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Chapter 45 Don't Offend Those Who Write Novels (Part [-])

Song Huanxi didn't know about Guo Yunchen's change of mind.

Although she has decided to temporarily close the pen, after receiving a reply letter from Mr. Fine Wine and Stories, who has changed her name to "Wonton Shop", she still couldn't help asking him for advice, and shared "The Story of the Wonton Shop" and Rongchang's rejection of the manuscript. , and mailed it together.

Of course, Song Huanxi re-transcribed Rongchang's rejection letter—for Mr. Ugly, she has a subtle mentality that her family's ugliness should not be publicized.

A day later, Song Huanxi received a reply letter from No Drinking No Joy.

"Miss Yixiao, hello, you see what you say.

I have read all the manuscripts and letters, and I think the other party's evaluation is very appropriate.

Your writing and literary talents have already entered the room, and the character image you created is also very full. "

Song Huanxi was so happy that what the hero saw was exactly the same!

Mr. No Wine, No Joy gave her the same comment as Mr. Ugly Words!
"However--"

No wine, no joy, change the subject:
"What about your story?

Indeed, I saw Brother Fugui, I saw A Tubo, and I saw a shadow sitting in a corner drinking coffee——

Just when I was looking forward to what story would happen between them, you ended? "

Song Huanxi frowned, and Mr. Ugly's evaluation was still the same, but she was a little confused.

story?Brother A Sheng and A Shui Bo, such a rich experience, isn't it a story?
Mr. Ugly's suggestion is to watch more movies, and she has a plan for this: when the training class starts tomorrow, she will ask Director Zou, Mrs. Pei, if there is a movie screening room or something like that!
Rongchang Films has all the facilities, and the Pei family, which is comparable, should have it too, right?
I don't know what kind of advice Mr. No Drinking No Joy will give——

Song Huanxi couldn't wait to read on:

"Take "The Story of the Wonton Shop" you wrote as an example.

Among them, Atubo's experience can be written as an independent story.

For example, after A Tubo retired from his career, and his son provoked public outrage, would there be such a scene: the neighbors who were shopping, complaining with each other, gradually became angry, and shouted for A Tubo to come out?

If you were a passer-by and saw such a commotion, would you stop and take a look at the commotion?
When your readers see such a scene, will they want to stand with you, take out a handful of melon seeds, and watch this excitement together? "

"Look, this is supposed to be the funniest part of the whole story, and you didn't write it at all!
Because Atubo's experience is just what you heard, not what you saw with your own eyes, so you don't realize which part is interesting. "

A hit!

Song Huanxi is like pulling out the clouds to see the sun, and suddenly enlightened and enlightened!
Indeed, whether it was Brother A Sheng or Uncle A Shui, she was just hearsay, she neither saw it with her own eyes, nor did she take it into account!
Song Huanxi's spirit was refreshed, and he felt that this Mr. No Drinking, No Joy, could predict things like a god, he was really a god!

Song Huanxi watched it intently:

"Solving this problem is both simple and difficult. What you lack is experience, and experience takes time to accumulate.

You need to observe the things around you more, and always put yourself in the role of a passerby. Is this scene enough gossip?Is it worth your while to stop and watch?
If the answer is yes, then write down this scene, and write it into your article in the future! "

"Precipitate for a while, when one day, you see a person, you are touched by his experience, and you naturally want to use your pen to write a story with him as the protagonist, then you can start to write!

When this idea is like a volcanic eruption in your heart, and you can't suppress it no matter what, you can start writing. "

The vertical version of the letter is really convenient to read. Song Huanxi didn't need to nod extra. She read the first half of Mr. No Wine, No Joy's letter over and over again, only to feel that every sentence was golden and jade.

In her heart, No Wine No Joy seems to be a good teacher!
If you don't read the second half of the letter, Yiyou can do it.

Song Huanxi sighed, and looked at the second half of the letter:
"I'm currently staying with a friend, as you know.

A few days ago, two friends and I went to the ballroom for a small gathering, and ran into a Miss Zheng, who was kind and kind, and invited me to live with me.

Should I agree to her invitation? "

Song Huanxi sighed again, the last letter was in a tavern, and he met a Miss Xu by chance, but although Miss Xu was beautiful, her heart was not kind enough, so she didn't invite him to live with her.

If she remembers correctly, Wujiubuhuan mentioned in his first reply to her that he planned to take the pseudonym Gu Long because his girlfriend's name was Gu Feng.

It seems that Miss Gu Feng is already an ex-girlfriend.

Song Huanxi secretly guessed that this Mr. No Drinking No Joy should be a good-looking person with a rich net worth, otherwise how could there be so many beauties by chance!

Beauty people are not stupid!

It's just that she doesn't have any experience in love, so how can she teach him?

After thinking for a moment, Song Huanxi directly substituted his stepmother, An Xiuniang, and replied:

"Mr. No Wine No Joy, hello!

The letter has been read, it can be described as deafening, what you said is true.

All my books and writings come from hearsay. Without what I have seen, I don’t know what is really wonderful. I decided to follow what my husband said and settle for a while!
When I have a bamboo in my heart, I will write again. At that time, I will ask my husband to enlighten me! "

"Also, I will only mention one thing about Miss Zheng that you mentioned.

What you see now is her beautiful appearance after putting on makeup. If you live together, are you ready to see her unkempt appearance when she wakes up in the morning, yawning and going to the toilet?

Yes, she probably also wore boxer shorts with a white tank top. "

Song Huanxi wasn't exaggerating at all, An Xiuniang looked like this, and she didn't know that she was married to the He family for the second time, old man He was not used to it!

Anyway, she was frightened one morning, thinking that a homeless man from somewhere broke into the house.

At that time, her father was still there, and An Xiuniang didn't know how ugly she looked, so she glanced at her sideways: "How can every family know about the matters between husband and wife!"

Song Huanxi finished talking here, and stuffed a return envelope with the address in it as usual.

……

It was the next day when I received her reply letter.

After several letters and replies, Miss Yixiao has become the common concern of the prodigal son trio.

As soon as Xiong Yaoying opened the letter, Yu Xilou and Lin Ziqi approached from left to right——

After reading a few sentences, Yu Xilou had a strange expression on his face: "She really believed your nonsense?!"

What is more observation and more thinking, when Brother Yaoying writes martial arts novels, who to watch and emulate!

Xiong Yaoying glared at him: "What nonsense! I have already stepped into the room, she is just getting a glimpse of the way, and I guide her, naturally it is from a high position!"

"Besides, I told her to accumulate life experience, what was wrong! Just wait, I'll write about your crazy appearance in the dance hall yesterday into a novel someday!"

Yu Xilou: "..."

I really shouldn't be owed!

I forgot that this guy is a writer of novels!

　A shadow: ...

　　So don't speak ill of my brother!
　　Ps, An Xiuniang is wearing the clothes of the heroine's father.

　　
　
(End of this chapter)