my gilded age

Chapter 277: Find faults and defeat the generals

"Nightclub" is a movie script. This movie really has little to do with "nightclub". The name is a reference to the popularity of nightclubs. It is somewhat unscrupulous and can easily make people feel that way. association.

Just like the current KTV, what happens here is a nightclub. But unfortunately, the movie "Night·Club" is basically trying to sell dogs after others. If you want to see what happens in the 'nightclub', here There is not a trace of it that can be seen in "Night Club".

To be honest, it's a bit confusing, but the reality is like this, this book, this film, Bai Shiqiu can almost know the content just by looking at the name, this film is still very famous.

Thinking of this, Bai Shiqiu glanced at Yang Qing, who was a little embarrassed just now. He is the biological father of this work, but what really made Yang Qing famous, Bai Shiqiu remembered, was another movie called "Hot Pot Hero".

Of course, anyone who knows anything in the industry will understand that the success of "Night Club" led to the later "Hot Pot Hero". This is an inevitable process, but to be honest, from Bai Shiqiu's point of view, he feels The later "Hot Pot Hero" was not as good as this "Night Club".

I really don’t mean to elevate anyone, because both films are directed and written by the same director, and both are Yang Qing’s own works. It’s just that Bai Shiqiu likes them more, and that’s true.

Maybe it's because the investment in "Night Club" is too small, it is said that it is no more than 500 million, and you must know that this still takes into account Xu Zheng's self-degradation... He glanced at the bald old driver, at this time He was smiling and putting his hand on a piece of flesh of a beautiful girl, holding a microphone in his other hand. Don't tell me, he sang pretty well.

It's definitely not pity. There really is no such factor. It's just that Bai Shiqiu simply thinks that this "Night Club" is good. He really likes it. This will be a movie... What if we, a red star, do it?What if I, Lao Bai, were to star?

Thinking of this, Bai Shiqiu suddenly felt a little regretful, because it is difficult for him to play the main role in this movie. He can only make a guest appearance, and even a guest appearance is not good, because it will make people look awkward. For example, in the movie There is a taxi driver in the plot, will Baek Shi Qiu be an experienced driver again?

Fang Wen broke in?

No, it really doesn’t work. It’s such a pity.

He glanced at Yang Qing again. This is his junior brother. He is indeed a talented person. It seems that he is older than himself, but he entered the school later. The current one is drinking there, and he was a little embarrassed at first. , but under the guidance of a group of senior brothers, he slowly let go and hugged a girl.

Our movie is not about a 'nightclub'.

"Brother, I...I..." Baoqiang on the side looked a little strange at this time, and his eyes were quite dizzy. After all, this scene was really pretty.

"Just look."

"Well, I won't touch it."

"For your own good."

"Brother, you are a good person!"

"I'm honest."

"Then I want to be an honest person!"

Bai Shiqiu is protective of Bao Qiang. After all, the child has not been too infected yet, although he has already done this scene in his first movie "The Blind Shaft".

But when he heard that Baoqiang wanted to be an honest person, he had a strange feeling. Shouldn't he be allowed to be too honest?

Let him also learn to be bad?

"Finish? Haha..." Xu Zheng became serious at the moment, he gave up the milk in his hand, and patted Lao Bai's shoulder with this hand, "How is it? How is the script? Isn't it? Very good, very good, haha..."

Bai Shiqiu looked at his shoulder. He was afraid that he wouldn't be able to tell clearly when he went back. What if there was suspicious liquid on it?
"This book is pretty good."

When the word "not bad" came out of Bai Shiqiu's mouth, it attracted much attention.

"Wow! Lao Bai said it's good."

"This is awesome, Xiao Yang, you are going to fly now."

"This, really?"

Yang Qing drank a lot, and then he seemed to blend into this big family. That's right, everyone came from Chinese dramas, and they may not have been familiar with each other before, but as soon as we talked, all the past events were vividly remembered.

Xu Zheng added fuel to the fire, "Old Bai, I thought this guy was good when I first saw him. I liked this book very much as soon as I saw it. Look, am I great with my vision?"

Xu Zheng and Bai Shiqiu really got to know each other well, and they both took Lao Bai with them on the train. However, Bai Shiqiu wanted to do something at this time.

