Song Tan's Notes

Chapter 1481. Literary Style Copywriting

With five new employees, everyone on the mountain was quite curious. Especially the girls, after hearing about Hetan Tielian's heroic deeds, they crowded around her when getting food, wanting to see her more.

Tielian didn't seem to care on the surface, but she was actually very happy.

She thought it was better to be a young girl. She got divorced, and her former friends said why bother, as her children were already so grown up. They also said that she should at least wait until her children got married. Her brother and sister-in-law also sighed, saying that she was too old and no one would take care of her...

In short, she didn't really feel anything. On the contrary, she felt particularly relaxed because she didn't have to take care of the household. But everyone thought she was too careless and was too miserable now, which made her speechless, so she went out to travel.

The young girls here are different. They praise her privately, thinking she is cool and decisive. Some even say that even if she has a man, they don’t know who will take care of whom when they are old.

I also comforted her by saying that intelligence is developing very fast, and if she saves money well, she might even have care robots when she gets old, so there is nothing to be afraid of!

In short, Tielian ate two more bowls of rice because of their admiring looks.

Oh my! This is a great job. The food is always the same! I am getting fat!

Another uncle, Jiao Youliang, also felt the same way.

The working hours are now from 8am to 5pm, with a one-hour lunch break, but he comes at 8am every day to have breakfast - he is a villager! He is used to getting up early.

I don’t leave after getting off work at five in the evening. I finish my work quickly and then go to have dinner. Before leaving, I take some fruits home for my wife. It’s so wonderful!

Moreover, the meals here include meat, vegetables, oil and taste good. He and his wife have few family members and the meals are simple, but they are not as healthier as those here!

The working hours on a family farm are not like those in urban enterprises. They seem stable now, but when the temperature is fixed above 30 degrees, the working hours will be from 5 am to 7 pm every day, with a four- to five-hour break at noon.

At this time, everyone who had done farm work understood what was going on, except the three new girls who were a little confused.

"Five o'clock in the morning..."

Zhang Yanping was leading them and nodded at this moment: "Don't worry, you will definitely be able to get up when the time comes - you can sleep well here at night."

Because there is not much entertainment, every household in the village turns off the lights and becomes quiet at around 7 or 8 o'clock. Moreover, the dormitories are well built and the sound insulation is really good, so the night shift picking vegetables will not affect them.

But despite this, the new employees are still a little confused.

Finally, Zhang Yanping remembered: "Oh, by the way, you are not doing farm work, so you can work according to normal working hours."

They seemed so casual! It was hard to tell whether the working hours were just arranged according to their reactions.

It's considerate...

Gao Xinzhi looked at She Min, who looked back at him blankly. Then he looked at Yun Duo, who was rubbing her hands with passion...

Suddenly I started to worry whether this job would last long.

Compared to Song Tan, Zhang Yanping was more skilled in making promises: "You guys should work hard. Now that you are proficient in the job, you will be busy next month and the benefits will be very good. Apart from anything else, you should have a taste of the good things that we sell. You who write copy and do customer service should at least try them."

He had a beaming face, which didn't look like a good guy's. Even though Yun Duo was mentally prepared, she took a deep breath and silently blocked the two girls who were huddled together behind her.

As for the cake?

I was too nervous to eat it.

Among them, Yun Duo was responsible for following Song Tan and carrying out the simple tasks she gave her. Gao Xinzhi went to sort out the account books, while She Min fiddled with the camera that had just been delivered. Since there were no products on the shelves yet, Zhang Yanping said, "Try to take pictures of these that have been removed from the online store and write a copy."

She was indeed socially anxious, but after fiddling with the stuff for a while, she submitted a satisfactory answer to Zhang Yanping in the afternoon. On the preview page in the background, a ball of milky white solidified honey was carefully placed on a green leaf, next to a bunch of wild flowers in full bloom, and a small bee flew over.

The high-definition camera captures the bee's fluff and the traces of its flying wings, presenting them in the picture, combining movement and stillness, which is several levels higher than the previous rough shot.

And below, a paragraph of text was slowly edited.

【7000 years ago, honey collection first appeared in prints. 】

Illustration: Printmaking

【3000 years ago, "honey" was recorded by us using oracle bone script.】

Illustration: Rubbing of oracle bone inscriptions

【Chinese civilization has been passed down for 8000 years. We study its past and appreciate its future. Bees may not know that their wings carry time, but we can taste the flow of time here...】

Illustration: Golden flowing honey.

The copy was neither long nor short, and the words did not dominate the text, but Zhang Yan read it quietly and did not speak for a long time.

She Min, who was handing in the task, was a little nervous, and her voice was as soft as a mosquito: "Is it, is it too artistic?"

Zhang Yanping thought about it and took her to find Song Tan: "Let's take a look."

Song Tan read it silently and became curious: "Why do you write so literary? Are all the copywritings you did before like this?"

The other person clenched his fingers and told the truth: "It used to be the 9.9 yuan promotional one... This one, I came up with it myself."

Facing the girl, she was much calmer than facing Zhang Yanping, and she talked more: "I looked at the price of honey, 1000 yuan for 500 grams, and then the price went up... I thought, since so many can be sold at this price, and the previous copywriting was so simple, maybe the target customers don't really care about its efficacy or anything like that."

"Payment, maybe it's just pure liking... If you like it, I should add some more humanistic value to the honey, which should be appropriate."

Especially because the product has been out of stock, either the price is 99999 or it is out of stock. The number of views on the details page is actually quite high. Most people probably can’t buy it, so they look at it again out of reluctance.

Looking at the plum can quench your thirst.

By making the copy more literary, maybe it can make everyone feel less depressed?

In short, she wasn't really sure and felt a little nervous at the moment.

Song Tan looked at the pictures and text again, and handed the notebook back: "She Min, right? Please shoot more materials during this period, and update all the previously uploaded materials. If you are willing, you can become a regular employee now. By the way, the basic salary is 4500. If there are any additional requirements in the future, bonuses will be calculated separately."

Teacher Xin is really capable! He can bring back such talents even with ordinary recruitment! Regardless of whether they are socially anxious or not, he can do the design, photography, post-production and copywriting by himself, and write it so coolly...

Are you not waiting for others to change jobs?

"what?"

She Min was bewildered: Is he converted to a regular employee already?

Here we come! Good night!

8000 Years of Chinese Civilization is based on Mr. Feng Shi’s open class and his works. Anyone interested can listen to it, it is worth reading repeatedly.