Stay away from Conan.

Chapter 743 Refactoring the Script
Listening to Mitsuhiko's natural answer, Gao Yuan didn't know what expression to use to respond to it for a while——

As the author of this script, at the same time, he also has to perform "Kamen Rider" who has two emotionally entangled protagonists...

And naturally, as the script that the Boys Detective Troupe will perform, the two female actors in the script are naturally Xiao Ai and Ayumi...

For this reason, involuntarily, Gao Yuan would think of the original theatrical version, "Countdown to Heaven". Mitsuhiko once told Xiaolan about his troubles. Similar thoughts are in...

But at least, no matter what the reason is, Gao Yuan still has to think about changing the script as much as possible——

After all, no matter what, this can be said to be a random plot based on reality, and it is always a bit of a drama for myself.

And on the other hand, the script itself is too difficult to perform!

"Hey? The performance you are going to perform is a script written by Mitsuhiko?"

However, at this moment, Xiaolan, who had finished handling the tableware, returned to the office, and after hearing what Mitsuhiko said just now, she couldn't help but praised with some encouragement:

"It's amazing! If you are free on the day of the school festival, I will come to see it!"

"Huh? Really, sister Xiaolan!"

Mitsuhiko felt greatly encouraged when he heard what Xiaolan said, but then he said with some embarrassment:

"However, there are still many problems in my script, and I still need to improve it..."

Having said that, Mitsuhiko looked at Gao Yuan:

"How is it? Brother wise, do you have any good suggestions?"

Seriously, Mitsuhiko looked at Gao Yuan, as if he was expecting Gao Yuan to give him good advice on the script.

"good suggestion?"

As for this, Gao Yuan looked at the manuscript in hand, and didn't know where to start for a while——

"Actually, I haven't figured out how to write the final script..."

Seeing Gao Yuan hesitantly flipping through the script manuscript he wrote, Mitsuhiko thought for a while, and glanced at Xiao Ai and Ayumi beside him, and then couldn't help saying:
"And the final ending, I haven't fully decided yet..."

Thinking back to what Xiao Ai said after watching the movie in the morning, Mitsuhiko was a little hesitant to change the happy ending that he had imagined but hadn't written yet.

As for Gao Yuan, when he heard Mitsuhiko talking about the ending, he hadn't figured it out yet, so he couldn't help saying:
"Indeed...the ending of this story is not easy to write..."

——After all, as far as the opening page of the manuscript is concerned, I didn't understand what kind of story this was trying to write, and I couldn't even see that this would be the script of a special film like "Kamen Rider".

"What kind of story do you want to tell?"

Tentatively, Gao Yuan said so.

"Of course it's a story about 'love' and 'justice'!"

Mitsuhiko said very seriously, and also gave an explanation for this:

"Before I wrote this script, I studied a lot of excellent works, and found that the most enduring themes are always these two!"

"Yes yes yes!"

Speaking of this, Ayumi couldn't help interjecting:

"This is really a very romantic story theme!"

"Then why 'Kamen Rider'?"

Gao Yuan continued to ask, wanting to see where they could start to cut in and guide them to revise the script——

"It's because of 'Kamen Superman' that it looks good!"

This time, when Gao Yuan raised the greeting, it was Yuan Tai who started to answer the conversation, only to see Yuan Tai said excitedly:

"Fight against evil forces, don't mention how exciting it is!"

In this regard, after hearing Ayumi and Genta's words successively, Gao Yuan couldn't help but feel a little helpless——

From this point of view, the creation of this script should be done by the three of them together, right?
"But you don't have to play 'Kamen Rider' in this way!"

At the same time, after hearing the respective thoughts of Yuantai and others, Conan, who also did not want to act in this play, said from the side:
"Otherwise, let's play a criminal scene! Isn't it common? The criminal police fight with the criminals in order to hunt them down, and there will even be scenes of shooting each other back and forth! Isn't this more "Kamen Rider" It's more exciting and more real!"

With that said, Conan looked at Mitsuhiko and continued:

"Mitsuhiko, you also said it, don't you want to act in a story that is not true at all? Then wouldn't it be better to change it to a real criminal scene?"

Then, Conan looked at Ayumi:
"Also, the detectives support each other and help each other, so the love produced in this way is more romantic, isn't it?"

