After being poisoned by her lover
Chapter 179
Chapter 179
Arriving at Shirakawa Rensuke, the "Story Meeting" seems to have been fast-forwarded. Not only is his story very short and to the point, but the villagers' ratings are even shorter——
The knife butcher was the first to speak and it was a heavy blow: "Ten."
Probably almost everyone is wondering why the knife butcher gave this story full marks?
The knife butcher didn't make any comments on this, just when others didn't figure it out——
Like him, Jin Dafu and Wu Meili gave full marks to Shirakawa Rensuke's story, and they also did not give any comments.
The remaining three villagers held completely opposite opinions to these three villagers——
Yu Xian said frankly: "I don't see any commendable characteristics of this story at all."
"First, the length is too short, the characterization is not full enough, there is no detailed description, no background introduction, the protagonist's feelings appear as abruptly as a bolide; you have to know, at least we can know which day and time from the website I can observe meteors falling into the night sky somewhere, but I can’t just rely on my imagination to make up the whole process of an inexplicable story with no beginning or end, right? The story must have the appearance of a story. Bad review, bad review .”
"Secondly, the heroine is an artist, so she doesn't reflect her artistic atmosphere at all. As for the hero in your story, is it just a background board? Your description is too perfunctory, and the audience doesn't know what he is doing. Yes, I don't know what kind of character he is, and what kind of letter did he receive in the end? I didn't say this, and I didn't say that..."
"I think it's a boring story."
Yu Xian can talk so much, it really is raining red.
"Okay, ten, no more to say."
Dude, isn't there a whole bunch of bugs to pick out? !Even gave full marks again? !
Ye Zhaoling was surprised, but also felt reasonable.
Ms. Wu loves Duzi more than the other five villagers. As her subordinate, Liansuke Baichuan must and will definitely give him full marks.
Jin Dafu is Miss Wu's elder brother, and he obeys Miss Wu's orders. In order to please Miss Wu, he will definitely give Shirakawa Rensuke a high score.
As for the knife butcher who gave Shirakawa Lisuke full marks first, it was because of her Ye Zhaoling.
As for this knife butcher, his brain is not very good, he has a bad temper and loves to join in the fun, but he is very loyal.
If there hadn't been Ye Zhaoling and Shirakawa Liansuke's... strange drama, it would have been basically impossible to expect the knife butcher to unreservedly show favoritism, such as giving people full marks unconditionally. It's just that he bought it too easily.
Looking at it this way, the knife butcher who was bought by Miss Wu and Jin Dafu jointly, in order to show his position, he supported the people under Miss Wu with both hands, and it was logical that he could go against his own principles and give Shirakawa Rensuke full marks.
Of course, there is nothing wrong with doing this, it is all to make the other two villagers feel at ease.
Of course, it is undeniable that the three of them have the same ulterior secret, and the knife butcher can benefit from it, and even get more benefits, to satisfy his "big appetite"; Sincerity, painless, and will not lose a piece of meat, why not do it?
As for Yu Xian, in addition to playing the violin, he usually engages in performance art and sleeps a lot. Why does such a guy who has been in a coma far longer than his awake time give full marks to Shirakawa Rensuke's story?
Ye Zhaoling couldn't figure it out.
The only reasonable explanation, perhaps, can only be attributed to the eccentricity of the artist.
With four full marks at the start, Tianhu started the game.
Yu Xian's evaluation is quite objective, at least when he is awake, his mind is not as muddled as when he just woke up.
This time, only Li Du did not disappoint Ye Zhaoling.
"Can this also be called a story? I want to ask you, do you have any misunderstandings about the word story?"
"Story, it tells an event with morals through narrative. It focuses on the description of the development process of things, emphasizing the ups and downs of the plot, so as to explain a certain truth or value. Let me ask you, this paragraph you told What kind of meaningful event does it tell? Where is the description of its development process? Is its plot complete? What kind of truth does it contain? What kind of values does it have? !"
