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Chapter 160 Direct Opening and Changing the Script (Subscription required)

Shi Dafu's ridicule immediately filled the classroom with a happy atmosphere.

someone said:
"Lin Bai, look, the moment you come, you make the teacher become a master of Yin-Yang again!"

Lin Bai didn't answer, but said to Shi Dafu, "I'm very familiar with the road."

Only then did Shi Dafu take a willing glance at Lin Bai, but he still couldn't forget the yin and yang: "I've been waiting for you for half a year, the school is so far away from Tianhe, isn't it?"

"I think you usually go back to school alone and keep a low profile occasionally."

Lin Bai: "..."

Again he didn't answer, just blinked his innocent eyes.

Indeed, Lin Bai would occasionally go back to school in the evening to walk or sit with Li Lanhui.

But seldom visit Shi Dafu by the way.

Because Shi Dafu and Li Lanhui have two opposite temperaments.

Moreover, how should I put it, the relationship between Shi Dafu and Lin Bai is actually quite interesting.

In name, Shi Dafu Zheng'er Bajing is Lin Bai's graduate tutor.

In fact, the relationship between Shi Dafu and Lin Bai is more like... the relationship between Pei Ming and Lin Bai.

In private, he joked wildly.

Often yin and yang strange.

Prefers cooperative mode.

Shi Dafu made an exception to recruit Lin Bai to study as his on-the-job graduate student, which brought Lin Bai many invisible benefits.

Generally, the higher the education level of an artist, the easier it is to obtain some national attention.

Respect talents.

Given the nature of Lin Bai's work, Shi Dafu obviously wanted to endorse Lin Bai's graduate degree.

Regardless of this point, from the very beginning, Shi Dafu said straight to the point that he co-created the script.

It can also be regarded as a kind of teacher and friend.

So, regardless of Shi Dafu's lively talk, if Lin Bai really ran to his house every other day, he should be disgusted again.

Shi Dafu may have finally felt at ease, he stopped embarrassing Lin Bai, and said instead: "Let's get down to business."

"After half a year of polishing and Xiaolin's online checking, the script has been drafted together in the last half month, and the big frame of the script has come out."

"Xiaolin, tell me what you think first?"

Lin Bai looked at Shi Dafu, and looked at Xu Zewen, who was sitting upright and not daring to move: "I want to give the old Xu the leading role first."

In this regard, everyone present is not surprised.

Shi Dafu didn't hesitate at all, and asked directly: "The hero or the hero?"

"Master."

"which one?"

"One knife or the end of the world."

"Then let's decide the end of the world."

Lin Bai nodded again and again, and then said to Xu Zewen: "Old Xu, it's rare to go back to school, let's revisit it."

Xu Zewen hurriedly got up when he heard the words, then bent down to thank: "Thank you."

Then I walked out of the classroom.

This is the reason why Lin Bai brought Xu Zewen to show up. Bringing people here obviously meant to open the back door by force.

Shi Dafu nodded, and the matter was settled.

Correct.

It is directly completed, not half completed.

In Azure Star itself, the screenwriter has a lot of rights. If the on-site director and actors want to change the script, the screenwriter can't do without nodding.

And Shi Dafu is the worst among the screenwriters who are still active.

The top screenwriter in the top stream.

No kidding.

It is the first time for a Chinese-language film and television drama to receive a TV drama script with a licensing fee of 2000 million yuan.

Shi Dafu is not only looking at Lin Bai's face, but also Lin Bai's contribution in the script is not low.

Although Lin Bai hadn't been to this classroom for several months, Lin Bai participated online every time the progress was summarized.

The point is, when Lin Bai has references, the ideas he puts forward are all wonderful.

That's why Shi Dafu said that it was Lin Bai who was in charge.

After obtaining the work "No. 1 in the World" on the [-]st, Lin Bai gave a lot of revision suggestions at one time.

Then everyone rushed to draft a wave.

It can be said that the first edition has been formed. Of course, it is the beggar’s edition, and many details still need to be polished.

After all... We must believe that every contestant engaged in text creation has the best ability to rush to the limit.

The contribution of Bolin Bai is still very large. After all, he has carried a successful work, and the content is a bit crushed and there is no problem.

Of course, the point is that Shi Dafu is not withdrawn or selfish.

If so, he would not have invited Lin Bai in the morning.

Shi Dafu is willing to follow the advice of the good and reasonable, and he is not pedantic.

Just because Lin Bai's contribution exceeds the standard, he will not just push back the negotiated 2000 million script authorization fee.

He said very bluntly that if you have money, you don't make a bastard.

And still earn capitalists' money.

Moreover, Shi Dafu's contribution is not low.

The "No. [-] Under Heaven" work that Lin Bai got was the released version, not the original version. In fact, there are many things that can be improved.

On Earth, because the actor playing the role of Duan Tianya was injured, a large number of scenes were cut, and some stories were actually incomplete.

At last……

That's where the discussion starts now.

The current first edition episodes exceed the standard and are slightly water-filled.

Because there are only 35 episodes of "No. 25 in the World", and the work Shi Dafu received was requested to be kept within [-] episodes as much as possible.

Not to mention that Shi Dafu and Wu Ming added some of their own exquisite ideas.

Well... looking at it this way, the water injection is a bit serious.