Finally, Conan faced Yuantai and said very subtly:

"Also, if you act in criminal scenes, you don't have to play some ugly 'taro man', isn't it good?"

Immediately, just right, after Conan pointed out the benefits of acting in criminal scenes from three aspects, Mitsuhiko, Ayumi, and Genta all showed a slightly shaken look on their expressions.

So, after seeing that his words seemed to have an effect, Conan turned to Gao Yuan, rubbed the back of his head with a smile and said:

"How about it, wise brother, what do you think?"

As for this, seeing that Conan had already talked about this, Gao Yuan also nodded, and took advantage of the situation and said:

"It's true... and when it comes to acting, the criminal story is easier than 'Kamen Superman', why not just change it to a criminal story?"

Hearing this, Mitsuhiko thought for a while silently, then nodded, and couldn't help saying:

"It's also...it's okay to replace the female spy who betrayed the evil organization with a criminal story, but if it's not 'Kamen Superman', then what kind of protagonist should the female spy fall in love with at a glance?"

Seriously thinking about the situation after changing the story mode, Mitsuhiko is a little concerned about the changes——

"Why do you have to write like that?"

But in this regard, after hearing that Mitsuhiko is willing to change the script of "Kamen Rider" into a criminal story, but insists on writing such a plot that is very similar to the real situation, Gao Yuan can't help but say:

"After the rewriting, it is completely possible to reconstruct the plot..."

"Ah? Then how should I write it?"

Mitsuhiko asked puzzledly:
"Brother wise, do you have any good ideas?"

In this regard, faced with such a direct question from Mitsuhiko, Gao Yuan couldn't help but use his brain, thinking about some plots he had seen before, and then he seemed to think of something, so he blurted out:
"For example... the male protagonist is... a well-known criminal policeman! One day when we were visiting an amusement park with our childhood sweetheart...girlfriend, we met...a woman who was sitting on a bench and lost her memory. Therefore, the protagonist is out of The responsibility of the police, coupled with the tender care of his girlfriend, the two of them helped the amnesiac girl find memories..."

At the beginning, I was a little incomprehensible. Gao Yuan subconsciously felt that he mixed some plot fragments together to say this paragraph, and even at the beginning of the paragraph, he almost subconsciously said the opening remarks of the original theatrical version of Conan. Fortunately, in the end, Gao Yuan managed to sort out his thoughts a little bit, and roughly told a story at the beginning.

I don’t know if it’s because the members of the Boy Detective Team found the beginning of this story very interesting. After hearing that Gao Yuan stopped talking about the story halfway, Mitsuhiko, Ayumi, and Genta were suddenly curious. Yes, looking at Gao Yuan with expectant eyes, anxiously waiting for Gao Yuan to tell the story behind——

"A well-known criminal policeman, a woman with amnesia... looks very interesting!"

Mitsuhiko said in surprise.

"Hurry up, brother wise, I want to hear the story behind!"

Ayumi began to urge.

"How do I get my memory back? Are they going to play in an amusement park?"

Yuan Tai was puzzled.

Not only the three members of the Boy Detective Team are concerned about this, but Xiaolan also seems to be very interested in the story Gao Yuan told, so she couldn't help asking:

"Why did that woman lose her memory?"

"As far as the design of the general plot is concerned, this kind of character is generally not a simple character."

Faintly, Xiao Ai actually echoed this meeting.

"Probably the victim of something involved?"

Conan saw that Gao Yuan's story was very effective, so he said the same.

So, it was just a casually arranged story, but now faced with the questioning of everyone present, Gao Yuan had no choice but to bite the bullet and try to tell the story——

"Well... Later, when the hero and heroine were helping the woman with amnesia to find her memories, the heroine accidentally fell into danger because of an accident in the amusement park facilities. A woman with amnesia took the lead and rescued the heroine, and at this moment, the hero discovered that the woman with amnesia had very unusual skills..."

Gao Yuan reluctantly told the story with a wry smile, and then realized that he was almost copying the plot development of a certain theater version of the original work.

So, worried that this kind of plot might actually be staged in reality, Gao Yuan had no choice but to stop talking, and could not continue——

"Wow! So cool!"

However, as the content of the story told by Gao Yuan gradually revealed that the "woman with amnesia" might have a secret, Mitsuhiko and others immediately said in surprise:

"Who is that sister who lost her memory? Is she also a policeman? She was injured after chasing down a vicious gangster, and then she lost her memory, right?"

