Fanmeng: I am about to be invincible with dual artifacts at the start!
Chapter 41 Open a single chapter
Chapter 41 Open a single chapter
It's not that everyone's vision has deteriorated, it's simply that I didn't write well.
I'll take care of it later, let's have lunch first.
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In fact, this book originally wanted to write about dreams.
The battlefield is to kill players to upgrade, and the way to God is to fight monsters to upgrade. I want to write this book as a mission upgrade (that is, the only way to upgrade is to do missions)
That's why there are only dream missions at the beginning, and we focus on dream missions.
The original theme of this book is: the protagonist enters people's dreams with other players, kills monsters in the dream, completes tasks and gets rewards to keep getting stronger.It is an existence similar to an urban game dungeon.
The original setting was: the magic core came here to induce illusions.But the power of the magic core is too weak, so it can only invade people's dreams first, and collect their fear and other negative emotions to strengthen themselves.Under the guidance of fantasy dreams, players enter people's dreams, eliminate monsters and disperse nightmares, and only come to the present world if they cannot be eliminated.
But when I wrote it later, I gradually discovered many disadvantages of this setting.
The most important point is: the fantasy content is single, the gameplay is too low, and the story of the present world accounts for a large proportion.
So I temporarily added a dream battlefield later on, intending to improve the gameplay, but in this way, the dream missions in the previous article became meaningless, and some related settings in the previous article were forced to reduce the sense of existence, but the gameplay did not improve much.
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I was sleepwalking while writing the previous chapters.
Spirit Wheel Spirit Mantra, Mind Outline Method. Deviate from the game step by step - the setting is complicated
The double artifact, a piece of seeing through lies, was originally intended to be used to obtain real information from lies and gain insight into all conspiracies, but in order not to increase the content of the world, it was not used later.Another artifact is that even the protagonist himself doesn't know the specific effect-the gold finger is written in a mess, and the sense of existence is not high.
Originally, I wanted to write a protagonist with both support and combat power, but at the beginning I chose the Zhu family, but I didn't do the support work that the Zhu family did, but kept improving the combat power-the protagonist's positioning was unclear.
The protagonist has never had a clear goal, running around like a headless chicken - the protagonist's goal is not clear.
The content of the game is small, but there are many plots in the present world—I am not very good at writing the present world, but I did not write it well, and readers who like games are also disappointed.
I don't like conspiracies in the world, but I wrote it at the beginning-deviating from my usual relaxed writing style.
Later, I changed the title of the book, the introduction, and the chapters. As a result, the title and introduction were both biased towards the game, but many parts of the previous article had little to do with the game, which greatly affected the perception of new readers.
——I don't even know what I was thinking when I saved the manuscript. Looking back, there are problems everywhere.
Now I plan to finish it early before it goes on the shelves, and finish it at a super fast pace. (The pace is fast, so I don't care about some details)
At least the follow-up should be explained clearly.
-
Thank you for your expectations of me. Looking back now, a certain phantom god feels like a fate that should have been doomed, maybe it was a blessing in disguise.
I feel lucky to fail once, to learn a lesson I will never forget, and to get a permanent promotion.
At least when I was young.
(End of this chapter)
It's not that everyone's vision has deteriorated, it's simply that I didn't write well.
I'll take care of it later, let's have lunch first.
-
In fact, this book originally wanted to write about dreams.
The battlefield is to kill players to upgrade, and the way to God is to fight monsters to upgrade. I want to write this book as a mission upgrade (that is, the only way to upgrade is to do missions)
That's why there are only dream missions at the beginning, and we focus on dream missions.
The original theme of this book is: the protagonist enters people's dreams with other players, kills monsters in the dream, completes tasks and gets rewards to keep getting stronger.It is an existence similar to an urban game dungeon.
The original setting was: the magic core came here to induce illusions.But the power of the magic core is too weak, so it can only invade people's dreams first, and collect their fear and other negative emotions to strengthen themselves.Under the guidance of fantasy dreams, players enter people's dreams, eliminate monsters and disperse nightmares, and only come to the present world if they cannot be eliminated.
But when I wrote it later, I gradually discovered many disadvantages of this setting.
The most important point is: the fantasy content is single, the gameplay is too low, and the story of the present world accounts for a large proportion.
So I temporarily added a dream battlefield later on, intending to improve the gameplay, but in this way, the dream missions in the previous article became meaningless, and some related settings in the previous article were forced to reduce the sense of existence, but the gameplay did not improve much.
-
I was sleepwalking while writing the previous chapters.
Spirit Wheel Spirit Mantra, Mind Outline Method. Deviate from the game step by step - the setting is complicated
The double artifact, a piece of seeing through lies, was originally intended to be used to obtain real information from lies and gain insight into all conspiracies, but in order not to increase the content of the world, it was not used later.Another artifact is that even the protagonist himself doesn't know the specific effect-the gold finger is written in a mess, and the sense of existence is not high.
Originally, I wanted to write a protagonist with both support and combat power, but at the beginning I chose the Zhu family, but I didn't do the support work that the Zhu family did, but kept improving the combat power-the protagonist's positioning was unclear.
The protagonist has never had a clear goal, running around like a headless chicken - the protagonist's goal is not clear.
The content of the game is small, but there are many plots in the present world—I am not very good at writing the present world, but I did not write it well, and readers who like games are also disappointed.
I don't like conspiracies in the world, but I wrote it at the beginning-deviating from my usual relaxed writing style.
Later, I changed the title of the book, the introduction, and the chapters. As a result, the title and introduction were both biased towards the game, but many parts of the previous article had little to do with the game, which greatly affected the perception of new readers.
——I don't even know what I was thinking when I saved the manuscript. Looking back, there are problems everywhere.
Now I plan to finish it early before it goes on the shelves, and finish it at a super fast pace. (The pace is fast, so I don't care about some details)
At least the follow-up should be explained clearly.
-
Thank you for your expectations of me. Looking back now, a certain phantom god feels like a fate that should have been doomed, maybe it was a blessing in disguise.
I feel lucky to fail once, to learn a lesson I will never forget, and to get a permanent promotion.
At least when I was young.
(End of this chapter)
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