"You really disappointed me, Shirakawa Rensuke." Li Du said indifferently, "Originally, I could get countless inspirations just by looking at your face; Everyone's fantasy, especially girls who have expectations for love stories, you have a good look, and you seem to have been blessed by heaven."
"But you are so disappointing. Although you described a paragraph of text as briefly as possible, I can only see your flaws between the lines of your words!"
"Irreparable flaw."
"So I'm sorry, I can only give you five points." Li Du said mockingly, "The deducted five points are a symbolic homage to your flaws."
As for why not all deductions, I can't refute it. If I don't give you this face for the remaining five points, I'm sorry for the inspiration you brought me, so I have to give you some points for this face. "
"Even though, I don't have any liking for people who grow up like this."
Li Du shrugged.
"It's purely to tell you that my aesthetics are top-notch, and the layout is grand."
"In addition, I also want to warn other people, don't be fooled by the beautiful skin of human beings. People who can appear here and grow up like this are either pure white and extremely good, or pure black and extremely evil, without exception."
What the villagers say is not an imperial decree, just listen to it, but if you really take these words seriously, it is purely a lack of brainstem.
Ye Zhaoling didn't take it to heart.
Li Du's personality is far from being as good as the words he used to describe himself.
Ye Zhaoling agrees with top-notch aesthetics, but as for the grand layout?How big a pattern can a person who focuses on picking out the slightest mistakes of others and putting them on the bright side?
Carpenter Zhen is the most fair and just person among these villagers.
It's just that he is always the last to score, and his own evaluation can't change anything.
"I personally think that what Li Du said has some truth, but not much."
"I love this story."
"Admittedly, this story is quite curious, and it can accurately screen out most people who have no idea about it. Its shortcomings are obvious, but its advantages are also clearly visible."
"At least, I like the story."
"I think, quite..."
"Too much, one point..."
"Too little again."
"Then add another point to each point."
"One plus one equals two under normal circumstances, but not just two."
(End of this chapter)
Arriving at Shirakawa Rensuke, the "Story Meeting" seems to have been fast-forwarded. Not only is his story very short and to the point, but the villagers' ratings are even shorter——
The knife butcher was the first to speak and it was a heavy blow: "Ten."
Probably almost everyone is wondering why the knife butcher gave this story full marks?
The knife butcher didn't make any comments on this, just when others didn't figure it out——
Like him, Jin Dafu and Wu Meili gave full marks to Shirakawa Rensuke's story, and they also did not give any comments.
The remaining three villagers held completely opposite opinions to these three villagers——
Yu Xian said frankly: "I don't see any commendable characteristics of this story at all."
"First, the length is too short, the characterization is not full enough, there is no detailed description, no background introduction, the protagonist's feelings appear as abruptly as a bolide; you have to know, at least we can know which day and time from the website I can observe meteors falling into the night sky somewhere, but I can’t just rely on my imagination to make up the whole process of an inexplicable story with no beginning or end, right? The story must have the appearance of a story. Bad review, bad review .”
"Secondly, the heroine is an artist, so she doesn't reflect her artistic atmosphere at all. As for the hero in your story, is it just a background board? Your description is too perfunctory, and the audience doesn't know what he is doing. Yes, I don't know what kind of character he is, and what kind of letter did he receive in the end? I didn't say this, and I didn't say that..."
"I think it's a boring story."
Yu Xian can talk so much, it really is raining red.
"Okay, ten, no more to say."
Dude, isn't there a whole bunch of bugs to pick out? !Even gave full marks again? !
Ye Zhaoling was surprised, but also felt reasonable.
Ms. Wu loves Duzi more than the other five villagers. As her subordinate, Liansuke Baichuan must and will definitely give him full marks.
Jin Dafu is Miss Wu's elder brother, and he obeys Miss Wu's orders. In order to please Miss Wu, he will definitely give Shirakawa Rensuke a high score.
