This childhood sweetheart has a problem

Chapter 68 Full Score Composition with Full of Popularity!
If the reason why "The Death of the Red Rabbit" became popular and famous in the earth world is that it is a refreshing composition with perfect scores in the college entrance examination, then it became popular and caused controversy in this parallel world because , the person who wrote it was Xu Qingru.

Otherwise, as an essay with a perfect score on the mid-term exam of senior high school, it would not cause much disturbance.

Xu Qingru was the "Most Military Training Goddess" at the beginning, although now her status has been considered exhausted and she doesn't have much traffic.

But don't forget, she is still the up owner of Xiaopozhan.

After the "Haiyan" video, she did not stop updating.

With the help of his elder brother Xu Mingwei, he produced several videos and uploaded them one after another, all of which are original songs with a literary and artistic flavor-"An Old Man Who Doesn't Know the Date of Return", "Li Li Wan Xiang", "Leaf".

These original songs are not very popular, but people who like them like them very much, and the fans are very sticky.

There is a line of lyrics in the song "Leaves" that has gone viral, and it is exactly - loneliness is a carnival of one person, and carnival is the loneliness of a group of people.

However, this line of lyrics is popular. Many people like to use it as their Fetion signature, etc., but not many people know its source.

All in all, Xu Qingru's status as a "treasure up master" is still recognized by many people. The traffic that used to be like duckweed has gradually turned into her loyal fans.

And her collection of modern poems "Flying Bird Collection" has been distributed on the Internet, and it has been widely circulated.

Her name is well-known in contemporary poetry circles.

With the help of her mother Li Yi'an, "Flying Birds" will soon be published as a physical book, which will further increase her fame.

In addition to "Flying Birds", Xu Qingru also continued to publish prose in the pure literature magazine "Haijiao", which also allowed her to gain a group of fans of literature lovers.

Whether it's "Haiyan" or "Hurrying", readers who like them really like it.

She also recently published an essay titled "Warming a Pot of Wine under the Moonlight". With this title alone, many literature lovers felt a strong literary atmosphere.

And the text did not disappoint them——

"If there is something real about boiled snow, other things can be kept. We can use an empty bottle to store the fragrance of sweet-scented osmanthus tonight. When the sweet-scented osmanthus fades and autumn is over, we can open the bottle cap and taste it carefully.

We put the warmth of our first love in a delicate glass box, and when our youth is over and we grow old, we lift the lid of the box, and a stream of heat hits our face, which is enough to comfort us.

There are many unexpected tastes in it, such as putting moonlight in a wine jug and drinking it with a slow fire... There is a real meaning in this, which is the realm of a wine fairy.

......"

After reading her article "Warming a Pot of Wine under the Moonlight", many literature lovers feel as if they are enjoying the moonlight and drinking fine wine.

Coincidentally, Cheng Wenkang, a special-grade teacher at the "Jiangda High School" and head of the Chinese teaching and research group, also saw this essay.

After enjoying himself, he suffered from an occupational disease, and felt that this prose was quite suitable for Chinese reading comprehension questions...

Cheng Wenkang did not remember the name of the author of this article, otherwise he would have been muttering, why is the prose he read written by Xu Qingru, and the full score composition "The Death of the Red Rabbit" just corrected was also written by Xu Qingru?
He might not believe that the two Xu Qingru are the same person.

After all, the literary realm of a composition for high school students like "The Death of the Red Rabbit" cannot be compared with the famous prose "Warming a Pot of Wine under the Moonlight".

All in all, just because Xu Qingru is well-known on the Internet as a "Literary Girl", "Folk Singer", "Prose Writer", and "Modern Poet", and her appearance is indeed too high, this is naturally available The hype is worth it.

It turned out that the news that Xu Qingru passed the "No. [-] in the city" exam this time, coupled with her perfect score composition "Death of the Red Rabbit", only existed as a hot post in "Jiangzhou No. [-] Middle School".

The post is full of students from the school who worship her, and there are all kinds of jokes, making Song Shuhua, a foreign war waste and prisoner, hurry up and apologize. Xu Qingru's profile picture, P is on the head of the person leading the pet dog...

Thus, a "World Famous Painting" of Xu Qingru holding his pet dog Song Shuhua was born. Unfortunately, this spoofed p-picture was directly deleted by the authority dog. They thought such a p-picture was too much.

The funniest thing was that someone directly pointed out that everyone still envied Song Shuhua. After all, he could be Xu Qingru's dog.

A sense of instantaneity that is a hell of a joke.