"It's true, it's true, but I just said it's true. If you hadn't seen this book but for Brother Xu, I dare say you wouldn't have gotten a penny if it had been someone else." Bai Shiqiu put the book on the table with a slap. It looks a bit like falling.

Can't get a penny, what does this mean in translation?
It’s worthless!

Yang Qing's face, which was originally very excited, seemed to have been poured directly with a bucket of ice water flown from the Arctic Ocean.

At this time, when the other elders saw him, they all started to help him.

"Old Bai, what's wrong with you? Isn't that good?"

"Yes, Lao Bai, that's not right of you. Yang Qing is our classmate, so if you are good at it, you have to give him some face."

"That's it."

Everyone, you say something to me.

It's a pity that Bai Shiqiu remained unmoved and just stared at Yang Qing with his eyes.

Xu Zheng suddenly understood at this time, "Oh, I am to blame for this matter today. I was planning on it. When my brothers came to my place, it would be unreasonable if I, Old Xu, didn't invite my brothers to have a good time." Well, in addition, this book is called "Night·Club", which is exactly suitable for today's place, haha... Actually, this is really my fault. I really didn't expect that Lao Bai wouldn't like this kind of place. Well, this book used to be The name of the supermarket is called "Supermarket". I think the supermarket has no impact, so I changed the name, haha... This is all my fault, brother. I will punish myself with three drinks, hahaha..."

The old driver is the old driver, and all the mistakes are his own fault. And he thinks simply. I am afraid that Bai Shiqiu and Xiao Taohong have a very good relationship. They are both called siblings. Xu Zheng, the brother-in-law, brought his brother-in-law out to show off. , my brother-in-law is probably trying to play with integrity.

But this isn’t right. I’ve heard it a long time ago. This guy Bai Shiqiu is also extremely coquettish...

It must be said that Xu Zheng's idea is somewhat close, but not all. Bai Shiqiu said directly, "Don't worry about drinking. Brother Xu, do you really think this book is very good? Is it perfect?"

The words were spoken to Xu Zheng, but his eyes were always fixed on Yang Qing.

"This..." Xu Zheng was about to speak, but Yang Qing couldn't help it.

"Brother! I'm not bragging, but at least I feel that the book I wrote is definitely not bad, and it's definitely careless! Brother said this book is worthless, and I can't fucking accept it!"

These words were very irritating, and Yang Qing's character was immediately revealed.

His personality came out, but the atmosphere suddenly became awkward.

"Oh, oh, oh, what are you doing, haha..." Xu Zheng knew that he was going to be spoiled, so he hurried over to smooth things over. "That's right, that's right, we are all classmates."

"What's going on, it's weird all of a sudden."

The other elders also came to help, and seemed to be returning to their previous state.

However, Bai Shiqiu sneered: "What if I can find fault with it?"

As soon as these words came out, everyone finally understood. It turned out that Bai Lai wanted to suppress Yang Qing.

Xu Zheng suddenly felt a little scary. He said to himself, how did this old man know that Yang Qing had a very aggressive personality...

Yang Qing is not an economical person either. Despite his age, he has a very sharp character. This "Night·Club" was made because he was fed up with being sullen in a certain crew, and then he suppressed it. Works that showcase your unique talents.

This brings with it a certain energy.

When I handed Xu Zheng the notebook, I was a little hesitant at first, but then...

Xu Zheng felt that there was always something different about this talented person. For example, he looked like a dull and honest person on the outside, but in fact he liked to show off. This...

Xu Zheng thought it was nothing. Yang Qing's character was a good thing, but he had to introduce it to Bai Shiqiu, who was also a young and energetic guy.

When it comes to arrogance, most people in China probably know how arrogant Bai Shiqiu is, right?

He is already well-known, so if Bai Shiqiu meets Yang Qing, wouldn't it ruin a good thing?
Therefore, Xu Zhengcai arranged today's event, especially Mamasang's side, who had already said hello, so she came pretty.

Unexpectedly, the atmosphere still became tense.

"Okay! We all know what a great person Senior Brother is, so let's ask Senior Brother to find a fault. As long as it makes sense, I, Yang Qing, will definitely be convinced. I can even kneel down and scream twice." Yang Qing has this kind of character.

Others didn't dare to speak. How come they didn't know there was such a bad-tempered junior brother before?

The key is to feel that this Yang Qing is also an expert at showing off.

