back to being a teacher

Chapter 267 Li Shiguang’s knot
Famous music critic Zhang Yue: [I used to dislike folk songs, because this form of music made me think they were entertaining themselves, but these two lines of teacher Fang Bai made me re-understand the so-called The folk song "Ideal Thirty" sings out the voices of ordinary people. When a boy was young, he had no ideals, and when he was growing up, he did not have that heart-beating girl. In the end, he lost to reality! 】

[2011 has passed, and I decided to miss it, whether it is a poem or a piece of shit. I suddenly remembered the words of Teacher Fang in his speech. Have we buried our ideals? 】

[There are only two types of folk songs, one is by Teacher Fang, and the other is not by Teacher Fang! 】

[Teacher Fang’s words made me understand folk songs again and fall in love with them again. 】

[There is a dream hidden in everyone's heart. This dream may be the one she once loved most, it may be the original intention that was lost very early, or it may be the yearning that was broken by reality! 】

[We have had the most beautiful ideals and distances, and enviable love, but that is just...]

[Time flies in a monologue, grinding the chaos into a cassette, and the withered feelings are crushed into an era! 】

[Some things are really lost when they are lost, and some people never come back if they miss them. 】

Not long after Fang Bai's single was released, the number of comments increased at a speed visible to the naked eye.

It's even close to "Sunny Day" from Jay Chou's latest album released more than a week ago.

The two songs are chasing each other on the music charts.

But Zhou Tianwang is worthy of the title of the strongest king, and his number of fans still exceeds that of Fang Bai, a newcomer who has just become a star.

But being able to compete with Zhou Tianwang also made many people recognize Fang Bai's value again.

You know, although Zhou Tianwang is still known as one of the Four Heavenly Kings of Asia at this time, when he releases songs, other singers or groups basically avoid his edge and dare not confront him head-on.

Sometimes when Zhou Tianwang says he will release an album, some singers have already confirmed the time and have to contact the company to change the time.

Ballad singer Zhao Yang: [Teacher Fang’s two ballads are indeed very good. They can even be called the best ballads in recent years. 】

And with Zhao Yang's speech, those folk singers who originally wanted to catch up on the popularity could only stop playing.

Even Zhou Jiegun, who found out that Fang Bai's songs were competing with him, posted on Weibo: [Oh, not bad @方白! 】

He also specially liked Fang Bai.

During Xu Zhiqian's last concert, Fang Bai had a very good impression on Zhou Jiegun, especially when he played the piano. Maybe it was because both of them could play the piano, so Zhou Jiegun had a feeling of sympathy for Fang Bai...

And with Zhou Jiegun's Aite, it also led to a considerable increase in Fang Bai's fan base.

But after Fang Bai finished recording these two songs, he didn't plan to record any more.

After all, recording songs really takes up too much time.

You also have to be in good condition, and you also have to feel good. Sometimes even breathing problems can cause some disharmony in the singing. Fang Bai is also a person who pursues perfection.

He didn't want to tune.

This resulted in it being too difficult for Fang Bai to record a song well.

He felt that it was better to wait until he had enough time before considering recording the songs he had sung!

After a tiring week, Monday comes again.

After entering April, the weather finally got better.

It is no longer the feeling that the sky is cold and the color is green, and the north wind is calling mulberry trees.

In school, I saw people wearing short sleeves and some wearing cotton-padded jackets. This kind of weather is typical of extreme weather, and the clothes you wear are very extreme.

Anyway, Fang Bai changed into his own clothes and kept a cotton-padded jacket in the office.

Wearing single clothes with a stove burning underneath, it feels very good.

During the recess exercise, Fang Bai unexpectedly discovered that Li Guangguang was not doing exercises, but standing at the door of his office...

"what happened?"

As a class teacher, I still need to check those students who have not touched their hands or feet during recess...

In Class 6, Grade [-], if you did not move your hands or feet during recess, Fang Bai would ask you to stand on the podium and move your hands or feet.

Li Shiguang, who was in a daze, heard the sound and was probably awakened. He raised his head and said in a panic: "Teacher Fang...Teacher Fang!"

"Well, why don't you do exercises during recess?"

Fang Bai asked doubtfully.

