Don't be afraid, fairy, I'm blind
Chapter 81 Remarks on the launch
Chapter 81 Remarks on the launch
As the title says, it’s now available~
This is the first time Mengxin has written a testimonial for being published, so let’s just say something from my heart.
When you read this chapter, you should read it with a tolerant heart. First of all, thank you very much for reading.
My collection has been growing a lot and I have a lot of comments, but the tracking data is simply horrible. This also made me very embarrassed, and made me feel like I had bought it for collection, but I was really just a little street rusher who rushed to code DDL after get off work every day. So the recommendations haven’t been exhausted yet, so I might as well put it on the shelves as soon as possible.
However, this phenomenon also reflects the problem of the book, which is that people have no desire to read it, or there is not much enjoyment at all.
Looking back at the 18 words, the protagonist has not even grown much, and it has not brought much positive emotional value to readers so far. It is inevitable that there will be less follow-up reading.
What runs through these words is actually more like a self-pleasure I wrote for myself. There is one plot that particularly proves this point, and that is - Gu Yao forces the protagonist to admit his mistake.
So what did I think when I designed this plot?
This is probably from the perspective of a migrant worker who just entered the workplace. One of your bosses accidentally misunderstood you, but he couldn't admit it because of his face, and you were so stupid that you went along with it and lost your own face to save his.
Because you feel that the face of a newbie like you is not valuable in the first place, and in your opinion, this boss is not bad, and he will definitely make it up to you in the future.
It definitely looks like a very cost-effective deal, but in reality it should feel a little bit more satisfying, right? But in a novel it's completely different.
This not only failed to establish Gu Yao's upright and righteous image, but also did not make readers feel happy. Instead, they felt aggrieved. After all, no one comes to see realistic plots in Fantasy Cultivation.
If I write that Gu Yao takes the initiative to admit his mistakes, and then everyone in the audience is shocked by the protagonist's astuteness, it will be much better: Gu Yao's image stands firm, the protagonist is affirmed through the shock of others, and the readers can also feel refreshed.
So I am really a newbie, how could I write like this if I have experience? Even if it is written like this, Gu Yao should be written as a female character who can be conquered. Gentle readers must be willing to suffer a little for their wives. After all, everyone knows that sooner or later she will wear black stockings to compensate you~
In addition, there are many unfamiliar aspects, such as the suspense revelation, character creation, etc. If you have any suggestions, you can mention them in the comment area. I will refer to them as appropriate when I see them. The shortcomings will definitely be improved. My dear readers, what could be a greater sense of pride than seeing someone else take your shape? (cover chrysanthemum)
The style of the first volume is indeed a bit depressing, and it can be considered an attempt at my writing style, which will change later. If you are looking for the feeling of "Mom, I really can't tell the difference", I'm afraid you will be disappointed, because in my opinion, my protagonist has always been able to tell the difference clearly, but I just deliberately didn't write it out in the first few chapters. I promise, there will be more exciting stories in the future!
Thank you to all readers for their support, including but not limited to reading, comments, rewards, recommendations, monthly votes, etc. To be honest, I am flattered that anyone can read this book.
Thanks to my editor Liu Xingda. I am really a newbie. I don’t dare to join social groups, and I don’t pay close attention to teaching updates. Answering my questions should be a headache. Haha.
Finally, let’s talk about the update. I will stay up all night tonight to write. I am one of those people who can’t even save a chapter of manuscripts. Moreover, typing is like a turtle crawling, and my head hurts every day.
I have already taken all the sick leave for next year tomorrow. I don’t care whether I will deduct my bonus or not. Let’s strive for more.
After all, I am a very mediocre person. Maybe the way to leave some traces on this world is to write a book, right? This was also the original intention behind my decision to write a book when I was hospitalized with appendicitis some time ago. (Although I struggled many times at the edge of cutting the book hh)
The time is tentatively scheduled to be updated around 6pm tomorrow. I hope everyone can support the first and full subscriptions. I really don’t want my subscription ratio to be too ugly haha! ! !
Introduction There is a group, everyone is welcome to come and play.
(End of this chapter)
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