…………

After Xu Zewen left, Shi Dafu asked everyone to discuss without saying a word.

Wu Ming was the first to put forward his own opinion: "My idea is to delete it first."

"Deleting from the frame is a bit too much movement, isn't it?"

"Delete it on the frame to save trouble later."

"But the frame is nice."

Lin Bai also expressed his opinion: "Delete after writing. If you want to save trouble first, you should find trouble first."

Shi Dafu just laughed: "I agree to delete after writing, but on this basis, the workload is heavy now, and you are a busy person, so I am afraid that you will leave before the day you finish writing, right..."

"Hahaha." Everyone laughed.

This is indeed a big problem.

This is also the starting point for Wu Ming to delete first, because Lin Bai's thinking is dominated by the script.

Then, everyone heard Lin Bai say indifferently: "I will write the master."

"The main body of the framework now has 20 words, and the total is less than 35 words. The deletions, deletions, and deletions need to be written no more than 20 words."

"There are so many of us, let's divide it up. It's no problem to have [-] words per person a day. The first edition of the series can be finished in four days."

"Don't tell me I can't write [-] words a day."

Wu Ming gritted his teeth, but still nodded: "Yes."

As a graduate student of screenwriting theory, codewords are the basic ability.

And they all went from undergraduate to postgraduate, so how could they never explode.

Lin Bai took the initiative to take the initiative, and of course everyone had no objections, and then the brainstorming began.

"There are a lot of mixed things, so we still need to do a little subtraction first."

"There's nothing wrong with that."

"The role of Tianya was originally scheduled to have a small role."

"You have the final say, don't look at me."

"..."

It took a full three hours before and after this brainstorming session ended.

Although Lin Bai has complete works, they still need to be localized.

Mainly... there really are better ideas.

The sky was already dark, Lin Bai got into the Land Rover and looked at Xu Zewen in the driver's seat.

"Start martial arts training tomorrow."

"clear."

"This drama is very group portrait, there is no real male lead, it depends on individual performance."

"Well, I understand."

"In the past few days, I'm going to write the script, and I'll write a biography for you by the way. I don't have anything to think about, so I can't show you the book yet."

"Thanks."

"It's useless to talk nonsense. If you can't stand out like this, I'll kill you!"

"Who do you look down on? Who doesn't know that I am the actor with a thousand faces!"

"..."

…………

On the morning of the 13th, Xu Zewen went to a crash course in film and television martial arts.

After all, it is a world where there are even training classes for professional artists.

Of course, there are institutions such as film and television martial arts crash training courses, even if martial arts are in decline.

There are still many actors who want to find another way and specialize in stardom.

And there is no shortage of play scenes in all kinds of film and television works.

Xu Zewen is also a third-line actor, and Xingchen will still coordinate with this little resource.

However, Lin Bai started to code words.

How can the affairs of scholars be counted as plagiarism?

And there will be changes.

Lin Bai's only feeling is that it is much more difficult than when writing the MV script before.

The writing skills are still low.

But Lin Bai didn't add points, attribute points are very expensive, just copying books, so don't waste too much.

Theoretically, the first version of the script and episode can be completed in 4 days, but in fact it was not finally completed until the evening of the 19th.

It took the whole 7 days.

This is the result of Wu Ming and the others being furious.

Lin Bai was relatively relaxed.

Although... the screenwriter's attribute has increased a lot.

Screenwriter: LV3 (68/100)+
Dedicated to modifying and adjusting a complete TV drama script, the improvement brought to Lin Bai is not small.

If he really wrote a script like "No. [-] in the World" by himself, he would probably be able to reach the first-class level after writing two or three.

That is, LV5~LV6.

So, now the rate of increase is quite normal.

.........

On the afternoon of the 20th, Lin Bai returned to school again.

As before, just brainstorm.

Now there is already a first version of the script and series, although Lin Bai's intervention is still relatively rough, but the discussion is obviously more specific.

After more than an hour, a preliminary revision opinion was formed.

Then it is to assign modules to modify.

In this way, on the afternoon of the 22nd, after another discussion, Shi Dafu looked at Lin Bai: "Do you have any ideas?"

Hearing this, Lin Bai smiled: "Then hang up."

Shi Dafu looked at Lin Bai with such an expression on his face, and sighed: "In the past ten days, the level of screenwriting has almost risen to a higher level. Such a big improvement, I really hold my breath."

"I don't blame the music industry for calling you a music artist. You were born to eat art."

Wu Ming was deeply convinced: "Yao Xiang could only provide ideas at the beginning, and slowly began to gain the level of beginners in the middle."

"It's stronger than I should be now."

other people:"……"

Lin Bai knew that no one would believe him when he told the truth, and he was used to it.

Pull out the system panel and start adding points:
[Screenwriter attribute upgrade LV4, bonus attribute points*20]

Screenwriter: LV4 (100.5/200)+
[Attribute point: 833]

I spent 22, rewarded 20, and lost 2 attribute points.

After adding points, there was a slight pause, Lin Bai looked at Shi Dafu: "Teacher, you still have to take me with you."

Shi Dafu nodded slightly.

then……

[The hall-level screenwriter experience card has been used, the countdown is 59 minutes and 59 seconds]

(End of this chapter)