As for the knife butcher who gave Shirakawa Lisuke full marks first, it was because of her Ye Zhaoling.
As for this knife butcher, his brain is not very good, he has a bad temper and loves to join in the fun, but he is very loyal.
If there hadn't been Ye Zhaoling and Shirakawa Liansuke's... strange drama, it would have been basically impossible to expect the knife butcher to unreservedly show favoritism, such as giving people full marks unconditionally. It's just that he bought it too easily.
Looking at it this way, the knife butcher who was bought by Miss Wu and Jin Dafu jointly, in order to show his position, he supported the people under Miss Wu with both hands, and it was logical that he could go against his own principles and give Shirakawa Rensuke full marks.
Of course, there is nothing wrong with doing this, it is all to make the other two villagers feel at ease.
Of course, it is undeniable that the three of them have the same ulterior secret, and the knife butcher can benefit from it, and even get more benefits, to satisfy his "big appetite"; Sincerity, painless, and will not lose a piece of meat, why not do it?
As for Yu Xian, in addition to playing the violin, he usually engages in performance art and sleeps a lot. Why does such a guy who has been in a coma far longer than his awake time give full marks to Shirakawa Rensuke's story?
Ye Zhaoling couldn't figure it out.
The only reasonable explanation, perhaps, can only be attributed to the eccentricity of the artist.
With four full marks at the start, Tianhu started the game.
Yu Xian's evaluation is quite objective, at least when he is awake, his mind is not as muddled as when he just woke up.
This time, only Li Du did not disappoint Ye Zhaoling.
"Can this also be called a story? I want to ask you, do you have any misunderstandings about the word story?"
"Story, it tells an event with morals through narrative. It focuses on the description of the development process of things, emphasizing the ups and downs of the plot, so as to explain a certain truth or value. Let me ask you, this paragraph you told What kind of meaningful event does it tell? Where is the description of its development process? Is its plot complete? What kind of truth does it contain? What kind of values does it have? !"
"You really disappointed me, Shirakawa Rensuke." Li Du said indifferently, "Originally, I could get countless inspirations just by looking at your face; Everyone's fantasy, especially girls who have expectations for love stories, you have a good look, and you seem to have been blessed by heaven."
"But you are so disappointing. Although you described a paragraph of text as briefly as possible, I can only see your flaws between the lines of your words!"
"Irreparable flaw."
"So I'm sorry, I can only give you five points." Li Du said mockingly, "The deducted five points are a symbolic homage to your flaws."
As for why not all deductions, I can't refute it. If I don't give you this face for the remaining five points, I'm sorry for the inspiration you brought me, so I have to give you some points for this face. "
"Even though, I don't have any liking for people who grow up like this."
Li Du shrugged.
"It's purely to tell you that my aesthetics are top-notch, and the layout is grand."
"In addition, I also want to warn other people, don't be fooled by the beautiful skin of human beings. People who can appear here and grow up like this are either pure white and extremely good, or pure black and extremely evil, without exception."
What the villagers say is not an imperial decree, just listen to it, but if you really take these words seriously, it is purely a lack of brainstem.
Ye Zhaoling didn't take it to heart.
Li Du's personality is far from being as good as the words he used to describe himself.
Ye Zhaoling agrees with top-notch aesthetics, but as for the grand layout?How big a pattern can a person who focuses on picking out the slightest mistakes of others and putting them on the bright side?
Carpenter Zhen is the most fair and just person among these villagers.
It's just that he is always the last to score, and his own evaluation can't change anything.
"I personally think that what Li Du said has some truth, but not much."
"I love this story."
"Admittedly, this story is quite curious, and it can accurately screen out most people who have no idea about it. Its shortcomings are obvious, but its advantages are also clearly visible."
"At least, I like the story."
"I think, quite..."
"Too much, one point..."
"Too little again."
"Then add another point to each point."
"One plus one equals two under normal circumstances, but not just two."
(End of this chapter)
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