Heart attack

Chapter 493 No Comments
The manuscript that Guo Guangshan held up just now is her speech, and he is reading it.

Tang Hongyi only really felt nervous now. This senior, whom she had seen with her own eyes, recognized his works and articles very well.

If he is lucky enough to comment on her work, he will definitely laugh out loud.

The previous instructors' comments were to the point and nothing special. When it came to Tang Hongyi's comments, they all spoke in the same word order.

It is unanimously agreed that the work is rare, and it vividly shows the life of the article, the emotion is in place, and the foreshadowing is accurate.

To put it simply, it is a little bland, a little ordinary.

As the person with the most seniority, Guo Guangshan's presence immediately rose when the last person appeared.

Now in the ranking status, she subconsciously turned her head to look at the feast, and the feast was ranked third.

Tang Hong also nodded, and turned his gaze back to Guo Guangshan.

Guo Guangshan nodded, and cleared his heavy throat, "Well, what, first of all, it is Teacher Guang's work, which meets the market demand. The plot level is good, but it is too dense. There is a big problem with the rhythm of life, but I can understand it. Can't stay in one state forever..."

The unique perspective makes people feel more than enough. After commenting on Guanghang's works, Tang Hong can't wait to hear his own comments.

As the rounds passed, Tang Hong also suppressed the whirlpool in his heart, and his heart beat faster.

Guo Guangshan put down the work, "Teacher Tang's is right... there is no comment, the score is [-] points."

"!"

The audience was stunned, even if it was Chen Yangxu's work, Guo Guangshan said a few words, why Tang Hongyi didn't.

The person involved was also stunned, unable to ask any more puzzles and questions, because Guo Guangshan didn't seem to intend to speak, or even to speak.

Sheng Yan shook his head slightly, his eyes seemed to comfort her.

She felt cold and didn't know what it meant, but sadness covered all her emotions.

The director counted all the votes and announced the results little by little.

Tang Hong also lowered his head, not curious about the ranking at all.

The tutor group has not changed much, and she is still ranked third. It is a pity that Xiang Qin's works, because the main theme is fighting monsters and upgrading, the audience is not large.

As long as the story is more interesting, she may fall to No.4. If Chen Yangxu is not Chen Yangxu, she may be the fifth.

She thought that this kind of subject matter would not be popular, but she never thought that it would fall to this point.

Tang Hongyi was a little disappointed in herself for the first time. Her proud career experienced a setback in an unexpected future.

The director cuts to the last scene and stops the camera.

"It will be the final shooting in a while, everyone take a rest."

As soon as the director finished speaking, Sheng Yan took this opportunity to move in front of her.

The tone is very soft, as if to say comfortingly: "Are you okay?"

"Hmm... a little disappointed." Tang Hong also held his hand, regretfully lingering on his chest.

"You have done a good job, and I think it's good that you dare to innovate."

Sheng Yan squeezed her hand, "Competitive programs, if you write works that appeal to your appetite, then naturally there will be more audiences."

"Is this text a bit flat?" She stroked the printed document, "I still feel that there are still shortcomings."

"What do you think is not enough?"

Tang Hong also thought about it: "The ups and downs of the plot, and the plot of falling off the horse is a bit flat, which makes people not bright, and it feels funny and stalking."

The feast is over, holding her hair: "If you know where you are wrong, you will know the shortcomings of this article. You are a big step ahead of others, and you deserve praise."

The idea is unconventional, but it is something Tang Hong did not expect, which is a little funny, "That's not it, if..."

"Wait a moment!"

Suddenly a voice interrupted the gathering of the audience.

(End of this chapter)