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Chapter 359 Textbook-style writing guidance (Supplement 10)

Song Huanxi's pen hung on the paper, but did not move for a long time.

Guo Yunchen saw the difficulty of surpassing, but he didn't know that it was even more difficult to surpass Mr. Hongchen, whom he called "Mr. Hongchen"!
Fundamentally speaking, the original concept of Qin Dao's version of Liang Shanbo came from Song Huanxi's practice in the screenwriting class of the student training class.

In other words, what Song Huanxi wants to surpass is not others, but herself.

No matter which writer, when he conceives a novel, the protagonist he originally set must be a perfect character created by gathering all his ingenuity and exhausting the aura of heaven and earth.

If he wants to overthrow the original concept and create a better version, the original version will keep jumping out to thwart him.

Song Huanxi is in such a situation now.

All she could think of was the image of Liang Shanbo sitting behind the desk, looking at her with a smile, as if he had everything under his control!
What's even more disgusting is that he also has the face of Guo Hansang!

Song Huanxi was in a stalemate for a long time, and finally put down her pen. She remembered that Mr. No Drinking and No Joy said that when you can't write, just look at the information you have accumulated.

The power you have accumulated is far more powerful than you think.

Information, what information does she have about Butterfly Lovers?
Unexpectedly, Song Huanxi began to recall the Butterfly Lovers scripts written by other students in the training class.

Well, the first one is the cowardly version of Liang Shanbo, which can also be called the Liang Shanbo who is soft on the outside but tough on the inside. He was forced to show his strength but was punished by the bully Ma Wencai. He soon woke up and decided to join the army. With his little wisdom, he deliberately made mistakes in the exam papers. The name of Ma Wencai was written on it, and he rebelled against the general.

Then there is the overturning group. Zhou Qi’s group overturned the car on the first day, but it was impressive the next day. Song Huanxi would like to call it a calm version of Liang Shanbo——

Handsomeness means justice, I just look handsome!
The third group is impressive, the heroic version of Zhu Yingtai, the three of them sleep together after drinking, and their son looks more and more like Ma Wencai as he grows older!
The last group——

It was she who created the perfect character, and was even spotted by Qin Dao, who turned it into a sinister version of Liang Shanbo in the script!
As a result, she just went out to film a scene, and was turned into a butterfly specimen by Guan Zhizhou and photographed on the wall!
At that time, I couldn't laugh or cry after reading the script, but now, Song Huanxi just wants to laugh.

As she reminisced, she wrote down the key points of each group's different versions of "Butterfly Lovers". Unknowingly, a smile spread across the corners of her eyes and eyebrows like a creeper climbing up a wall.

When all four groups were finished writing, Song Huanxi picked up the notes and looked at them with a smile——

The cowardly version of Liang Shanbo
Calm version of Liang Shanbo
The heroic version of Zhu Yingtai
The sinister version of Liang Shanbo
Song Huanxi was slightly startled. She suddenly discovered something. Butterfly Lovers, Liang Shanbo and Zhu Yingtai were obviously love stories between two people, but each version had only one character, which was impressive.

Her eyes fell on Qin Dao's script version of "Butterfly Lovers" in front of her again——

The version of "Butterfly Lovers" adopted by Pei seems to have the same problem? !

Zhuge Shanbo can almost become a god, but what about Yingtai?
Oh, she's playing hide and seek, hide and seek.

She was hiding from Liang Shanbo who dragged her out to take a bath with her. She was hiding from Ma Wencai, a poor student, who wanted to make her stay up late to study at night. She was hiding from the balls that were always flying toward her intentionally or unintentionally during the Cuju competition!

This heroine——

It seems like anyone can act.

For a moment, several female classmates from the actor training class appeared in Song Huanxi's mind, Shen Mengru, Zhu Shengxiao, Zhou Qi——

It really can be played by anyone.

Song Huanxi frowned unconsciously. No, it shouldn't be like this. A character should be recognizable. She should be irreplaceable!
Song Huanxi looked to the right. There was a thick pile of letters neatly stacked. There was even a note on each letter, noting the time of communication and the main content of the letter.Song Huanxi directly picked up the letter at the top - after her "Gillian and Aqiang" became a popular serial, Mr. No Drinking, No Joy, finally began to discuss deeper writing issues with her.

Just like this one.

"Nuwa created so many people, and they all have two noses and one eye. What makes different people different?

I think it’s personality, a unique personality!
For example, a housewife's daily job is to clean the room, cook three meals a day, and maybe send the children to school——

If you write it this way, then she is just an ordinary housewife, so ordinary that readers will not have any impression of her after reading the story.

What if the housewife, after sending her children away and cleaning the room, puts on a beautiful dress, sits on the balcony, sunbathes and drinks red wine?
Doesn’t it feel like she is very elegant and has a lot of personality?
The trivial housework did not bury her beauty at all? "

Song Huanxi has read this textbook-like writing guide countless times, and now that she is reading it again, she still feels that it has benefited a lot.

She put down the letter in her hand, and her eyes fell on the notes in front of her again, thoughtfully——

In the five versions of Zhu Yingtai, except for the deviant Zhu Yingtai, are the other four like the ordinary housewives in Mr. No Drinking's example?
She is just an ordinary lady, a little lively but not individual enough, so it is difficult to impress people.

As for the heroic version of Zhu Yingtai——

Song Huanxi's brows furrowed, and he was too bold. It is no exaggeration to say that it is reasonable to say that this person is a man disguised as a woman.

So, how should she write her English in order to impress others?
Think about it the other way around, what is the thing that a lady of the world can’t do?
Climb trees, dig out bird eggs, make fires to barbecue, drink wine and eat meat——

Song Huanxi's brows furrowed again. These did not seem to be skills that a lady should master, just like the housewife who drank in her spare time. It could be her own habit.

Song Huanxi glanced at the draft subconsciously, and three Liang Shanbos side by side jumped into his eyes——

What if... someone took her to do these things with her? !
And this person is-

Liang Shanbo!
Song Huanxi's eyes became brighter and brighter, and the images of Zhu Yingtai and Liang Shanbo became clearer and clearer in her mind. Finally, the two of them raised their feet at the same time and kicked away Zhuge Shanbo who was smiling calmly behind the desk!

Song Huanxi took a deep breath, her thoughts welling up like a spring. Her hand seemed to have self-awareness, and she wrote quickly:

...Zhu Yingtai was like a fledgling bird, sitting on the carriage and looking out the window, feeling that everything was so fresh.

Until someone blocked the car.

"Brother, are you going to study at a mountain academy?"

Zhu Yingtai looked over and saw that the man blocking the road looked talented and polite. He immediately fell in love with him and couldn't help but said: "Exactly, dear man -"

"Oh, Uncle Liang Shan is the one sent by the academy to pick up Xiongtai from the mountain."

Zhu Yingtai was overjoyed and asked: "Are you a professor of the academy?"

Liang Shanbo smiled and said nothing, and Zhu Yingtai took it as his acquiescence.

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(End of this chapter)