After the beast cub was about to wear it, all the gods were bald

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Because the plot between Li Guo and Yue Jiu is too abrupt, the author is working hard to correct it and should be able to finish it today. Therefore, readers who have watched it, please re-read the previous plot of Li Guo when watching the updated plot tomorrow.

I'm really sorry. I originally wanted to write half a love line, but why half one? Because it was the kind of story where Sister Fengyuan didn’t have any ideas but Li Guo did, the story seemed to fall apart from the beginning. As expected, I’m not really suitable for writing emotional lines UTTU, so I’d better write something cute and cute.

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The revision is complete~ The major revised chapters are Chapters 6, 7, 8, and 9 of This Small World. It is recommended to re-watch it. In addition, in order to be less abrupt, I added a new foreshadowing (actually only one sentence) in the first small world 11, which is the section where Bai Mi and Fengyuan successfully contracted.

Please don’t be affected by the emotional lines of the previous version. The new version does not have emotional lines. Whether it is Little Apple or Li Guo, they are all children in nature. Especially for Li Guo, don't use adult thinking to interpret what he said, otherwise you will misunderstand him. Little Jelly is actually very simple.

Finally, because I changed the entire plot outline about Li Guo and Yue Jiu, there may be loopholes in the plot that I came up with in one day. In fact, I revised it several times. At the beginning, the outline changed. After I finished revising it, I read it again and found that there were huge logical errors, so I deleted it and revised it again_(:з」∠)_Now this one, I think There shouldn't be any big problem, but it's probably my subjective judgment. After all, I know all the causes and consequences, so I have natural thoughts. If there is anything else that is unreasonable, please correct me.

That’s it, thank you for reading.