My first love is so sweet

Chapter 218 Dialogue
Regarding Jiang Zhe's self-introduction, Su Xiaoya did not show any objection, but was a little shy.

This is the first meeting with the editor, so I brought my family here, isn't it a bit inappropriate?
Weiwei just sighed: "You two couples are really a good match! It feels like you walked out of a comic! By the way, you are not from the entertainment industry, are you?"

She stared at Jiang Zhe and asked eagerly.

There is no way, Jiang Zhe's face is very handsome, coupled with his mature and unrestrained temperament, it really makes women want to stop.It feels like a well-trained idol trainee.

Jiang Zhe shook his head with a smile: "That's not true, she and I are both high school seniors. There is no plan to debut for now!"

"I feel that if you debut in the future, you will definitely be popular!"

Staring at Jiang Zhe with a slight smile, he said, half of it was a compliment, and half of it was indeed from the heart.

You must know that no matter how much you watch idols on TV, you can only see them but not touch them.

How can the sense of shock be as strong as the handsome guy you see in reality?

Jiang Zhe coughed, wondering if the editor was suffering from nymphopathia.

"Hehe, let's talk about this later! By the way, since you have arrived, let's order first!"

He reached out to the waiter near the front desk: "Waiter!"

The waiter hurried over with the menu.

Jiang Zhe and Su Xiaoya were polite to each other, and then ordered a few dishes that looked good.

It's also his first time visiting this place, so he doesn't know how the western food is.You can only order regular dishes such as steak and vegetable salad.

But Weiwei took the menu and ordered several more dishes.

"You're welcome, of course I'll entertain you all the way here! The western food in this restaurant is still very good, you can try it!"

Vivi said with a smile.

In one sentence, it means to treat guests by name.

Jiang Zhe nodded lightly, among other things, at least seeing his handwriting is quite comfortable.

Taking advantage of the time when the food was served, Weiwei chatted with Su Xiaoya about books.

"Miss Asuka, may I ask if "Children of the Wind" is your first novel?"

Weiwei asked with a smile, her gentle face made people feel good.

Su Xiaoya nodded, "Well, yes."

"Sure enough!"

Weiwei nodded, "Actually, to be honest, you can feel it when you first read it. You are not particularly sophisticated in writing. But your literary skills are relatively solid, and the story is also very attractive and very in line with the current situation. It is a hobby of young people. If we continue to develop it in the future, we will definitely achieve great things!"

The words were full of encouragement, and it was obvious that she was very optimistic about Su Xiaoya, a rookie in the literary world.

Jiang Zhe listened verbatim from the sidelines, and nodded silently.

Although Weiwei came here to discuss business, the relationship between the editor and the author is more about cooperation.

So instead of criticizing the low price of works, Weiwei chose to encourage and try to establish a long-term cooperative relationship.

After all, if you can cultivate an excellent author, the benefits will be long-term.

From this point of view, the editor named Weiwei is very admirable in terms of personality and way of doing things.

"However, to be honest, there are still some problems in the work. We call them poisonous spots, and I still hope that you can make some changes in the future."

Weiwei changed the subject and began to mention key issues.

Su Xiaoya also quickly sat up straight with a serious expression.

"Please advise!"

Publication of literary works must go through a large number of revisions, which is impossible.

Jiang Zhe was a little thankful that what he published was an online novel, and he didn't intend to make money from it, so he could write whatever he wanted, and he didn't need to consider the editor's opinion at all.

But then again, the only problem with his work now is that the updates are too slow.

If all the readers who promised to send him blades could come as promised, he could make a fortune by opening a hardware store by now.

On the other side, Weiwei is tirelessly guiding Su Xiaoya's writing.

"You see, your works are mainly aimed at young readers. The story is very sweet, but it always feels a little less exciting. The biggest problem is-why there are only two male protagonists!"

Weiwei looked depressed and dissatisfied.

"Hey? Isn't two enough? I think... this is already a bit of a play."

"Not enough! Girls nowadays hope that men all over the world will revolve around me! Therefore, although the established two male protagonists are well described, I hope to add some supporting roles with extraordinary identities. For example, a certain The prince of the country is handsome and handsome with hundreds of billions of dollars, but he is willing to give up everything for the heroine! Ah, you can’t really give up, just pretend, you still need money.”

"There will be a few behind-the-scenes bosses of mysterious forces, superstars and the like."

Weiwei spoke more and more vigorously, and her face became excited.

"Female-oriented novels must create a feeling of being loved by thousands of people!"

Su Xiaoya felt her head spinning.

What she wanted to describe at the beginning was pure love, without considering so many messy things.

"But...that's very unrealistic! In reality, such a thing will never happen."

Weiwei said seriously: "Remember, art comes from life and is higher than life!"

From what she said, Jiang Zhe judged that the editor was indeed a professional, and most likely she was a house girl without a boyfriend.

I must have read shoujo manga or Marysu romance novels on weekdays.

Because she directs all the development plots of this type of Mary Sue.

Although the novel written by Su Xiaoya also has a plot of Mary Su, but overall it is very pure and ambiguous.

If you look at it according to Weiwei's guidance method, it is purely ambiguous.

Listening to Weiwei's words, Su Xiaoya's expression became more and more tangled.Two small hands kept twisting the clothes under the table, obviously she didn't quite agree with Weiwei's statement.

But she didn't know how to refute the editor's words, so she was very distressed.

Seeing this, Jiang Zhe pondered for a while in his mind.

What is Su Xiaoya writing novels for?

Money or dream?

Of course it was because of a dream.

Jiang Zhe had the answer in his heart.

He admitted that the things that Weiwei taught were indeed the most popular routines of young Mary Suwen.

However, that was not what Su Xiaoya wanted to write.

This can be seen from Su Xiaoya's expression.

So, it's time to stand up and speak out for her.

(End of this chapter)