The bard wanders into the entertainment circle

Chapter 18 Hearty Emotional Explosion

After clearing up my mood, I cleared my throat, rolled up the paper in my hand, held it as a sword in my hand, and heard Li Defu say: "Start!"

Chen Shuo frowned, his face darkened, his eyes fixed on Li Defu, he pointed his sword at him, and said, "Lingjiu, I'm going to kill you..."

After he finished his lines, Li Defu didn't comment, turned to Wu Qi and asked, "What do you think, Brother Qi?"

Chen Shuo also turned his head to look.

Wu Qi frowned and thought for a while, then said: "I don't know if I feel right, but I can feel the hate, but it's too full, it seems a little empty.

It's as if you didn't because of Lian Chengjin, but simply hated him, for the sake of hate. "

After speaking, he and Chen Shuo looked at Li Defu again. After all, he is a professional.

Looking at the doubt in Chen Shuo's eyes, Li Defu said: "Do you feel that I have thought a lot in my heart, and I have expressed my feelings.

Why did Brother Qi say that he looked very thin? "

Chen Shuo nodded and said, "Yes, Teacher Li, please give me some advice."

"It's normal, you haven't been exposed to acting, it's normal that you don't know.

First of all, I should praise you, your performance is still good.

At least you think about it seriously and act it out. Li Defu nodded the table and said, "However, you have to remember."

Although acting is an expression of emotion, it is also skillful.

And what you lack is skill. "

He changed his voice, and suddenly asked: "Have you ever seen a shrew swearing at the street?"

"I have seen."

"Do you think the feelings of a shrew are strong when she scolds the street?"

"strong."

"Yes, very strong, so strong that you only pay attention to her anger, but don't care to understand why she is angry."

Li Defu pointed to Chen Shuo and said: "Characters are diverse, emotions have ups and downs, and tone of voice also has speed, severity, and urgency.

And your performance just now was like a shrew swearing at the street, venting out of your brain.

Let people only pay attention to your emotions, but ignore what your lines are trying to express.

In this way, according to your own ideas, split this paragraph and divide it into paragraphs. "

Chen Shuo picked up a pen, drew a diagonal line where he thought it needed to be divided into sections, and showed it to Li Defu.

Vulture, I'm going to kill you, /What does it matter to me whether Xiao Shishilang lives or dies?You are the one who took my wife! / No matter who harms Cheng Jin, it is because of you. /Since you can't protect her, why take her from my wedding? /Vulture, if we talk about the culprit, the first one I want to kill is you.

Li Defu looked at it and said, "Come on, mark each paragraph with the emotion you want to express."

At this point, combined with the metaphor of the shrew, Chen Shuo had a faint feeling in his heart, and began to mark his thoughts on it.

The first paragraph should be filled with resentment that one cannot kill, the second paragraph is to deny the apparent purpose of this trip, and then point out one’s real goal, and the third paragraph is to strengthen the second paragraph.

The fourth paragraph should be the most tangled. It has the embarrassment of being robbed of his wife, but the wife does not want to marry him.

There was also regret over Lian Chengjin's death, and he finally blamed Lingjiu for this crime.

The last paragraph is a summary of all emotions and a catharsis.

Li Defu looked at Chen Shuo's annotation, listened to his explanation, and asked: "Have you ever been in love, have you experienced such a thing?"

Chen Shuo was startled, shook his head and said, "No, I haven't talked about it, let alone experienced it."

Li Defu glanced at him again, did not continue this topic, and said: "According to your mark, let's do it again."

When Chen Shuo said a certain emotion, and performed it again, he looked at Wu Qi again.

clap clap~
Wu Qi clapped his hands and said, "I've made great progress."

Li Defu also nodded and said: "There is progress.

But I let you divide into sections to let you better understand, not to let you perform sections.

This passage is spoken continuously, and emotions are promoted and increased.

Instead of just saying a word and an emotion like you.

Think about it and connect your emotions. "

"Okay, it's kind of connected, but the emotions are still too scattered..."

"Pay attention to the connection between emotions, and be more mellow when changing..."

"There is a sense of the whole, the emotions are superimposed, each sentence increases, and then it explodes in the last sentence..."

"To make you explode is not to make you yell. You have to suppress it. Only when you can suppress it is called an explosion. If you can't suppress it, it is called a flower..."

"..."

Saying lines over and over again, being corrected by Li Defu over and over again, from emotions to sentence breaks, from tone of voice to facial expressions, actions...

In the end, Chen Shuo was in a daze, thinking that he was that Sima Xiang.

More and more emotions were accumulated in my heart, torturing myself over and over again, and when I wanted to express myself, I was suppressed by others.

At a certain moment, the accumulated emotions could no longer be suppressed, and burst out suddenly, like firecrackers, ringing from beginning to end.

Every paragraph, every sentence, every word is spoken so heartily.

When Chen Shuo finished the last sentence, "The first person I want to kill is you!"

The whole room fell into silence, only his strong breathing was left.

After waiting for a while, Chen Shuo slowly came back to his senses and looked at Li Defu without waiting for the usual guidance.

Li Defu said with a smile: "It's ok, at least in this scene, in terms of lines, it's ok with me."

woo~~~
Chen Shuo let out a long sigh of relief, and his body, which had been vigorous all the time, felt a little tired.

He took a sharp breath, then slowly pressed his hands down, sinking his breath into his dantian, and there was a rumbling sound from his chest and abdomen, adjusting his body.

Li Defu was amazed when he saw it with one hand, but he didn't get distracted, but waited for him to adjust and said: "But..."

After hearing this, Chen Shuo straightened up subconsciously, and said respectfully, "Say it!"

After this pointing, he has already regarded Li Defu as a teacher and master in his heart.

"The lines are only part of the performance, there are also facial expressions, body shapes, manners, movements, etc.

The performance pays attention to the shape of the table, which is what it means. Only when these are combined with each other is a complete performance.

However, these things are too broad, and it will not be clear or taught in a while.

Even most people can't do all four in their lifetime.

Based on your performance just now, I dare not say that you will definitely be able to get the role, but you are definitely qualified for tomorrow's interview.

The rest depends on your on-the-spot performance tomorrow, He Qi's ability, and the director's choice. "

"Thank you teacher for your guidance." Chen Shuo got up and bowed respectfully.

Then he picked up the pot and refilled some water in his water cup, raised his hands and handed it to him, saying: "Mr. Li has worked hard, please drink tea."

Li Defu took the water glass, took a sip, paused, and said: "You are talented, after I point out some points, you can immediately understand and make corrections, which is very rare.

I think you are not very old. If you really want to develop in the film and television industry, I suggest you go to a school and learn acting formally.

In school, as long as you study and practice seriously according to the teacher's teaching.

Not to mention how much you will achieve in the future, but it can definitely improve your lower limit.

If you study hard for four years, just like the scene just now, you can definitely reach this point easily, or even better. "

"He is acting now because he wants to save money to go to college." Wu Qi said with a smile.

"It's a good thing to be self-motivated. If I had your awareness at the beginning, I wouldn't be able to play a supporting role now." Li Defu also smiled.

(End of this chapter)