Bai Shiqiu smiled slightly and said, "Okay, if I can't make you think it makes sense, I will kneel down and scream twice."

"Awesome! Senior brother, you are awesome!" Yang Qing gave a thumbs up, but in fact it was a provocation.

"Brother!" Baoqiang next to him was scared. What happened to his elder brother?Brother is a good person.

But Bai Shiqiu was unmoved and continued to say with a smile: "Your "Nightclub" should be based on "Crazy Stone", right?"

When Yang Qing heard this, he immediately nodded, "That's right."

This is indeed the case. Yang Qing wrote "Night Club" just because he watched "Crazy Stone". That's how it is.

But the plot is much different, but the style and technique are somewhat similar, with multiple lines of intertwined development. It seems a bit messy, but it can be understood.

Bai Shiqiu pointed it out immediately, but this was not the fault he wanted to find. He just said: "The plot is actually two waves of robbers. Brother Shui in the first wave is actually a good person, and the one in the second wave The jewelry robber, he is the real bad guy, and in one of the plots, your arrangement is a supermarket employee named "Kidney". He is a deliveryman, but he likes to play games online all night long. This person After delivering the goods, he slept in the back, and when the real bad guy came out, he woke up and came over to beat the bad guy, right?”

"That's right! Senior brother is awesome. Just look at it and remember it." Yang Qing still gave a thumbs up, but it was obvious that he didn't mean it.

Bai Shiqiu didn't mind and continued, "That's the problem. This waist appears too suddenly."

But at this time, Yang Qing laughed, "Haha... Senior brother, you didn't pay attention, the character Yaozi was mentioned at the beginning, and the heroine said that this person was driving to deliver goods Yes, the car is parked there, but the person is missing. Is this an acceptable explanation?"

Obviously, Yang Qing was very satisfied at this time. He felt that Senior Brother Bai Shiqiu was just a wasted reputation.

"Not enough." Bai Shiqiu said flatly: "It's not enough at all. It's very irresponsible to explain the character of Yaozi in this way, and it will make the audience confused. You think this is clever, but in fact it is a big mistake. "

"What?" Yang Qing was unhappy, "How could this be a big mistake? Where are the rules? Where is the truth?"

"Hehehe..." Bai Shiqiu smiled and said, "Have you heard of Van Dyne?"

"I've heard of this." Yang Qing hesitated.

Bai Shiqiu continued: "Van Dyne, the famous detective novelist and theorist, has a twenty rule about detective novels, which violates one of the important rules. If, we come to the appearance of Yaozi , looking at it as a case, then you did explain this character before, but this character was very unclear and was only mentioned in a few words. The most important thing is that the word kidney is not a name, and later, His sudden appearance is like the appearance of the murderer in the reasoning, but he has never appeared before. Isn't this abrupt? Do you want the fans to go back and watch it? Or how much time do you have to spend? Can you tell me the ins and outs of this kidney?”

Van Dyne may not be a playwright, but many of his theories can be applied to script creation, especially in the current genre. Both "Crazy Stone" and "Night Club" are somewhat CULT. The characteristic of the film is that the plot is unexpected but also reasonable.

Unexpectedly, of course it must be done according to the techniques of detective novels. Many detective novels can easily be adapted into film and television dramas, so this mistake is almost unforgivable.

"..." Yang Qing was sweating all over his head at this moment, it would be useless if he tried harder, it was true that this place was a bit abrupt.

When everyone saw it, most of them understood in their hearts that this matter... You, Yang Qing, still lost a hand to Lao Bai in terms of showing off.

In the end, Yang Qing couldn't hold it any longer, and immediately said to Bai Shiqiu: "Brother, I was wrong!"

After saying this, he was about to kneel down, but suddenly, Bai Shiqiu pulled him back.

"This book is very good, I can find such a fault."

This... isn't this a complete turn of events?

Xu Zheng was happy when he heard this, "Hahaha...Old Bai, you are so good at this! You scared me to death."

Then this matter...

"Welcome Junior Brother Yang Qing to join our Red Star." After saying that, Bai Shiqiu extended his hand.

After all these twists and turns, Yang Qing burst into tears when shaking hands...

　Thank you all for your support, I really appreciate it!

　　Well, I'm really sleepy. I'll wait a little longer for the reply in the book review section. I'll try to sleep a little longer...

　　
　
(End of this chapter)