After being poisoned by her lover

Chapter 168 Humanization of Scoring Mechanism
Wu Meili followed closely and began to score. She held the magic mirror and looked at her cheek lovingly and affectionately: "Hey! I have completely different ideas from my brother, young man, dare to try anything, this courage is commendable ;"

"However, no story is perfect, and every story has good and bad. Personally, based on my aesthetics alone, I still have to kindly remind you that I don't like ugly things, but the one you created The protagonist perfectly stepped on my thunder point..."

"And the protagonist of your story is too ugly for me to accept it."

Wu Meili sighed softly: "I can't bear ugly things staining my eyes and ears. As long as they are ugly, there is no need for them to exist."

"Sorry, I give you zero points."

Zhang Dazhi lowered his head deeply.

"Ahem! The hero sees the same thing," said the knife butcher in a rough voice, rubbing his big hands like a cattail leaf fan, "but I don't agree with you. I just like the recipe in your story very much. Braised pork, my favorite."

"I just want to ask you, the soft and juicy braised pork is fragrant when you bite it down! Cut into large pieces, the stew is full of aroma! The whole room is filled with the aroma of braised pork! Think about it carefully, how sweet The glutinous taste, the unique aroma of meat lingers in the mouth, and the tip of the tongue - fragrant meat! Is there really anyone who can resist this deliciousness?!"

"Although! Your story is not rigorous enough. We all know that slaves are not qualified to eat meat, but you fabricated the story of a slave family cooking braised pork out of thin air! This seems to be nothing wrong at first glance, but it can't stand the scrutiny. Think big bug! Speaking of it, it’s really serious!”

"Also! There's another thing I really hate!" The knife butcher shook his bulbous nose, and said very speechlessly, "I hate it the most! Insects with wings! I'll kill you! Dragonflies! You let the protagonist feed you!" Dragonflies??? Why don’t you let him keep some normal pets? Do you have to keep dragonflies? Can’t find any normal things to breed? What’s wrong with keeping them! You have to keep things with wings!”

"It's really unlucky, things with wings! Hiss~~~" The knife butcher pouted, "But, since there is a recipe I like, I still give you three points. This is the best of humanity."

"Remember next time, don't raise any unlucky things with wings!"

It was Yu Xian's turn to score, but the knife butcher barely woke him up after he pushed him.

"Hey! It's time to wake up! Quickly rate people! People have been waiting for you for hours!" After waiting for a few seconds, the knife butcher really deserved to be a good hand who opened his eyes and told lies.

Yu Xian woke up leisurely, with a sleepy look, which made people a little worried, did he hear the story clearly?If you don't hear clearly, how can you give people a good score?
Yu Xian just stared at Zhang Dazhi indifferently, and said lazily: "I see your protagonist, he doesn't seem to like to sleep that much?"

"I'm sorry, I don't agree with you. I'll give you one point as an encouragement."

Zhang Dazhi suffered a series of blows, and his small eyes had already become very dull. They didn't contain much wisdom, and now they looked even more ridiculous.

The next step was Li Du's scoring. He slowly twisted his neck, and then slowly twisted it back, and then the sinister hanging eyes were like two poisonous snakes hanging on his face.

"In your story, I didn't find anything that could make my eyes shine. Boy, your story is too bad! It's so bad that I can't bear to criticize you too much..."

"Trust me, if the punishment for telling a bad story is to be shot, there will be countless bullets flying into your skull before I break you."

Li Du has always been unceremonious when speaking, and this is the reason why other villagers never choose to communicate with Li Du.

"Look, in your story, I can't see the emotions that the protagonist should have, let alone the prejudice of the soul in the supporting role! But, isn't your protagonist human? Why are they all human? But without the shortcomings that all human beings have? You describe them too monotonously, boy, I am a person who pursues perfection, and human beings have never been as pure as you made up..."

"The coexistence of shortcomings and advantages can construct a perfect human being."

"Of course, when I said perfection, it was completely out of the original meaning. I meant that the inferiority and superiority of human beings coexist at the same time! The protagonist and supporting role of the story you described, first of all, is the strange protagonist. He should be a person whose superiority is greater than A person with bad roots, but in order to cater to the bad things that happened to him, you finally shaped him into a bad guy whose bad roots are greater than good ones!"

Zhang Dazhi showed a surprised expression.

Unexpectedly, Li Du, who has always been gloomy and weird, would evaluate his story so objectively!
"This is completely unreasonable, boy. Since he didn't choose to resist from the beginning, then he will never have the courage to resist. But you have increased his courage from deteriorating to a level that exploded on a certain day. , This completely violates his personality, he has become the same thing as his father, can it make you feel a sense of accomplishment?"

"Only by keeping the good and bad roots in a relative balance on the balance, can we truly portray a real and perfect human being."

Zhang Dazhi pondered Li Du's words seriously, but suddenly heard him sneer.

"Forget it, what's the use of telling you so much? As an ordinary and ordinary human being, it is impossible for you to experience the tremendous energy contained in these two things, success and perfection. They are destined to be with you In the foreseeable future, just like your limited and poor IQ, you are doomed to fail to weave a good story with flesh and blood."

"For my objective assessment of your story in such a human way, I give you a zero."

What can Zhang Dazhi say?He was speechless, and only a wry smile could express his helpless mood.

If he had known that the villagers would pick out so many faults, he should have perfected the details!There shouldn't be freedom at all, resulting in a story full of stuff that people hate.

Ye Zhaoling was also very shocked when she heard Li Du's eloquent criticism of this story. She never expected that Li Du, who always seemed to ignore everything, would comment on a story so seriously.

Although it is purely possible that Li Du is an occupational disease——

Hey, there is no one who doesn't know, right?Li Du is a novelist.

Until Li Du beat Zhang Dazhi, Ye Zhaoling became more convinced that Li Du had an occupational disease.

It’s still the bitter and mean Li Du——

Very human.

In the end, Zhen Yi said nothing, and after a few seconds of contemplation, he sighed: "There is no need for any evaluation of a tragic story full of dross."

"Five points."

"Give what you offer, negative emotional value."

(End of this chapter)