Two-dimensional: The goal is to heal the master

Chapter 118 Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu

"You are squeezing the employees, I want to protest." The half-dead Xia Yu leaned on the table, and now he felt that he was a waste without any ideals at all, and being able to lie down was already the limit.

"Mr. Xia Yu, this task is not too difficult, but one of my writers recently encountered a writing bottleneck. I thought you are both excellent young writers. Maybe we can talk to each other so that both of you can grow..." Machida Sonoko

"What kind of novel does he write?" Xia Yu raised his head and looked at Machida Yuanzi with half-closed eyes.

"This is a romance novel." Sonoko Machida

"Love novels..." Xia Yu didn't speak, but stared straight at the other party. Machida Sonoko's heart beat a little when he said nothing.

"Just look, I've lived for so many years, have I ever had a girlfriend?" Xia Yu was speechless to Machida Yuanzi.

"That... the author of that romance novel has never been in a relationship, and she is also a female writer who is about the same age as Mr. Xia Yu."

"I've never been in love and wrote a love novel. Isn't that purely funny?" Xia Yu suddenly remembered a brainless love novel he had read in his previous life.

That domineering president spent huge sums of money on the heroine's birthday to buy a nuclear bomb and showed it to the heroine, and said that as long as the heroine likes it, he can show it to her every day.

Xia Yu just wants to say six about this, and has never touched any love stories again.

"It's really rude! Could it be that people who haven't learned how to eat can't eat? In my opinion, what Teacher Xia Yu said has no scientific basis. Any expert who contributes is just as disgusting."

At this moment, Xia Yu, who was still lying on the table like a salted fish, saw the long black silk legs that were full of sensuality, and made people feel tempted to touch him. come over.

Seeing this scene, Xia Yu instinctively raised his spirits, and then his face was filled with astonishment. He was very surprised to see this person here.

"Mr. Xia Shizi, this time we have something to ask Mr. Xia Yu for help, can you please stop making trouble?" Machida Yuanzi looked at another writer in her family, very helpless.

"So it's Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's classmate, hello." Xia Yu withdrew the astonishment on his face, and communicated with Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu as usual.

"Are you... An Yilun's junior friend?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu looked at the guy who had met once before.

Seeing this person, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu frowned subconsciously. From her personal point of view, she didn't like Xia Yu.

Not to mention the last time An Yilun asked her and Ying Lili to sit in the screening room and wait for this boy and another girl.

For example, because of the game he wanted to make, An Yilun also gave up being the editor-in-chief to learn some programming, which made her listless recently. She didn't like this guy in front of her very much.

"Then, is Lun Yejun's senior interested in helping?"

"Originally, I didn't intend to help, but after all, the two of us are destined, and I don't mind offering some suggestions for Mr. Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's novel." Xia Yu said, stretched and stood up. Although he can enjoy the scenery he likes to see if he lies on his stomach, but that is really rude, and he is not as good as a ghost.

"Oh? I don't know what suggestions this teacher Xia Yu can give to my novel?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu raised her eyebrows with interest. She thinks that her novels have already achieved the best among her peers in terms of plot, even if it is Those well-known love writers have all praised the lifelike characters of the girls they wrote.

Although the magical girl Madoka written by Xia Yu is an excellent work, Kasumigaoka Shiwa who has a high vision also thinks it can't compare.

However, the lines are like a mountain. Although Xia Yu and herself are both writers, she doesn't think Xia Yu, who writes novels completely different from hers, will offer any constructive suggestions.

Recently, I was only annoyed by Machida Sonoko's urging, and I didn't know how to write a new work, so I chose to follow the editor to come here.

In short, she didn't have any expectations for Xia Yu.

"Ms. Xia Shizi's work is called Love Metronome, right?" Xia Yu had a smile on his face.

"Yeah." Xiazhiqiu Shiyu nodded and admitted.

"The image structure of women in the love metronome written by teacher Xia Shizi is very vivid and vivid, which makes people impressed at first glance and makes people feel good, but at the same time, there is also a very serious problem."

"That's why your male lead is too boring and useless." Xia Yu said with disgust on his face when he mentioned the male lead.

"The male protagonist is useless..." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu frowned when she heard Xia Yu's words. The question of the male protagonist has always been a serious concern for her.

When I read the comments and feedback from the readers, I always said all kinds of bad things about the male lead here, and I wish I could kill the male lead and get a replacement. In their words, I can do it myself.

"I think the biggest characteristic of the male lead in the harem is that there is something that attracts the female lead. Whether it's appearance, personality, or falling in love with the male lead because of certain events, these are all normal actions, although It's the same thing, but that's what readers eat."

"The only thing that makes readers feel uncomfortable is that the hero is too useless."

"Except for those strange people who like to read the main character's story, most of the rest of the people will subconsciously bring themselves into the male lead's point of view to look at the problem, which also leads to people who are already aggrieved enough in reality to see that they are worse than themselves. It makes people uncomfortable to have a cowardly, indecisive, ordinary-looking male protagonist who, just because of his gentleness, has gained the favor of a group of beautiful girls who are satisfied in real life just by looking at it."

Xia Yu said a long list of opinions in one breath, and then took a long breath, "So, things like the hero should be pleasing to everyone's eyes."

"Oh!? Teacher Xia Yu, if you were to create a male protagonist, how would you write it?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu was surprised when she heard Xia Yu's unconventional analysis, and became respectful of Xia Yu's attitude and title. stand up.

"If I was writing a male protagonist, I would definitely write a real male protagonist. I would chat with normal boys of the same age about interesting topics, and I would pay more attention to beautiful girls. In terms of personality, I just need to be different. It’s okay to be scum, it’s probably this kind of male protagonist!” Xia Yu pouted his chin and said what kind of male protagonist he thinks is the best to write.

"A hero like you can't even compare to a gentle hero, Mr. Xia Yu."

"I don't think there is any need to compete. It just needs to be liked by male audiences and not disgusted by female audiences. After all, I am not a god, so I can't satisfy everyone's needs." Xia Yu didn't care

(End of this chapter)