Illiterate top class: three years of poor performance, become a superstar

Chapter 150 Very introverted, I dare not sing the original version
"..."

Lin Jianian stood in front of the workbench in the outer room, listening attentively to Xu Nian's singing in the inner room.

I have already grabbed a pen in my hand, and I will record one or two from time to time.

Occasionally frowning.

Even deep in thought.

Then he was brought back to reality by the singing voice.

Repeatedly, until... Xu Nian sang it all in one go.

Just as Lin Jianian was about to organize his thoughts, Xu Nian suddenly began to read a monologue to himself:
"I thought of a way to forget the gentle you
I don't want you anymore, I don't love you anymore
I won't mention you again
I never had you in my life. "

Every word fell into Lin Jianian's ears lightly and floatingly, and threw stones into her peaceful heart.

Swing, swing, swing.

In an instant, many thoughts came to her, and she thought of many, many random thoughts.

'Is it... an impression of what kind of scene? '

'Or random creation? '

'In his life...'

Seeing that there was going to be chaos, Xu Nian opened the door and walked out from the inside, and asked confidently, "How is it, it feels very good!"

Lin Jianian: "..."

Looking at Xu Nian, who is proud, reserved, and confident, looking like he's waiting to boast, she just feels...

Blame me, blame me, don't think about it!
Looking away, Lin Jianian bluntly said: "I'm sure, you're very crooked this time... how should I put it, very crooked."

Immediately, Lin Jianian pointed out the elements one by one: "First of all, it can be said that the song you sing has nothing to do with the score."

"Secondly, some of the lyrics are played randomly by you on the spot."

"In the end, it's a little different from the tune you've hummed once, and it's mostly okay with what you call the blues."

After saying this, Lin Jianian looked up at Xu Nian: "You probably sing a lyrical micro-rock style?"

"Rock is rock, why not rock?" Xu Nian was very puzzled.

Not only did he fail to get compliments, but he was also singled out for a lot of problems.

In this sunny spring, I really don't know how Lin Jianian's 36.2-degree mouth can say such cold words!

Lin Jianian: "..."

wipe!
Looking at Xu Nian, Lin Jianian couldn't help clenching his fists: "You don't listen to the point at all, do you?"

Seeing this, Xu Nian quickly shook his head: "No, I heard everything."

Then I had no choice but to speak honestly: "If everything is wrong, then you can only lead me with your mouth."

"Wait"!
Lin Jianian glanced at Xu Nian, and nodded silently after half a minute.

I don't feel like talking right now.

Of course, she was already mentally prepared, knowing that she would definitely need to give advice.

It's just that she overestimated Xu's ability to learn crooked things.

Now she doesn't even have the time to think about the emotions of Xu Nian's singing version and so on.

It is really a comparison of the score, which has gone as far as the country of Java.

Picking up the draft paper just recorded, Lin Jianian said: "I memorized some of the lyrics you played randomly just now, you should read it first, the content of the lyrics should need to be revised."

"The biggest change is that you added a monologue to the last paragraph."

Xu Nian immediately expressed his opinion: "This paragraph must be kept, it feels very good!"

"Yes, it's more emotional than your singing." Lin Jianian agreed, and secretly poked Yin and Yang.

During the casual singing just now, Xu Nian really remembered a bit of the essence of "The Love Song of the Ronin".

The monologue at the end of the song is a bit like the more you listen to it, the more you feel it.

So he followed the special intuition and inspiration when he sang, and read it out.

Unfortunately, he was so immersed in his emotions that he failed to notice the change in Lin Jianian's expression.

Missed many of the... details of everyday life.

.........

Then, in terms of lyrics, the two had a full round of discussions.

Lin Jianian put forward many professional opinions based on her own literary accomplishment and experience in rhyming lyrics.

Xu Nian tried some corrections based on the memory fragments of the earth's time and space.

"This place doesn't rhyme, it's kind of abrupt."

"But I always feel that it doesn't feel that way anymore!"

"You can tell me what it feels like."

"Feeling... just feeling..."

"..."

The discussion was very enthusiastic, and I didn't know when I left the recording studio and came to the gym, and then started to get started.

"What are you so stubborn about?"

"I'm not stubborn. I stick to my own opinion and maintain enough confidence in art. You taught me this."

"I'm here to keep you confident, not to push you up!"

"I'm not ETC, so why bother?"

"Fuck! My old lady beat you to death!"

"Come on, come on, I'll give you a hand, if you can walk in front of me, I'll count you as the winner!"

Lin Jianian suddenly became angry from embarrassment, shouted wow, and rushed directly: "Xu Nian, you have done all kinds of bad things, and you deserve it if you fall into my hands!"

Xu Nian stretched out a hand to block his fists and legs, disapprovingly: "You are the one who has committed the most heinous crimes, I don't even bother to fight with you."

"I'm going to beat you until the Heavenly King and I don't even know you!"

"Who doesn't know how to say big words, let's see who gets suppressed first."

The two fought back and forth with their usual 'Sanshou' fighting skills, and the fight was like a mess.

