Longevity, starting from raising chickens

I have been sorting out new plots and settings all day today, so I am sorry that the update is a bit late, and there are only [-] words.

Then report the situation first.

At the beginning of last month, the order for this book was almost 2000, and it is currently more than 2600. I have calmed down and continued to write the first book with my best efforts.

Let's talk about the shortcomings first.

There are many disadvantages:

1. Since the last volume did not set enough expectations, foreshadowing and connected characters, when the new volume opens, it looks like a completely different story, with a serious sense of fragmentation;
2. The leisurely feeling I wanted to write was not able to be written, but because of rushing the manuscript, the rhythm of this volume was a bit rushed, without the feeling of relief that I wanted to create, which did not match the title of the volume;
3. I am not very satisfied with the final climax. What I want is the extreme explosion after the extreme suppression, but the depressive emotions in the previous foreshadowing stage are too little stacked, so that the final explosion does not have that kind of heartiness dripping feeling;
4. My way of writing is to set the final climax first, and then reverse the previous plot. I think this method is no problem. The problem is that when I reversed it, I ignored some logical things, and it was a bit rough. As a result, the plot of this volume will be awkward in some places, such as the chapter of Chapter 29 Zhang Daobai, which could have been handled better, but it has become a poisonous point.

5. To sum up, I have tried my best in this volume, but in my own opinion, the effect is probably a passing grade.

Advantages: This is up to everyone to discover.

This book has just reached the first 100 million words in my life.

By the way, let's also conduct a stage summary.

From the very beginning, I wanted to write a story that was depressive first and then comfortable. During the writing process, except for the extremely painful part that was about to be put on the shelves, I still felt very smooth at other times.

However, when I read everyone's comments, I vaguely felt that I was a little kneeling in the truth.

Some poisonous places, readers feel poisonous, but I don’t feel poisonous, because I really put myself into a real person, such a person will make mistakes, make mistakes, be impulsive, and have bad luck. Long life and so on.

But in online articles, this is undoubtedly a distinct poisonous point.

In addition, I did not handle it roundly enough, which caused many readers not to persist until the end.

It's not the reader's fault, it's my own fault.

What needs to be changed is to write completely self-centered, avoid poisonous points, and respect the objective situation.

Of course, I will make some attempts later in this book, it may be good, or it may be worse, but no matter what, I will try my best to write it better.

Then, regarding the update, all I can say is that I did my best.

Last month's 23 words should not be too small...

Also, some of the long paragraphs skipped and watched and then ran over to scold, alas, let’s stay in Germany.

Finally, I would like to thank the readers who have persisted until now. Your positive comments make me happy to code every day, instead of frowning like going to the grave.

Thanks for having you! (end of this chapter)