But the atmosphere of the post bar is like this, full of irritable old men, very aggressive, whoever is serious will lose, the main focus is abstraction, jokes, and spoofs.

The hot post about Xu Qingru in the campus post bar, as time goes by, its popularity will definitely gradually decrease.

What I didn't expect was that it was unknown that the students from Jiangzhou No. [-] Middle School had crossed the line, or that it was indeed the students from the High School Affiliated to Jiangzhou University who caused the trouble.

Someone actually reposted Xu Qingru's hot post to the post bar of the High School Affiliated to Jiang University, and then posted it on his face——

"It is said that the high school with the strongest liberal arts in Jiangzhou City and even in the whole province is the High School Affiliated to Jiang University. However, in front of Xu Qingru, the emperor of liberal arts in Jiangzhou No. [-] Middle School, there is nothing but rubbish!"

"Yu Bingwei, a prisoner of foreign wars attached to Jiang University, comes out!"

"Everyone kneel down and worship Xu Qingru, the emperor of Chinese science next door, for his perfect composition "Death of the Red Rabbit"!"

"I really laughed and cried. Before the city's ranking came out, a group of filial sons and grandsons of Yu Bingwei in our attached middle school were bragging that she was the number one in the city. In the end, not only was she completely defeated in Chinese, which she was best at, but also in science. How clear is Xu Qingru..."

"It is said that Yu Bingwei is the number one talented girl in the High School Affiliated to Jiang University, and no one can touch porcelain at her writing level, so can she write a composition like "The Death of the Red Rabbit"?"

"If you can write a fart, it's in the tense examination room. Yu Bingwei is talented, but she is not quick at all. Xu Qingru is the real genius!"

"I really don't know why a girl like Yu Bingwei, who can only be regarded as delicate in appearance, is so popular in the High School Attached to Jiangda University. If it is Xu Qingru, I can't imagine it!"

……

Yu Bingwei is indeed a prominent figure in the first year of senior high school attached to Jiangda University, and is recognized as a talented woman.

Although her grades were not as strong as Song Shuhua's ranking in the first place, she never fell out of the top ten in the school.

She is also better at liberal arts, but weaker in science, so this city-wide unified examination is also good for her.

Her final ranking was No. [-] in the school and No. [-] in the city.

It can be said that without Xu Qingru, who was born out of nowhere, Yu Bingwei would be the biggest winner in this city's unified examination.

Yu Bingwei is very popular in the High School Affiliated to Jiang University by virtue of her handsome appearance and extraordinary talent.

She was also invited out of the mountain by "San Gu Maolu", the president of the school's literary club, to join the literary club and become a mainstay.

In every issue of the school newspaper, she has works published on it, with various themes and gorgeous and graceful writing style.

All these factors made Yu Bingwei have a lot of fans.

In the campus post bar of the High School Affiliated to Jiang University, I often see people posting to praise her from various angles. Even her appearance, which can only be regarded as delicate, is blessed by the talent filter, and some people directly worship her as a goddess.

It may be because of all kinds of embarrassment that she encountered "backlash" recently. Some students of the attached middle school who had a rebellious mentality directly invited Xu Qingru from No. [-] Middle School to be a tool person and trampled on Yu Bingwei!

"The Death of the Red Rabbit" has become their output tool.

And Yu Bingwei's supporters, after being exported in such a way, will of course not give up, and start fancy rebuttals, and at the same time, they also fired at the perfect score composition "The Death of the Red Rabbit".

Their counterattack is not limited to the campus post bar, but further opened up the battlefield, and even reached the "Zhihu" forum.

In this era of parallel worlds, the word-of-mouth of "Zhihu" is not bad, and it is not considered "forced" or ridiculed as "sharing the story you just made up". There are still quite a lot of elites and bigwigs.

"How do you evaluate the perfect score composition "Death of the Red Rabbit"?"

This issue was heated up by both parties who were arguing and angry!
The point is that the two sides are arguing, not just among the students, but also many netizens who are watching.

Below this question, the respondents were also clearly divided into two factions, and some people looked down on this full-score composition at all——

"Thank you for the invitation. As a senior Chinese teacher, I think the level of this composition is very low, and it's off topic. I'll give it a 60 out of 38."

"From an objective point of view, the choice of words and sentences is not literal, white and not white, and it is a mere formality, which has a serious sense of disharmony. In modern terms, it is a lot of English mixed with Chinese.

