Liang Jian: I have a canteen
Chapter 1136 Revision
Xu San smiled. "Who would pay attention? As long as we open fire, it will definitely cause chaos. When there is chaos, we will run away. Then we can create a few more explosions to make the chaos worse."
No one asked many questions about Xu San's arrangements. They had developed the habit of never asking too many questions in the special operations team, so Xu San just had to focus on making his plans.
Akagi started making the detonator again, and Xu San also took out some papers, which were the script for tonight.
Hongye quickly read through it and exclaimed, "Mr. Xu's script is really well written. But I'm afraid that people at the gambling table won't follow the script."
After reading it, Hei Qi also added, "I'm afraid the casino run by the Black Dragon Society won't gamble with us honestly."
"Haha~" Xu San was very calm, "Don't worry about this, I'm here for you."
Time passed quickly, and an afternoon of busy work passed. It was dark before dinner was finished.
At this time, Xiaomei and her brother also came back, bringing with them a stack of developed photos and two manuscripts.
Xu San glanced at the photo casually and threw it to Xiaomei, "You can use the photo as you like."
After saying that, he began to browse the manuscript written by Xiaomei.
Not satisfied, the emotional mobilization is too poor, it looks like drinking plain water, there is a big gap compared with Wang Zhenzhen.
"Are you not satisfied?" Xiaomei asked in a low voice, looking at Xu San who looked dissatisfied.
"There's a lack of emotion and empathy in these two articles." Xu San said as he took out a pen and began to revise a manuscript.
The manuscript was in Chinese, so Xu San also used Chinese.
After making a few changes, Xu San drew a waveform on the back of the manuscript and marked the emotions. "Emotions need to be pulled together. Simple output is unlikely to arouse empathy, and readers are prone to fall asleep." Xiaomei nodded and accepted it humbly, because according to Xu San's revisions, she could indeed feel her emotions going up and down, and very intensely.
Good stake!
Xiaomei sighed in her heart, "These are just words. In reality, he is even better at playing with people's hearts. I am the victim."
Looking at the manuscript, Xiaomei polished it a little.
After all, Xu San's revisions were just simple revisions, and they were very straightforward and did not seem to have any literary talent at all.
Looking at Xiaomei's beautiful choice of words, Xu San couldn't help but frown. "This is a report, not a poetry competition. Simple short sentences can touch people's hearts more directly. Your words are a bit unfamiliar. People with low cultural level won't know what they mean. For example, if I don't read along with the sentence, I won't know what it means at all."
"This..." Xiaomei hesitated for a moment, but still started to revise it again according to Xu San's request.
Seeing Xiaomei writing reluctantly, Xu San reached out and touched her head, smiling and said, "You can revise it first. After you submit the manuscript, if you miss me, come to the Black Dragon Society's casino to find me."
Xiaomei reached out and knocked Xu San's hand away, pouting, "Who missed you!"
Xu San turned around and left with Heisaki and the others.
Xiaomei looked at Xu San's departing back and muttered softly, "Casino! Humph! You'll lose so much money that you'll even sell your wife!"
When Sun Wei heard this, he also murmured quietly, "Doesn't that mean we're going to sell Miss Liu Sheng off?"
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"Bullshit! I've finished revising it, hurry up and copy it for me." Xiaomei threw down her pen and said to Sun Wei unhappily.
"Hey~" Sun Wei sighed, "I'll copy, I'll copy! I'll hand it in quickly after I finish copying, and then go to the casino." (End of this chapter)
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