Under One Person: Dad’s Super God Journey

Chapter 33 Author’s words [Can it be written like this? 】

First of all, I would like to express my sincere gratitude to all the brothers who have seen this and thank you for your support.

【kowtow! 】【kowtow! 】【kowtow! 】

During this period, I have read everyone’s comments one by one, and I have kept everyone’s criticisms and suggestions in mind.

Among them, there are two things that are mentioned the most in the comments. One is that Xia He was easily let go in the front, and the other is that the old master is against the complete demon in the back.
I read the first one where Xia He was let go, and what he wrote at the time was indeed a bit mindless.

That paragraph is really too spicy. I will revise that paragraph later, because I have been working overtime at the end of the year and I really don’t have time to revise it, so the updates are just on the spot [crying].

At the second Heavenly Master, I actually thought that there were strong and weak demons at that time. The strong ones were like the peak holy master with twelve talismans in his body, or the cursed blue with the bug ability of gravity, but there was also a certain weak one. The existence of a suspected demon.

Yes, I am talking about you, the shame of the devil, Ximu, who is as good as a mortal in the body of a devil.

In addition, Dad has always been fighting demons in the world of Jackie Chan's Adventures, so if he benchmarks a person's strength, he will only benchmark against objects he is familiar with.

He can't see the old Heavenly Master, and say that the feeling that the Old Heavenly Master brings to him is almost the same as that of Wa Long. This is a bit wrong.

But I thought about that paragraph later. If it were to be directly compared to the devil, there would be some gaps, so I will also modify that paragraph later and let me find time to think about it.

There are also some other things that I will correct based on the suggestions you give me.
Thanks again for your support! !

grateful! !
Oh, there are too many typos and I will correct them, because I am too sleepy after posting around 12 o'clock every day and really don't have time to check. I will try my best not to have this problem again in the future.

There is also the setting of the time traveler. At that time, I was thinking of finding a reason for my father to gather the twelve talismans, the eight demons and other powers into himself and take him with him to travel through time.
Then I forgot about the setting of time traveler, which led to situations such as my dad not knowing how to use a mobile phone [laughing and crying]

By the way, there is one more thing, can the chapter published this time be deleted? Can this chapter be deleted later?

(End of this chapter)