Li Guangguang thought for a while and didn't know what to say. He took a deep breath and said, "Teacher Fang, I have some questions about my novel that I want to ask you..."

Fang Bai thought for a while in astonishment: "Okay, let's come in and chat!"

In fact, Fang Bai didn't want to check the students doing exercises. The school's inspection leaders also knew that Fang Bai was busy, so it didn't hurt if he didn't go there occasionally.

After Li Guangguang came in, Fang Bai poured him a glass of water.

"Why are you interested in coming to the teacher today and asking me? Is there something wrong with the novel?"

Fang Bai asked curiously.

"Teacher, I think there is something wrong with the setting of our novel..."

Li Guangguang bit his lip and then spoke.

"Like?"

Fang Bai thinks it's a good thing that Li Shiguang has his own ideas. After all, Fang Bai really doesn't know how to write novels. It's okay if you let him read them. After all, he has read novels in his previous life. If you really let him write... …

It's okay for him to pretend to be cool and show off the plots of classic novels from his previous life, but if you really let him write it, I'm afraid you're a bit of a tyrant...

"It's the teacher. Look at our settings. I'm almost writing that Xiao Yan is going to kill Han Feng, the old disciple who kills the medicine... But I think it's a little bit, how should I put it, it's not logical!"

"What doesn't make sense?"

Fang Bai asked with a light smile.

In fact, when the previous book "Dou Po" came out, there were all kinds of loopholes and bugs in it. But when this book was first released, the plot in it was still very good, especially when online literature was just developing.

At that time, the reason why this book could become a benchmark for online writing was because it was so enjoyable that people would not want to leave...

"The first one is that Hades is so mentally retarded in here..."

As Li Guangguang wrote, he always had the feeling that the villain was mentally retarded.

"Why do you feel this way?"

Fang Bai asked curiously.

"According to our setting, there are even masters at the level of half-step immortals in the Underworld, but every time they go to encircle the protagonist, they just send some small people to play, at most they are one level higher than the protagonist. level, or just cooperate with some small forces..."

"This makes me feel like I'm giving away someone's head. This is too retarded!"

Li Guangguang said in a helpless tone that as the author of this book, he was writing correctly, but every time he wrote it, he would modify many things, especially some important plots, which were basically provided by the teacher.

This gives Li Shiguang not only a sense of participation as an author, but also sometimes a spectatorial perspective as a reader.

And He is still God within...

That's why he felt so uncomfortable.

Fang Bai thought for a while and found that this problem was relatively easy to explain. After all, many novels follow this pattern. The villain keeps sending some miscellaneous soldiers to deal with the protagonist, but they all become the protagonist's experience...

"Actually, this is relatively easy to explain. Think about it, what level is the protagonist at now? Jin Dan is just around the Yuanying level. You want the Half-Step Immortal to take care of a Yuanying?"

"Think about it, how many Nascent Soul Stage monks are there in the world you are building? What kind of existence is a Half-Step Immortal?"

"Banbuxian wanted to kill a Yuanying stage monk, and even blew his breath to kill him." "Then how can I write this novel?"

"In one, let's change the world and replace this novel with reality. Think about it, the protagonist needs to upgrade and hone his strength, so do you need a villain?"

"Our perspective is on the protagonist, watching the protagonist grow up step by step, but what about the villains? They don't just stare at the protagonist every day, they also have their own things to do!"

"If you still can't understand this, the teacher will give you an example like this!"

"For example, Hades is a large international company like Wakaka in our world, and the protagonist is a mineral water factory in a small marginal area."

"Do you think you deserve to be suppressed by Wakaka Company at this time?"

"In other words, Wakaka Company is not willing to mobilize all the power in this country to deal with your mineral water plant?"

"Even if your mineral water factory sells well due to some things and takes away some sales from Wakaka Company, do you think he will care about you?"

"Are there no other enemies in Hades?"

"Wakaka Company has so many potential enemies, such as Kang Shuaifu, Yitong, etc. Do others care about a little person like you?"

After Fang Bai explained this, Li Guangguang had some understanding.

"What should I do if the previous settings don't match the later settings?"

Li Guangguang continued to ask.

"for example?"

Fang Bai nodded.