Chitu: I am a horse. My rider used to be Lu Bu, but after meeting Guan Yunchang, I was moved by his sincerity. He is my Mr.Right.Now that he's dead, I don't want to live anymore.Just sauce. "

"Looking at the death of Chitu in terms of the requirements of the article, the intention is not deep, the language is too bad, and the angle of entry is quite novel.

If I were a big sand sculpture who had never seen the world, I would give 60 points to this exam composition, but I am already 26. If I go to judge the paper, I will only give her 42 points.

To be honest, among the 18-year-old ancients, there are countless articles written better than Chitu's death. Such a composition with full marks can only show that the present is not as good as it used to be. "

"Personally, I feel that it belongs to the general rubbish level, and the level of the marking group is too low. Although it is not zero, it is at most higher than the entry score, far from the full score.

This article has become very popular on the Internet recently. I heard that it is written in classical Chinese, but it is actually ancient vernacular.

Unfortunately, the level of the students is not enough, and the writing is neither fish nor fowl.The storyline is also average.

In fact, this is a typical off-topic composition, which is just a gimmick of semi-classical Chinese writing, which has been hyped up.

What it writes is loyalty rather than integrity. Although loyalty and integrity have an intersection, they are two different concepts.

Of course, in order to avoid going off topic, the author used a third-party perspective to make the comments honest.

It can only be said that the author is clever, but his literary talent is really bad! "

"I have read too many ancient texts!

This short article is so common and ordinary, the language is as immature as a baby in swaddling clothes, and the shallowness of skills is fully exposed.

Today's society is extremely culturally barren, and such a clumsy essay can attract widespread attention.

You know, in ancient times, children with a little traditional education could write better than this. At least the writing style is mellow, fresh and natural, and it runs through the style of Huaguo.

On the other hand, this short article is as boring as white water. I can't read the taste of culture, and I can't read the taste of China.

The idea is far-fetched, and it digresses thousands of miles!
As we all know, Guan Yu is loyal, and this article is so blatantly and blatantly modified as honesty, which shows the clumsiness of his literature and science. "

……

Yu Bingwei's supporters, seeing that Zhihu bosses are so good at criticizing "The Death of the Red Rabbit" from various angles, they immediately climaxed!
They were like eunuchs holding imperial edicts, and quickly reprinted these answers to the campus post bar, and fiercely countered those guys who praised "The Death of the Red Rabbit" to the sky and insisted on using Xu Qingru to step on Yu Bingwei.

Not to mention, with the group of full-fledged and top-notch Zhihu users as foreign aid, they really gained the upper hand for a while.

At this time, this full-score composition "The Death of the Red Rabbit" has been completely heated up, and it has become the current traffic password.

Xu Qingru, who was already out of style, has been hyped up again by marketing accounts. Before, she was nicknamed "The Most Military Training Goddess", but this time she was awarded the nicknames "The Most Aesthetic Goddess" and "The Most Beautiful Literature Goddess"!
The marketing accounts directly used her city-wide ranking list to hype her up. After all, she was "No. [-] in the city". With those beautiful pictures of her, it was indeed quite a gimmick, and it was normal for her to be nicknamed "The Most Aesthetic Goddess".

As for the origin of the nickname "The Most Beautiful Literature Goddess", of course, the topic was diverted to the recently popular full-score composition "Death of the Red Rabbit". Marketing accounts are the best at such things as traffic flow.

When "The Death of the Red Rabbit" was criticized in various ways, some rational netizens couldn't stand it anymore, and felt that those Zhihu bigwigs who only talk about it are too pretentious!
Since you feel that this composition is useless, why can't you write it in the exam?
Some people go directly to the bottom of the question on "Zhihu" and directly fight with the group of guys who look down on "The Death of the Red Rabbit"——

"This composition is easy to read with famous sayings and sayings, but there is no sense of stacking. The writing is clear and clear, and I am familiar with the history of the Three Kingdoms. These alone are enough to kill [-]% of people in seconds. Not to mention that this is a time-limited examination room composition. I think it is completely worthy Full marks!"

"It can be called a classic! The five virtues of benevolence, righteousness, propriety, wisdom, and trust have their reasons. Looking at the answers above, some people suspect that the composition is off topic, but it is actually on point.

The virtue of honesty is mentioned here through Chitu's mouth, because Guan Sheng, whose righteousness is so thin, has already been deeply rooted in the hearts of the people.

Only the master of benevolence and righteousness can cultivate the faith of the red rabbit.

Here, Chitu is clearly represented, and Guan Yu is secretly represented. It is meaningful to read!

If there is no virtue of benevolence and righteousness, there is no way to talk about the virtue of honesty!
Wonderful, wonderful..."

