My Simulated Son's Life

Chapter 104 An Apology

Good brothers, I'm sorry, I can't write any more.

As I was writing, I found that I was trapped. The simulation plot was written in too much detail and directly revealed the content behind, which made me have to think about a turning point, otherwise I would have no sense of expectation.

In short, no emotion.

In addition, another important reason is that in the second stage, I felt that the plot I originally designed was meaningless, and I was going to play for a while, and then deviated from the chapter I designed in advance.

Later, it will get more and more flowery.

Originally, Zhou Ziyi was a very important character. I wanted to use him as an entry point to draw out the content of the destruction of the Dajiang Gang.

At the beginning, it was originally set to be a good man who values ​​love, righteousness and patriotism, so he has a high prestige among the Dajiang Gang. Li Fanjiang wants to lead the Dajiang Gang to rebel with the county king, and needs to get rid of Zhou Ziyi.

I also plan to play the stalk of the name certificate: Your surname is Zhou in the Dajiang Gang, and then Li Fanjiang is determined to get rid of Zhou Ziyi.

Then Li Changkong discovered Li Fanjiang's conspiracy, but because Zhou Ziyi and Li Fanjiang were sworn brothers, if you say it directly, the biggest possibility is that Zhou Ziyi laughed and then slapped him and pressed him to find Li Fanjiang and then gg, so He had to secretly foil Li Fanjiang's plot.

As a result, the writing was all wrong.

Including the big climax, I originally set the final villain to be only the eighth grade. I was planning to kill the person of the Blood Sea Sect and was chased by Li Fanjiang. Then Li Changkong dragged Zhou Ziyi to escape, made a big fuss in Feiliuzhuang, and then found Mao Dongyuan made a rescue.

It was supposed to portray a few supporting roles, but in the end, except for the protagonist's character image, the rest of the characters were all gone. . .

All of this starts with me preparing to play a flower job. . . . . .

I'm really sorry, this is my first book in the true sense, I have no experience, and I haven't thought clearly about many places.

Lesson learned in the next book.

Finally, good brothers who gave me a reward can add me to qq: [-], nicknamed Ji Jinyu, send me a screenshot of the account, and I will refund the money to you.

I'm really sorry! ! ! !

(End of this chapter)