I'm almost 45 and the system is just coming

Chapter 23 After-sales Evaluation
"I'm sorry, I don't want to do anything to let my wife down!"

Zhou Tian gritted his teeth and rejected Piao Yu Fei Yang's invitation. After sending the message, he took a deep breath, looking relaxed, and stopped checking WeChat.

I pulled a chair and sat by the floor-to-ceiling window. My mind raced, and I put aside the matter of Piao Yu Fei Yang and started thinking about the idea for my next book.

Through what happened in the past half day today, he had a new idea for his next book. It seemed that people were extremely enthusiastic about keeping fit, so could he write a book about how fitness can lead to the evolution of the human body?

In theory, this may seem somewhat similar to Chinese martial arts, but the threshold of Chinese martial arts is too high and the resources consumed are relatively huge, which is not a good thing for promotion at all.

On the contrary, what would it be like if people could evolve through physical exercise?

Moreover, today's events reminded him of his parents. He could practice Chinese martial arts, but his family members could not. He could say that he had enough money for the time being, so his next goal was to ensure the health of his family members.

After thinking about it, he immediately stood up, went to the computer, and wrote down his thoughts.

The story is about a middle school student Zhang Tian, ​​who accidentally met an alien named Li Luo who was stranded on Earth in the Cole galaxy on his way home from school. The alien Li Luo was unconscious and was rescued by Zhang Tian. It turned out that the alien Li Luo's hometown was destroyed by the hostile Wumeng people. He fled with his spaceship, encountered a storm in the starry sky, and came to Earth by accident.

Li Luo, who was rescued by Zhang Tian, ​​taught him a set of physical fitness techniques for brain and body development in order to repay him for saving his life. He also fulfilled one of his wishes and gave him a virtual learning machine, and then left the earth.

And agreed to meet again in thirty years.

After learning the fitness techniques from the aliens, Zhang Tian's academic performance improved significantly, and by practicing the fitness techniques, he began his evolutionary journey.

After writing the general content, Zhou Tian couldn't help but frown. He found that although the outline was ready, many parts were full of nonsense.

It seems to have some repetitive routines compared to many romance novels.

Although his fundamental purpose was to obtain two sets of fitness techniques that could be evolved through fitness, it did not mean that he wanted to make what he wrote melodramatic.

After hesitating for a moment, he started to make changes. First, he changed the content about aliens, some of which were unreasonable, so he changed them into meteors and turned Li Luo into an intelligent computer.

Zhang Tian became a student who was good at hacking. This avoided the routine. Secondly, he increased the rewards for the lottery after completing the book. Compared with the two sets of fitness techniques, the smart computer is obviously more cost-effective.

After the revision, Zhou Tian began to write the detailed outline, including the setting of the protagonist's golden finger and two sets of fitness techniques, divided into body evolution and brain evolution.

The movements are not very difficult. After the ninth level, the absorption of cosmic energy will cause the evolution of the body and brain. Cosmic energy is a concept specially proposed by Zhou Tian, ​​which draws on the setting in Devouring the Star.

It’s not that he doesn’t want to propose a new energy setting, but he feels that cosmic energy is more in line with people’s imagination.

At the same time, in his opinion, cosmic energy is omnipresent and all-encompassing. Compared with the spiritual energy of heaven and earth, cosmic energy is easier to understand.

After setting up the energy system, Zhou Tian began to design the levels of the fitness techniques. Since he was writing about an urban setting, the energy level could not be too high, but practicing to a certain level must have special effects.

First of all, fitness techniques come from aliens and are used for the evolution of the body and brain, so they must have one characteristic, which is the ability to prolong life.

Otherwise, fitness techniques would not be as valuable as imagined, and in his imagination, fitness techniques were, after all, a system created by aliens to prolong their lifespan.

As for its use in attack, it will only be a trivial role, while the evolution of the brain will lead to the emergence of mental power.

The fitness technique is divided into ninety-nine levels in total. Every ten levels can increase the lifespan by ten. After reaching the sixtieth level, every ten levels can increase the lifespan by a hundred years. This is more reasonable.

Similarly, the fitness techniques for brain development are the same, but while increasing lifespan, the fitness techniques for brain development are more about developing the brain and increasing understanding. The first tenth level will develop 10%, and by the sixty-sixth level it can develop 80%, and the next thirty-three levels, every ten levels can develop 6%.

After finishing the design, Zhou Tiancai stopped typing on the keyboard. However, when he checked the logic, he couldn't help but wonder in his heart: "Maybe the gold finger is opened too wide!"

Especially regarding the fitness techniques for developing the brain, if one can really practice to the ninety-ninth level, then wouldn’t he definitely become a god even in today’s society?

Not to mention, his understanding would increase later on. But after thinking about it, he felt that since it was a golden finger built for himself and his son, it didn't matter how big the cheat was.

At most, this fitness technique for developing the brain will not be fully taught.

After thinking about it, he took advantage of his burst of inspiration to create a new document and started writing. In a short while, the sound of typing on the keyboard continued to echo in the room.

In the next few days, Zhou Tian taught the elders the new Tai Chi he created while typing wholeheartedly. Because he typed very quickly, after a week, his saved manuscripts had exceeded 100,000 words.

August 2024, 11, : am.

Zhou Tian had just finished typing 10,000 words and was about to get up to cook when the phone rang.

"Hey?"

He didn't check the caller ID on his phone, his hands were busy, and he had the phone clamped around his neck.

"Is it Mr. Zhou Tian?"

A pleasant voice came from the phone, causing Zhou Tian's busy hands to pause slightly.

"It's me, you?"

Just as Zhou Tian was about to ask, he heard a voice on the phone saying, "Mr. Zhou Tian, ​​I'm Zhou Xiaojuan from Guangyu Pharmacy!"

"Guangyu Pharmacy?"

Zhou Tian was stunned when he heard this. A pretty face appeared in his mind, and he asked, "It's Miss Zhou! I wonder why Miss Zhou called me on the computer?"

According to his memory, he seemed to have no contact with him during this period of time, but the other party suddenly called him. Could something have happened?

"No, it's okay. I just want to ask, how is the effect of the medicine Mr. Zhou Tian bought? Are you satisfied with the effect of the medicine in our Guangyu Pharmacy?"

On the phone, Zhou Xiaojuan's soft voice suddenly became slightly strange.

"Satisfied, how can I not be satisfied?"

Although Zhou Tian felt that the other party spoke in a very polite manner, after all, he had only heard of takeaway deliverymen asking buyers about their satisfaction level, or talking about electrical appliances and furniture, but he had never heard of medicine sellers conducting after-sales evaluations.

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