"In fact, it is very similar to Luo Guanzhong, the original author of "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms". As a student, he is already considered a high-level student, and his intentions are suitable and his language is fluent. It is really not easy to write such an exam composition in a limited time.

I believe that only those who really love classical literature can have this kind of background; only those who have read countless famous classics can have this quick wit.

I don’t want to brag about it, but I want to say, some people have to think about it before making a fuss. This is an exam composition. How can I have much time for you to think about it slowly? "

"The original text of "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms", just one sentence.

The general idea is that Guan Yu died, and then Chituma died of a hunger strike.

However, this examinee wrote such a composition in this way.At least I admire it.

Seeing that someone was asking for details, I went to find the original text, in Chapter 70 of No. [-]: Guan Gong in Yuquan Mountain showed his holiness, and Cao Cao in Luoyang City was moved.

There is a short section specially reserved in the middle, which is transcribed as follows.

After Guan Gong died, he sat down on the red rabbit horse and was captured by Ma Zhong and dedicated to Sun Quan.The right is to give Ma Zhong a seat.His horse died without eating grass for several days.

Then the following will refer to others.

The original text may want to show loyalty, just like what other respondents said.

But I can think of this small detail in such a short period of time, and then rewrite it into honesty. I don’t think it’s a sudden enlightenment, but I pay attention to and like to think when I usually read, so that I can write in one go.great. "

……

With the support of these lizhongke netizens, the reputation of "The Death of the Red Rabbit" has returned to its original height, because as an examination composition, its author is indeed quick-witted and talented!
And when Xu Qingru's loyal fans found out that this full-score essay was actually written by their fan, the "literary girl", they were even more excited!

These die-hard fans have the taste of fan circles, and as we all know, the combat effectiveness of fan circle fans is so powerful!
They are worried that the popularity of a treasure up owner like Xu Qingru is always lukewarm, so of course they should make good use of this opportunity to promote her, if it can make her famous.

They saw some Zhihu users who like to pretend to be aggressive, using "The Death of the Red Rabbit" to mock Xu Qingru's lack of talent, and they were immediately amused!

Where does "The Death of the Red Rabbit" go?
This is just an exam composition written in a hurry, how can it reflect Xu Qingru's true talent?

They directly use "Flying Bird Collection" to output on the face!
The funniest thing is that among the Zhihu users who ridiculed Xu Qingru for his lack of talent, there were some people's signatures, using the classic lines from "Flying Bird Collection"...

When this person was mocking, he probably never thought that the author of "Flying Bird Collection" was the one who wrote this full-score composition.

Not only is "Flying Bird Collection" used, but someone also used the phrase "Loneliness is a carnival for one person, carnival is the loneliness of a group of people", which is also from Xu Qingru's original lyrics!

You use her classic lines to pretend to be literary, and in turn mock her for not being literary?
Isn't this funny?
In addition to "Flying Bird Collection", Xu Qingru's fans exported quite a lot of ammunition, and they also released Xu Qingru's original songs, essays, etc.

When so many works that embody her talent and art are presented to the public, those who stare at "The Death of the Red Rabbit" will naturally become clowns in an instant!

All of a sudden, Xu Qingru's traffic on the Internet was like a dream back to the military training period!
Xu Qingru herself didn't care about the controversy about "The Death of the Red Rabbit" on the Internet at all, but such a composition with a perfect score can be so popular and arouse so many people's research and thinking, she has earned a wave of literary value!
After all, some people blacked out "The Death of the Red Rabbit" with reason and evidence, so they must read it carefully!
Some people who read carefully enough actually found the bug in this composition, that is, Guan Yu’s defeat in Maicheng was actually in 219 AD, Jian’an 24th year, but at the beginning of the composition, Jian’an 26th year was written.

Isn't this a huge mistake, so I concluded that it doesn't deserve full marks!
If Xu Qingru saw someone digging out the details like this, she would not become angry from embarrassment, but would only be secretly happy. After all, the more in-depth, serious, and insightful she reads, the more artistic value she will gain!

If you look at it this way, the well-founded sunspots provide more artistic value than those who have no brains to fan her and protect her.

After all, some die-hard fans are all fans of her directly. If it is about the work, it will be over without thinking.

……

In reality, the regular parent meeting after the midterm exam is finally about to be held.

In order to compete for the opportunity to participate in this parents' meeting, Xu Qingru's parents quarreled at home first...

Who made Xu Qingru get the first place in the city this time?

Who has such a child and doesn't want to rush to hold a parent-teacher meeting?
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