Chapter 70 Review
According to the feedback from some friends in the group, I realized that the last two chapters spent too many words on counting chips. These are not things that readers like to pay attention to, so I brought them up without thinking carefully.
So now there are a lot of cuts and corrections.
Here is a supplementary explanation of where it has been changed.
First of all, I simplified the calculation part of the conspiracy and directly gave a result.
Secondly, the chapter on Cyber has been changed to Ownership, which simplifies the complicated income and asset descriptions into 10% ownership, and deletes all the descriptions and explanations of Cyber City, so that the plot is more focused on the present.
At the same time, it also slightly tightened up some of Daikina's characterization, and the smell of a dead house is overflowing, which is not good at this stage.
If you still have questions, please add them in time, as long as I speak normally, I will not delete comments and ban words.
that's all!
by a harmonious and amiable author friend
(End of this chapter)
According to the feedback from some friends in the group, I realized that the last two chapters spent too many words on counting chips. These are not things that readers like to pay attention to, so I brought them up without thinking carefully.
So now there are a lot of cuts and corrections.
Here is a supplementary explanation of where it has been changed.
First of all, I simplified the calculation part of the conspiracy and directly gave a result.
Secondly, the chapter on Cyber has been changed to Ownership, which simplifies the complicated income and asset descriptions into 10% ownership, and deletes all the descriptions and explanations of Cyber City, so that the plot is more focused on the present.
At the same time, it also slightly tightened up some of Daikina's characterization, and the smell of a dead house is overflowing, which is not good at this stage.
If you still have questions, please add them in time, as long as I speak normally, I will not delete comments and ban words.
that's all!
by a harmonious and amiable author friend
(End of this chapter)
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