Familiar begs for food at the beginning

Chapter 20 Thank you for persevering to see now
The author is a novice writer, and this book is her first novel, so I have overlooked many problems.

Maybe there are problems in the previously released chapters, and they will go back to fix them. In the end, some treasures will feel that the words of the donkey are wrong when they see the plot later.

In response to this problem, I will review the paper three times before sending it out.

The previous plots were too plain, without a main line, and the heroine gradually left the novel, and there were very few scenes, so the last few chapters were a bit rushed.

Poor writing is my biggest problem. I can't skillfully use various grammar to make the plot ups and downs. Some places may not have a sense of substitution.

I hope that the treasurers can open the mic with passion, the author has a thick skin and is not afraid of scolding
Facing the problem can solve the problem
I will only get better and better in the future, this book is just my starting point, not my end

The starting point is some old bookworms. My book is a bit of a style, and I understand that I can’t read it, but if there are old bookworms reading this, I also hope to receive your valuable opinions.

The author will learn slowly, and in the future there will always be a work that can be given to readers.

(End of this chapter)