Two-dimensional: The goal is to heal the master

Chapter 223 Returning to China
Rabbit House Café,
Xia Yu sat opposite a mature and elegant woman with light yellow, medium-length sandy curly hair and dull sky blue eyes.

The person sitting in front of him is none other than Qingshan Lanshan, who is known as Brother Xun in the Diantu anime.

Although the reason why this meme first appeared was because TX bought the broadcasting rights, in the sixth episode of Aoyama's sentence "それではまた徘ってきます", the subtitle of TX was written as [I'm wandering again], which caused Aoyama and Lanshan to get the same as Mr. nickname, but this does not prevent Xia Yu from knowing that Qingshan Lanshan is an excellent writer.

"Mr. Qingshan, what do you think is the best way to modify this copywriting?" Although he has played Clannad games and can remember most of Clannad's lines, Xia Yu doesn't want to let go of any opportunity to improve, just like what he has in mind. Think like that.

He will try his best to present the best works to everyone.

"Well... let me see..." Qingshan Lanshan is a very familiar and kind person, and he is happy to help Xia Yu improve his works.

After a few glances, she covered her mouth in surprise and looked at Xia Yu, "This is a wonderful copy! You can feel the delicate and gentle heart of the writer and the message he wants to convey from the copy." emotion."

After Qingshan Lanshan commented, he took the copy from Xia Yu's hand and read it carefully. The pen in his hand dangled in the air for a long time without dropping it.

"Xia Yujun, I don't think there is a big problem with the copywriting. It is very interesting and touching. If you can deepen the emotions of each protagonist, for example... When the parents of Kotomi Ichinose, a scientist, died in a plane crash, why I would choose to discard all the documents and materials and choose to stuff the doll that Ichinose Kotomi wanted into the suitcase. This ending is very good. On the other hand, I choose to save the files...Although this may be more correct..." Aoyama Lanshan proposed himself followed by a little silence, "Xia Yujun, I can feel that this route does not seem to be comprehensive enough, just like someone cut off a corner and replaced it with a more suitable fabric. I think life can pursue rigor, but There is no such need for novels and copywriting.”

"Miss Qingshan, what do you mean?"

"Life itself is a miracle, so it doesn't matter if it's more dreamy or romantic!" Qingshan Lanshan took a sip of coffee and handed the copy to Xia Yu again with a smile.

"Then, Mr. Qingshan Lanshan, since life itself is a kind of miracle, can you trigger a miracle and finish your unfinished novel before the deadline of only three days left?" A stern voice said With a serious voice, Rin Maite, the editor-in-chief of Mr. Qingshan Lanshan, looked at Qingshan Lanshan coldly without a smile on his face.

Qingshan and Lanshan put down their coffee cups with a smile on their faces, and slowly opened their half-closed eyes.

"Xia Yujun help me take the coffee money, and I will give it back to you when we meet next time!" Qingshan Lanshan said this, left his seat and ran out of the coffee shop at a speed so fast that an afterimage flashed.

"Teacher Qingshan Lanshan! Wait for me! Today, even if you go to the ends of the earth, you have to hand in the manuscript to me!!!" Maite Rin saw his teacher running away, gritted his teeth, and quickly followed.

Xia Yu: ...

Looking at the green mountains and blue mountains in the distance, Xia Yu suddenly felt that this guy was a little unreliable, but for the sake of helping him solve his confusion, he should pay for her.

"My beloved, pay the bill." Xia Yu shouted towards the counter, but instead of my beloved, Zhi Nai ran over to pay the bill.

"Do you pay for two cups of coffee together?"

"Yes."

"total is……"

Xia Yu handed Chino the coffee money and gave her a one-euro tip as encouragement.

"Dear! Cheer up!" Tian Zuo Lishi's voice attracted the attention of the two of them, and they saw that she was holding Baodeng Xinai, whose face was flushed, sweat was dripping from her head, and she looked exhausted, and she was a little anxious.

"What happened?" Xiangfeng Chino saw this scene and ran forward quickly, asking with concern.

"It's just a fever, I can continue to work!" Baodeng Xinai was very weak, but her expression was extremely firm.

"Why do you have to do this?" Xiangfeng Chino was shocked, she couldn't imagine that Beloved could work so hard.

"The day after tomorrow...the day after tomorrow... my sister is coming!" Baoden's heart had already begun to lose sight because of her dizzy head, and she fainted before Kafu Chino asked what the relationship between the two was.

If it is placed in the key society universe, it may become a terminal illness that kills people, but this is the real world and it is still in the plot of the rabbit,

Xinai just fainted a few minutes ago, and sat up again with an ice pack on his head a few minutes later, smiling foolishly, a little embarrassed, "Sorry, I made everyone worry, I want to behave better, as a little girl Chino's older sister behaved better."

"Is my beloved sister serious?" Xiangfeng Chino was slightly relieved after seeing Baodeng's beloved wake up, and asked curiously.

Snapped!
The door opened again, carrying two large suitcases in her hands, and Rita, who was followed by Mashiro Shiina, pushed open the door of the cafe with her hand, and looked at Xia Yu with rather unfriendly eyes.

"What time is it, why don't you drink coffee here! Don't you want to fly back to China!?"

"So today is the time for us to return to China? I thought it was tomorrow..." Xia Yu's expression was a little embarrassed.

"Going back to China?" The two people who were asking about Baodeng's favorite situation, together with Baodeng's favorite, pulled their attention away from beloved, and looked at Xia Yu and Zhenbai curiously.

"The editor urged us to go back and hand in the manuscript, so we have to go back. Love, Rishi, and Chino, I will bring you island specialties when I come back next time." Shiina Mashiro looked at Baodeng Koai with some reluctance. I guess it will take another few months to come back?
"Mashiro, go at ease! When you come back next time, I will definitely improve the level of making baumkuchen again, and I will definitely make the baumkuchen more delicious than my sister, no! Beyond my mother!" My beloved heard Shiina Mashiro is about to I was also extremely reluctant to leave, and cried even more sadly than when I was touched by the graduation ceremony before.

"Brother Xia Yu, sister Zhenbai, be careful on the way back." Zhi Nai said these words because he was indifferent by nature and didn't know what to say.

And Tianzao Lishi took out an ak47 from his locker in the staff lounge?

"Xia Yu, Zhenbai, although we have only been together for a short time this time, you are already my good friends, take this model gun back as a souvenir!" said Rishi Tianzao with great reluctance.

"No, I feel that it is impossible for us to go back after taking this model gun..." Xia Yu looked at this simulation model gun, and couldn't help but recall in his mind a few years ago because he bought a replica gun in Taiwan and it turned out to be powerful enough to pierce through it. The buddy who went in with paper.

　Although I still want to write some rabbits for a while, I want to write Clannad more, so let the protagonist go back in advance, and come here again on vacation in the future.

　　
　
(End of this chapter)