The Red Era: The Crowd in the Siheyuan
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Chronological writing is not easy to write.
Especially for period articles with a long time span, it is even more difficult to write.
I remember that the data was very good when it was put on the shelves. As a book like Siheyuan that has been written to death and has a relatively low upper limit, the first order was more than 1000. The coherence was very good before 50 words. It was always fighting against enemy spies and speculators in the Public Security Bureau. The average order was over 2000.
Much better than expected.
But after 50 words, I accidentally put He Yuzhu too high after returning from the Peninsula battlefield, and some things couldn't be written, which resulted in no enemies and the main line was directly broken.
As for the Siheyuan, due to He Yuzhu's status, the conflict could not be written.
In the end, I can only rely on some daily water words.
The result is that the context is extremely inconsistent, there is no main thread running through the whole book, which leads to a serious sense of disconnection, and more than 90% of readers abandon the book.
The writing of the next 60 words was extremely unsmooth, and seemed to be of no use other than wasting my own energy and everyone's money every day.
The plot of Siheyuan roughly follows the TV series.
The subsequent arrangements of the He family are just as mentioned later. The eldest son served in the army, the second son served as an official, and the fourth son engaged in scientific research. The third generation of the family studied and engaged in scientific research, becoming a family of scholars.
This book cannot be saved, so stop here first.
I am really sorry for all the readers' support in kind.
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