Falling in love with Ome

Chapter 103 Learn from each other? (seeking subscription)
"Is it still a fairy?"

"No, just like you, with an urban background. I thought about it carefully and found that our books are still slightly similar."

Hearing what he said, Yun Shuqian was also a little curious.

She knew that Song Jiamu's last book was about Xianxia, ​​and she had written about Xianxia before, but her grades were poor. After all, fictional worlds require pen skills, and the urban background is naturally more substituting, so it is more suitable for novices.

Song Jiamu also sat up straight, took out the laptop from his bag and put it on his lap, and opened his document.

Unlike Yun Shuqian, what he writes is not a daily article, and has a clear main line and upgrade route. At this time, an outline is needed, and the worldview and so on must be done in detail.

"Look, I have made an outline, world view and upgrade route of more than 3 words."

"..."

Yun Shuqian, who never wrote outlines and worldviews, felt that she was so inferior. For the first time, she felt that Song Jiamu was more serious about something than her.

She tilted her head curiously like she did when she was a child, and the two were so close that Song Jiamu could easily smell her hair.

"About 30 years ago, the rules of the world were rewritten, and human history changed dramatically. Human beings, who were originally distinguished by hair color, skin color, nationality, and gender, suddenly had to use completely different indicators. distinguished."

"That is to say, the races that are no different from humans in appearance, but have decisive differences in physiology-blood race."

"Is it a vampire?" Yun Shuqian blinked and asked.

"Yes, today, blood clans can be seen everywhere. Family members, neighbors, colleagues, and lovers may all suddenly become blood clans and attack others one day. This is the worldview."

Song Jiamu continued: "Since the appearance of the blood race, the world has undergone various changes, such as the Human Relief Alliance. They believe that the blood race is the evolution of human beings, and they actively promote the human rights activities of the blood race. They are considered radicals, and there are chaebols behind them. Supported by other forces, there are also hunters, who believe that the blood race is the first category of disaster creatures, and advocate eradication..."

"The most fundamental contradiction is that blood races are also ordinary people. It is a phenomenon that can happen to anyone at any time. This makes the problem quite difficult. No one wants to be wiped out as a pure disaster, so at this time... "

Song Jiamu talked about his world view and power settings, and Yun Shuqian was dizzy, but he had to admit that he still made these settings very detailed.

It wasn't until Song Jiamu started telling the story he was going to write that Yun Shuqian became interested.

"This is probably the background of the story. Of course, it will unfold slowly. The beginning of the story begins with the mutation of the protagonist."

Song Jiamu is not purely new either. It is very important to write the first three chapters of an online article. If they are all set in plug, it will definitely be a hit.

"One day the male protagonist suddenly mutated, and then the female protagonist came to him as an inspector. Her job was to observe and record all his changes. During such cohabitation days, the two of them deepened their relationship. This is the emotional line, and the main thread is the female protagonist. Guide the male protagonist into this brand new world, the male protagonist is actually a unique natural born blood, this is his golden finger."

"The main line in the early stage is the daily research of vampire mutation to control, plus the daily life of warming up with the heroine, and then slowly come into contact with the more mysterious world. One of the core research is called 'blood inhibitor', which can suppress the blood-sucking impulse Even healing, this is a major event that changes the world and ignites the flames of new disputes."

"Oh... I probably know your story." Yun Shuqian nodded.

Song Jiamu's writing is still relatively mainstream, and some popular male-language articles are also read, such as secrets and so on. The previous daily chapters are also very interesting, and the story unfolds slowly.

"Then what do you think?" Song Jiamu asked.

"Well."

Yun Shuqian thought for a while: "I can't give any advice about the world view, but I think the relationship line is a bit thin."

"I can't write the emotional line well." Song Jiamu admitted that although the last book was about the fairy harem, it was just for fun, and the emotional line was not delicately written.

"Have you considered changing the heroine's setting?" Yun Shuqian asked.

Song Jiamu blinked: "Do you have any suggestions?"

"Even if it's a mainstream online article for men, the emotional line is still very important. It's the icing on the cake, and it can also make a deep impression on people."

Yun Shuqian said: "Why don't you try that the female lead is actually the male lead's ex-girlfriend. Under such a strange situation, the two lived together again."

"Eh?"

"Isn't the heroine an inspector? She didn't know at first that she was going to monitor the hero, but when she went, she found out that it was actually that guy."

"Then why did they break up?"

"Hey, because the heroine is also a blood race, she mutated before and her future is unknown, so she broke up with the hero, but the hero doesn't know the reason, the heroine has always liked him."

"Because the heroine is also a vampire, she has undergone mutation, and in this process, she can be the guide of the hero, so in the days of such unexpected cohabitation, not only the vampire mutated to control the daily life of research, but also the daily life of the two people's emotional collision again, In this way, there are some different elements. The development of the relationship line, you can try this, but it is very awkward at the beginning, try not to contact each other, treat it as work, and then slowly reconcile, starting from the most familiar stranger and calm Get along, help the male protagonist pass through the most painful stage of mutation, experience the new world together, and finally become an inseparable part of each other, and the relationship line will be much fuller."

