Cyber ​​Daming

Chapter 715 Final Thoughts
From May 23 to November 5, Vincy finally finished his first book.

There are many problems and major flaws, so rather than a thank-you speech, it might be more accurate to describe this as an apology letter.

First, about the ending.

From the time it was uploaded at noon today until now, Vinci didn't dare to click on the comments. He took a quick look and heard a lot of curses.

I would like to apologize to all my readers here. (Stop scolding me, stop scolding me.)
Many friends in the group said that the ending was too sloppy.

Actually, I have my own thoughts on this point.

In my imagination, Li Jun was just a warrior. His initial goal was just to survive, but as he met more and more people, he found more and more things difficult to give up, and was forced to be involved in Zhang Fengyue's reform.

Yes, in my opinion, he actually doesn't want to be involved.

But he saw too much slavery and injustice, which forced him to stand up and resist.

This may also be Li Jun's instinct as a time traveler.

But what he has done here is actually enough.

Going forward, he shouldn't consider how the sequence will develop, where the Ming Dynasty will head, who will take over the endgame, and what kind of world will evolve into in the future.

If I continue writing the story, it actually has nothing to do with Li Jun anymore.

He just ignited many sparks. As for how to spread the prairie fire in the future, it should depend on Zhang Siyuan, Yang Baize, Zhao Qingxia, Chen Qisheng, Zou Sijiu and others.

So Vinci chose to end it here.

of course!

There must be a reason why everyone is scolding. It doesn't make the masters feel comfortable. It's Vinci's problem. Stand at attention and take the scolding, and never talk back.

Second, about the process.

In the beginning, Vincy actually didn’t know what kind of story he would write, nor did he know how to write it.

In order to sign the contract, we just mixed everything together.

So initially many readers said that it was a patchwork freak, with a little bit of this and a little bit of that, and they were quite right.

But this also caused the book to have an irreparable inherent flaw.

Problem 1: The quality of the plot has declined.

The reason is that there is no outline, and I just pick up my pen after get off work every day, and often I only know the plot a few hours ahead of the readers. This is also the main reason why many readers reported that the story went off track and the quality declined after the Japanese area.

To sum up, there is no good planning.

It is also due to my lack of ability. I have never written such a long article before. When I got to the end, I didn’t know how to continue and could only express myself freely according to the character’s temperament.

Problem 2: The sequence setting is rough.

Many times, a person is promoted by simply changing his name, without any description of the change or ability. The crucial rituals are also written vaguely.

I am aware of these shortcomings, and have tried to make up for them in the past, but I was still lacking too much, and ultimately it was too late to reverse the situation.

Question 3: The mastery point data is incorrect.

This is purely a personal shortcoming, I really can't figure it out.

Question 4: Too few updates and too many days off.

Since this is a part-time job and my hand speed is quite slow, the update rate has not been able to increase.

Even when I was recommending, I asked for leave and didn't update. Now I regret it so much when I think about it.

From now on, Vinci will sleep less, work more, and update an extra thousand instead of just five hundred!

Third, about the beginning.

When I wrote the sentence "When the first drop of night rain fell from the sky, Chengdu Prefecture, located in the southwest of the Ming Empire, finally began to wake up" in May last year, I never thought that I could write a book with nearly 9950 subscriptions ( average subscriptions, which is very painful). There is nothing much to say, only gratitude.

Vinci would like to join Lao Li, Lao Chen and Lao Zou to thank all the readers for their support.

I also hope that you gentlemen will continue to support Vinci in the next book. I will continue to promote his strengths and try my best to make up for his shortcomings.

During this year and a half, if Vince wrote anything that made you unhappy, I hope you can forgive me.

If there is any story that can make you smile, Vincy will be satisfied.

The last sentence is a quote from a movie that is often used in this book.

You are important to me.

(End of this chapter)