglects his girlfriend and sister, they are somewhat dissatisfied.
Han Yuxin's best friend actually likes Lin Anran the most. The so-called encounter is just her design.
My girlfriend's boyfriend was vaguely aware of this, and felt hostile towards Lin Anran.
After spending three days like a dream, Lin Anran and the others started hiking.
When camping at night, because of Lin Qingqing's insistence, everyone pitched the camp by the river.
Accidents came suddenly, earthquakes in the middle of the night, and floods also came unexpectedly.
An Kemeng's description of everyone in distress can be said to be quite wonderful, which makes people feel suspenseful from time to time.
Moreover, the dangers encountered were one after another. The actual encounters of Lin Jie and others that night were nothing compared to the ones in the novel.
At the same time, in the dangerous situations again and again, everyone's heart and hidden thoughts are exposed.
Lin Anran never leaves his girlfriend and sister, but when his girlfriend's boyfriend encounters a serious danger, he chooses to escape first...
Lin Jie couldn't stop watching. He watched the ending until he realized that it was already three o'clock in the morning.
After reading the full text, Lin Jie understood why Lin Miao was so angry.
In this novel, Lin Qingqing is described as a self-centered beautiful girl. There are two distresses in the novel, which are caused by her willfulness.
The protagonist Lin Anran even had her right hand severely injured because of her.
Lin Jie also understood why this short story was praised by everyone.
In addition to the exaggeration and descriptions are quite good, the description of the distress that night is also thrilling and fascinating, the response of several people, and the description of human nature are also quite in place, not abrupt.
Especially in the final climax, it was extraordinarily tragic and tear-jerking.
In a landslide, Han Yuxin was unfortunately crushed by a stone on his leg.
When stones rolled down from time to time, Lin Anran had to undergo amputation for Han Yuxin. Although his right hand was injured, he still gritted his teeth and persisted...
However, an aftershock struck, and a huge boulder standing next to it was about to fall slowly.
Han Yuxin yelled for Lin Anran to run away, but Lin Anran remained unmoved and focused on performing surgery on her...
At the time of danger, Lin Qingqing, that best friend, and her best friend's boyfriend resisted the boulder with their bodies...
When Lin Anran rescued Han Yuxin, Lin Qingqing, her best friend, and her best friend's boyfriend were crushed by a huge rock and couldn't escape.
At this time, another rock rolled down...
Between life and death, her best friend's boyfriend yelled "I love you", which stimulated her body's potential, carried the boulder alone, and at the cost of her own life, created a chance for Lin Qingqing and her best friend to escape...
Lin Jie was a little convinced.
Damn, what An Kemeng wrote is really sensational and touching.
This girl really has a talent for writing...
It was past eight o'clock in the morning, and Lin Jie just woke up.
At this time, Lin Miao had already left for work, and Zhang Xiaoxiao took Lele to the park for a walk to exercise.
As for Qin Gang, because he was busy preparing for his marriage, Lin Jie took his leave today and the weekend.
Lin Jie surfed the Internet on his mobile phone, checked the novel, and found that there were already hundreds of comments, many of which were long and highly rated.
He ignored his breakfast and called An Kemeng.
As soon as the connection was made, An Kemeng's eager question came: "Brother Jie, have you read my novel and how do you feel about it?"
"I finished reading your novel overnight last night."
"As for how to write it..."
Lin Jie paused for a while, and praised without hesitation: "Just like medical skills to me, you are very talented in writing, and your writing is really good."
"It's just that your adaptation of the fictional one is too outrageous, right?"
An Kemeng's triumphant and happy laughter came from the phone, and then the voice came out, "Thank you for your great compliment, I am flattered, hehe."
"Although there are more adaptations, the core of the story has not changed, which is 'never leave, never give up'. The characters and plot have changed a lot, mainly to serve this core."
"Brother Jie, I still have a documentary version here, which is recorded strictly according to the facts. This is the accumulated material for writing your biography in the future."
"You think so far!"
Lin Jie snorted, and asked again: "Kimeng, didn't you say before that if you want that hateful person to be included in the novel, you still want to write him to death? But I saw a redemptive hero who died for his beloved. Ah, even more glorious than me as the protagonist."
An Kemeng smiled and said, "That bad guy is dead, I think it would be too much to step on him."
"At the end of the writing, I suddenly wanted to write a more tragic story, so I dealt with it that way."
"Brother Jie, are you moved? When I wrote it, I was in tears."
Lin Jie paused and admitted, "I was a little moved."
"Kimeng, I found that you write novels, it's really good, you can consider it as a career."
"My career ideal is still a doctor, and writing is just my hobby."
An Kemeng said seriously: "Brother Jie, I practice the movements you taught me to exercise the dexterity of my hands every day, and I never slack off every single day."
Lin Jie snorted, but did not continue to persuade.
This is An Kemeng's own choice, and it is naturally based on her wishes.
He didn't forget Lin Miao's attitude last night, and warned: "Kemeng, let me remind you that Miaomiao is so angry that I want to beat you hard. You'd better think of a way to let Miaomiao calm down. "
An Kemeng said in a timid voice: "I didn't do it on purpose, I just wrote that character like that. Also, my sister also has a lot of opinions, because I lost one of her legs. Woooo..."
She pleaded in a pitiful voice: "Brother Jie, please help me."
Lin Jie laughed, and said, "I'm not going to help you, you can solve the trouble you caused by yourself..."
After breakfast and lack of sleep, Lin Jie didn't bother to go to medical school anymore.
He thought of a workaround, and started a video directly in the study to have a one-on-one video chat with the students who were in line this morning.
After experimenting, Lin Jie felt that this method was very convenient, and the effect was surprisingly good.
It may be used frequently in the future.
Just as Lin Jie was talking with the second student, Zhang Xiaoxiao knocked on the door and said with a complicated expression: "Ajie, a person who looks very similar to you is here, he should be your half-brother." that brother."
Thanks to the book friend "Bloodthirsty の God" for the reward of 1000, and the book friend "hyb1967" for the reward of 100, thank you for your support! !
Ask for rewards, subscriptions, monthly tickets and recommended support! !
(End of this chapter)
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