"It was said earlier that the Yuanying stage is the big boss, and the Transformation stage is even a giant in the world of cultivation. But according to the current plot, the Yuanying stage is everywhere..."

Li Guangguang helplessly spread his hands and said.

"You are in a small city. What do you think is the highest official position you can get?"

Fang Bai asked back.

"If it's a small city, it should be the county magistrate. The most you can do is take a look..."

Li Shiguang thought for a while and said.

"Then what do you think the county magistrate is in front of the mayor?"

"What does the mayor look like in front of senior officials?"

Fang Bai asked two questions in succession.

This made Li Shiguang a little at a loss. From his understanding, he understood it, but he didn't understand it that well.

Looking at Li Guangguang's expression, Fang Bai also knew that he should change his approach: "It's very simple. You are in elementary school, and the people around you all have elementary school education. When you go to junior high school, what about the people around you?"

"When you go to high school, will everyone around you become a high school graduate?"

"So, what happens when you get to college?"

Fang Bai's series of questions made Li Guangguang finally understand what he meant.

"In other words, if you are not strong enough, the people you come into contact with are naturally not strong enough..."

Li Guangguang said thoughtfully.

"Of course, this is an obvious truth, just like we are studying now. We are high school students now, so the people around us basically have high school degrees. Do you think people with college degrees will play with you?"

"Maybe there will be a few to play with you, but what about further up?"

"Do you think a graduate student can play with you?"

"Where's the doctor?"

Fang Bai's words almost completely solved the knot that Li Guangguang had been feeling recently.

As the author of "Xian Po Qian Kun", he always felt that what he wrote had big loopholes.

So this also makes his recent book writing status a bit offline.

"Then teacher, what should I do now?"

Li Guangguang looked at Fang Bai and asked seriously.

"According to what I told you before, as long as you don't ask general questions, the novel must also be logical. For example, Xiao Yan's soul strength is high just because he is a time traveler!"

"The second thing is those magical skills. It takes decades for others to get started with heaven-level magical skills, but you can get started in just a few months after writing it. This is a big loophole..."

Fang Bai had given Li Guangguang some advice in this regard before.

Because this loophole in the previous life is very obvious in "Dou Po". It often takes years or even decades for people from the eight races to practice heaven-level fighting skills, but the protagonist can achieve it in just a few months. This is completely cheating by input. Password: Who is your father!
"Well, if I want to reasonably allow the protagonist to master these magical powers in a few months, how should I write it?"

Li Guangguang raised a very important question.

"Fairy Fire!"

Fang Bai spat out two words, and then continued: "You can completely set up a kind of fairy fire that can automatically cultivate magical powers. As long as the protagonist swallows this kind of fairy fire, those cultivated magical powers can be automatically cultivated in the body, or this Planting fairy fire allows the protagonist to have a clone, and the biggest use of this clone is to practice!"

"As long as your tricks are reasonable, this is not a loophole. As long as you can fill these holes, then this is the setting of the novel, not a problem!"

After listening to the teacher's explanation, Li Guangguang suddenly realized, Damn it, why didn't I think of this...

Why do those fairy fire settings need to be consistent with reality?
After hearing this, Li Guangguang bowed solemnly to Fang Bai: "Thank you, teacher!"

"You're welcome!"

Fang Bai waved his hand.

After doing all this, Li Shiguang couldn't wait to rush back to his classroom. He thought of some good ideas that could be added to his novel.

For example, it can explain the previously set words.

The previous setting said that the Nascent Soul Stage is a boss or something, just give the protagonist a wave of revisiting his old place.

It's Shui Zhang. After the protagonist grows up, he returns to the place where he grew up, and then looks at the children in the city chasing each other and fighting with each other, and listens to them talking about their dreams of becoming immortals...

Then I elicited some insights and recalled that I used to be like this.

When I was young, I thought the world was very simple. In the Nascent Soul stage, one would be a peerless powerhouse, and in the Transformation stage, one would be a peerless giant...

Only when you truly grow up can you understand how big this world is.

If written like this, it can completely explain the previous setting... and it can also add depth to the book.

Thinking of this, Li Shiguang was stunned by his idea. This is simply great. How could I come up with such a perfect plot...

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