Longevity, starting from raising chickens

Late end of July summary
Summarize as an example.

I asked for leave for two days in June and updated 23 words, an increase of about [-] words compared to May.

Although the increase is not large, it can be regarded as progress.

After all, all my spare time is spent on this, and I don't have to touch fish.

The average subscription is currently around 2000, an increase of 700 subscriptions. It is incomparable with others, but it is a bit of progress compared with myself.

Then sort out the process.

At present, Wang Ba finally walked out of Xinshou Village.

At least Xiaoming has some autonomy.

This is also in line with my personal expectations for an ordinary person who has no spiritual roots but has golden fingers to grow up in this cannibalistic world.

As I said before, the writing style will change at each stage.

In the earliest days of the Eastern Holy Sect, there were great constraints and precarity, and the protagonist did not have enough knowledge of the world, so the writing style tended to be suspenseful-mystery-revealing.

This period is also the most difficult and depressing time.

After going through the most difficult period, in Tianmen Sect, the protagonist is a low-level monk with some connections and some capital. During this period, it is still not the protagonist's turn to show off his prestige. After the hope of the Tianmen Sect, they make plans before moving, so the writing style is much easier than before, and the protagonist barely has a chance to appear on the stage in some major events.

It's just that such opportunities are still relatively rare, but sometimes they are extremely critical.

During this period, it was a bit depressed, but it was obviously better than before.

Then comes the third period.

I won't go into details, spoilers are involved...

The above is my summary of the process.

Then there is a summary of the problem, which is summarized as follows:

1. There is still a big gap in the handling of cool points. According to the concept of cool points, it has not been cool. For example, after the establishment of the foundation, the status level changes. More pen and ink and comparison should be given to make the protagonist feel good. It can make readers happy, but unfortunately my solution is to rush to start the next plot, so that the excitement that should have erupted at this stage seems a bit dull, which may be more in line with my own preferences, but it may not be too good for the public. Friendly too.

2. Water.This is due to my lack of ability to bury the foreshadowing. I failed to bury the foreshadowing lightly, or used another thing to cover up. The final choice is to bury these foreshadowing in the content without sufficient plot, so that It seems that some parts seem to have nothing to do with the protagonist.However, after the frequent conflicts later, this should appear to be much less.I'll think about it carefully and see how I can handle it better.

3. Rhythm.This is actually related to the first point. The narrative rhythm and the ups and downs of the plot are a bit out of tune. When it should be fast, it is a bit late, and when it is fast or slow, it is eager to end. If possible, please share with the big guys here where you are most uncomfortable, where you are most comfortable, and where you can't get up and down when you are reading this book... emmmm, knowing these, I can be better Serve the gentlemen.

4. It's gone, my brain hurts thinking about it.

In the new month, try to update, thank you for your support and food!

thank!

(End of this chapter)