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Chapter 54 is specially opened as a single chapter, please help me recommend it, give me your opinion
It is about to enter the NBA and enter the main story line.

Deliberately open a single chapter.

I think the framework of this book is okay, and the entry point is more appropriate.Entered the NBA with James and Anthony.Although there are quite a few books written in the same period recently, although it is hard for me to say that it is the best, it will definitely be the one with my own style.Readers who like me also know that when I am serious, I am quite talented... Hahahaha, let me boast about myself.

However, there must be shortcomings, after all, I haven't written an article for two or three years.

What is not well written in this book at present, or if you have any ideas, follow-up team building ideas, please point them out, I will revise, absorb, and adopt.

And what are the latest trends, you can also tell me about it.I have read a few novels of the same type recently, and it seems that it is more popular to ridicule James?

Everyone is welcome to provide ideas and brainstorming.

In fact, I received a lot of good suggestions earlier, and have changed many places. (Rewrote the beginning.)
By the way, help me advertise.

Come on guys.

This time, he really came back as a newcomer, without opening a new vest.

how to say.

Bravery, and 'Atonement'

Refresh the negative image of the past with practical actions.

Quite brave.

PS, in the afternoon, I saw that some book friends said that my writing style is similar to before, including whether there is a hot post on Chapter 2 or Chapter 3.But in fact, let me tell you that the way of writing this time is completely different.This is originally a diversionary, reverse upgrade, long storyline rather than a paragraph-style face-slapping mode, and it deliberately avoids the writing of basketball articles in the past, so as not to repeat.I read it myself in the afternoon. Except for a few chapters in the middle where the emotions were not dealt with properly, I found the other parts quite interesting.The character of the protagonist has also been established, and the image will be more vivid if it is pushed in the following storyline.The follow-up will definitely be more exciting.

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(End of this chapter)