Beginning to guess the plot, Ayumi asked curiously.

"Perhaps, she is the vicious gangster. Because she was chased by the police, she might be injured and lose her memory!"

Mitsuhiko made a further guess.

"Anyway..."

In this regard, hearing that they had already begun to guess, Gao Yuan felt that his goal seemed to have been achieved, so he said to the young detective team:

"That's probably what I mean. By giving a little bit of mystery, and then explaining it step by step, so that the plot gradually deepens, the script can be reconstructed very well! Write in this way, and the plot will be It's going to be fun, isn't it?"

"That's it..."

Seeing that Gao Yuan didn't intend to continue talking, but started to teach like a teacher, Mitsuhiko couldn't help but feel a little disappointed, but he soon cheered up and said seriously:
"I learned it! I'll use it to revise the script!"

"Ah! But I still want to hear the next story!"

Ayumi also said a little disappointed.

"The story that follows... just leave it to your imagination!"

Gao Yuan said in this way:

"It was originally an imagined story. No matter how it develops in the future, as long as it can be justified, it will be a good story!"

"I understand!"

Hearing what Gao Yuan said, Mitsuhiko couldn't help saying thoughtfully:

"Just like how I helped Sister Yuanzi think about the script just now, on the basis of the existing script story, add a reasonable imagination, instead of blindly seeking novelty and fun, you can write a better script, right!"

Recalling the situation when everyone helped Sonoko to perfect the script just now, although I, Ayumi and Genta have imagined a very interesting script, in the eyes of Sonoko, it is not a perfect one that can fit the story she has written. script.

Brother Zhizhi, on the other hand, used the content of Sister Yuanzi's original script to reasonably expand the story, and immediately gave a better script.

Therefore, as long as I learn this creative thinking, I can write the original script better——

"Brother Zhizhi wants to teach us how to write a good story, so he gave an example like just now!"

After thinking about this, Mitsuhiko said to Gao Yuan very seriously.

"Ah? Oh..."

Wen Yan, although it is not very clear what Mitsuhiko understands, but looking at his humble appearance, Gao Yuan feels that his suggestion is probably effective, thinking that Mitsuhiko should learn how to write down his own script Right, so Gao Yuan nodded silently without denying it.

At this point, after experiencing such twists and turns in the Maori Detective Agency, all the members of the Boy Detective Team were pulled by Mitsuhiko and went to the library together, preparing to perfect the script together with the cooperation of everyone.

Looking at their sunny and enthusiastic backs, Xiaolan stood at the window on the second floor of the office and looked down, and couldn't help but say:
"Really, I seem to be looking forward to their scripts more than Sonoko's scripts! Mr. Zhizhi, I didn't expect you to have the talent to write scripts!"

Saying that, Xiaolan looked behind Gao Yuan, who was also about to say goodbye——

"No...it's just that I read more works..."

In this regard, Gao Yuan explained helplessly...

……

……

"That's right. I can vaguely sense what the truth you've been hiding..."

In the evening, in Zhizhi's study room, Xiao Ai looked indifferent, and said to Gao Yuan who was sitting at the desk:
"Even if you continue to lie to me, it's meaningless, it just adds to the sadness..."

"Why... why are you telling me such a thing?"

Frowning slightly, Gao Yuan asked in confusion.

"Because... I'm troubled..."

Lowering her head slightly, Xiao Ai said in a slightly depressed mood:
"I know you're wary of me... But, I can't stand it anymore. I've fallen in love with you since the first time I found you, haven't you noticed?"

Raising her head slightly, and glancing at Gao Yuan, Xiao Ai continued:
"This is too painful for me, so... I want to ask for a chance for us to be honest with each other...'Kamen Rider'?"

Immediately, after saying this, looking at Gao Yuan's blank expression, Xiao Ai's mood suddenly collapsed, revealing an indifferent expression——

"What? Didn't you say you were rehearsing with me? With your current expression, I can't get into the drama at all!"

"Do not……"

Reluctantly, Gao Yuan flipped through a new manuscript from the desk, and couldn't help but support his forehead and said:
"So in the end, what script did Mitsuhiko write? Why is it 'Kamen Rider'..."

(End of this chapter)