In view of the past 'crime record' of panda eyes, the two 'awakened' the skills of hitting people without hitting faces.

Anyway, the sons and daughters of the rivers and lakes don't pay attention to bumps and bumps.

Besides... Lin Jianian suddenly discovered last year that she is actually a transgender person.

She considers herself male, transvestite, only wears women's clothing, gay, and likes men.

So it's normal for two men to fight and have some physical friction.

For example, right now, Lin Jianian accidentally rode on Xu Nian's shoulder, but it was only because of the competitive spirit in her bones...

Finally, both of them were exhausted and collapsed on the ground, staring at the ceiling in a daze.

Thin beads of sweat leached from every corner of their bodies.

After a long time, Lin Jianian said softly, "The easternmost bedroom on the third floor has been vacated for you, go wash up first."

Then the two got up separately, Xu Nian climbed directly to the third floor, and Lin Jianian took the elevator to the top fifth floor.

…………

Half an hour later, Xu Nian and Lin Jianian met again in the recording studio on the first floor.

After the fight...the in-depth communication was completed through physical contact, and the two of them were very emotionally stable at the moment.

Discussions started again, and a consensus was reached in less than 10 minutes.

Immediately, Lin Jianian and Xu Nian walked into the inner recording area together.

First he cleared his throat, and then Lin Jianian said bluntly: "I will sing it again in a big way, and you pay attention to the changes of my tongue."

"Okay." Xu Nian nodded fiercely.

Lin Jianian soon began to sing.

Her vocal condition is not very suitable for songs like "The Ronin's Love Song".

But her professional skills are there, and the demonstration teaching is in place.

The tone changes of each sentence and so on are very in place.

It seems that there is not much difference from the original version of "The Love Song of the Ronin" in Xu Nian's memory.

Xu Nian felt a little touched.

Having been repeatedly instructed by Lin Jianian to show the changes in the mouth and tongue, Xu Nian paid full attention to the changes in details.

He even noticed some slight inaccuracies in certain words and sentences, and made a record directly.

After Lin Jianian sang a demonstration, Xu Nian expressed his views and some thoughts.

The lyrics were fine-tuned again.

Xu Nian is 9% confident that it is the same as the original version, and the part of the lyrics is a successful remake.

Next...

It's time to witness the miracle.

After repeated research, comprehension, experience, and substitution, he, Xu, has full confidence.

"Sing it again."

"Uh-huh."

Xu Nian cleared his throat and stood in front of the microphone. Lin Jianian walked to the outside console to cooperate with the operation of the equipment.

Then Xu Nian sang.

As soon as the tone came out, Lin Jianian frowned immediately: "...How can it be more crooked if you learn it than if you don't learn it?"

But she didn't rush to interrupt Xu Nian this time, because listening to her felt different this time.

Yes……

mood!

There is also the transmission of emotions!
and……

Lin Jianian continued to listen attentively.

I smacked in my heart: "This time's crooked direction... seems interesting, actually has a little unique personal style?!"

"Huh? It's time for the monologue..."

Lin Jianian held her breath and listened carefully to the last monologue, which ended with high emotion and taste.

A clean and clear young man seemed to appear in his mind, telling him softly that he should let go of a relationship and not think about it.

"This taste..."

Lin Jianian raised her head and made a gesture, and said through the intercom: "Sing it again, and put in as much of your understanding and feelings for the song as possible."

Inside, Xu Nian made an OK gesture.

He didn't rush to sing right away, but was silent for a moment, let go of his mind, and then went through the song carefully again.

After three or four minutes, he began to sing the second time.

Lin Jianian waited with bated breath, she didn't know what she was expecting after being crooked like this.

exist……

When Xu Nian's voice came out, Lin Jianian's eyes suddenly brightened: "I really have a little personal style!"

If it is said that every time Xu Nian recorded a song... he recorded a song twelve times, and there was "Qianqiu" everywhere.

So, apart from the first time, Xu Nian's singing voice and style are almost the same these two times.

It's a light rock lyric that's not all blues, not all rock, not all pop.

Listen carefully, as if there is a scene of a story slowly unfolding in front of your eyes.

This time it's over, Lin Jianian, who doesn't 'give up', said again: "This time it's a bit tasteful, let's do it again."

"Be more engaged and immersed."

She needs to double check.

At the beginning of the third pass, Lin Jianian's expression eased a lot, and then he started to cooperate on the console, and started the initial recording directly.

After 31 minutes and [-] seconds, Lin Jianian said again: "Come out."

Seeing Xu Nian who was walking in front of him, who was a bit confused, Lin Jianian showed a smile and said, "Congratulations."

"You sang a brand new version of this song..."

Xu Nian felt ashamed all of a sudden.

Then I heard Lin Jianian calmly say: "The first version has been recorded, I will ask the studio to work overtime, and then the official recording will begin."

Xu Nian: "?"

Seeing this, Lin Jianian was not surprised, and spread his hands helplessly: "Although you are far away, you can't find any professional problems in your singing, and you have sung the same style three times in a row."

After hearing this, Xu Nian raised his brows and rolled his eyes: "So... the kidnapping is over?"
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