After listening to Yun Shuqian's suggestion, Song Jiamu held his chin and began to think seriously.

After a while, he clenched his right fist and patted his left palm: "Wonderful!"

"With the collision of emotional lines, the daily chapters in the early stage will not be boring, and the heroine can also serve as an outpost for the hero to contact the new world, which is wonderful!"

Seeing that he readily accepted her suggestion, Yun Shuqian also felt very proud, unscrewed the kettle and gulped two sips of water.

Song Jiamu was so absorbed in his thoughts that his mouth was a little dry. After she finished drinking, he took her water bottle and took a few sips of water.

Yun Shuqian's eyes widened, she patted him a few times in embarrassment, and snatched her water bottle.

"Why are you drinking to your mouth! Disgusting!"

"Didn't I drink like this before... Oh, sorry, I didn't notice."

He drank from the distance before, but this time he drank directly from the mouth of the kettle, which happened to be where Yun Shuqian had just swallowed.

I don't know if it was because of her saliva, but Song Jiamu felt that the saliva was very moist.

Yun Shuqian hid the kettle, glared at him, and said, "Then you still write about the harem in this book?"

"Originally... I didn't intend to write it, of course it's a single heroine!"

"The ex-boyfriend and ex-girlfriend reconciliation, have you grasped it?"

"I have too much experience in this. Aren't we just reconciling now?"

"Well, it's also... Who told your ex-boyfriend's ex-girlfriend! Don't talk nonsense!"

Although the bench was very long, Song Jiamu and Yun Shuqian were sitting close to each other at this time, with their shoulders touching each other. It was not until Yun Shuqian realized that Yun Shuqian moved his little butt calmly and pulled with him. Keep a little distance.

Song Jiamu tapped the keyboard quickly to record the inspiration just now.

"Have you thought about the title of the book? What about the names of the protagonist and heroine?" Yun Shuqian asked.

"I haven't thought about the title of the book yet. If it's a name, just generate it with the name picker. It's fine if it's easy to remember."

"..."

"How about the title of the book being "The Days I Became a Blood Race with My Ex-Girlfriend"?"

"I don't think it's as good as "Living With My Ex-Girlfriend After Becoming a Blood Race", which is more reminiscent of me."

"Aunt's blood?"

"...You don't have to tell me your perverted thoughts."

"Hey Yun Shuqian, did you find out?"

"what?"

"You are good at writing daily and emotional lines, but I am not good at it; I am good at writing settings and worldview scenes, but you are not good at it; I am a man with a more straightforward style of writing, and you are a woman with a more delicate style of writing. , learn from each other's strengths, check for omissions and make up for deficiencies, and integrate them into one body, wouldn't it be invincible in the world?"

"Please pay attention to the words you use, Song Jiamu."

Song Jiamu was right. The two had obvious advantages and disadvantages. It just so happened that what I was good at was the part that the other party lacked. Compared with the previous chats on the Internet, I gained more experience when chatting face-to-face. a feeling of.

Yun Shuqian picked up the kettle again and took a sip of water.

Suddenly remembered that he just sucked it!

So the saliva in her mouth was neither swallowed nor spit out. Seeing that he didn't seem to care, she secretly swallowed it.

Before I drank it, I still felt disgusted by exchanging saliva, but after drinking it, it seemed natural again, even my heart beat faster, and I even tried to taste it to find out the difference.

It wasn't until she drank it that Song Jiamu reminded: "I vomited some into it just now, I thought you stopped drinking..."

"Go to hell!"

The girl's face flushed red.

"Hey... don't fight, don't fight... Didn't you say that there are three important things in this meeting, and there are two more?"

Yun Shuqian took all the water in the water bottle to water the flowers, and then said: "The second item is our next club activity, and it has been 20 days since the last club activity."

"May [-]st?" Song Jiamu could guess the time of her next event with a tacit understanding.

"Yeah, I just have a five-day vacation, I've figured it out!"

As for the previous activity plans, they were basically never implemented, and she had the final say. This further strengthened Song Jiamu's determination to seek power and usurp the throne.

"Still going to the haunted house?"

"No, let's go a little further this time."

Yun Shuqian said: "It happens that the location of my new book is Suzhou and Hangzhou, so on May [-]st, let's go to Hangzhou to gather folk songs!"

"May Day I want to code..."

"Let's go for three days... no, four days."

"May Day I want to code..."

"I will go on vacation on NO.30, and then come back on the 29rd. It seems that I need a nucleic acid report on the high-speed rail. Then we will do the nucleic acid on the [-]th."

"May Day, I want to..."

"what did you just say?"

Yun Shuqian looked at him in surprise, she was already looking forward to a new club activity, she hadn't left Sunan to play for a long time, and she was excited just thinking about it.

Of course, this is the same as last time, it's still collecting folk songs. Let's see how much I gained from collecting folk songs last time. Both of their new books have magical elements.

"It's nothing, I said May Day is a good day, suitable for going out and having fun."

"It's not for fun, you have to write an activity report."

"What about one more thing?"

"Today is NO.20."

Yun Shuqian said: "It's time to follow me every year."

(End of this chapter)