Emperor Superstar Cultivation System

The next time is the process of deletion.

The intensity of deletion is very great, and many sentences need to be streamlined, and those that can be reduced to three sentences should never be expressed in five sentences.

And these three sentences must condense the meaning of the five sentences, and they must be sublimated.

And the scenes and props all need to be considered one by one.

It took another week before they were satisfied with the change.

"Two whole months." When Zeng Yu saw the script exuding the smell of fresh ink appeared in his hand, he said with a sigh, "This is the first time I have conceived a script so carefully."

"It was hard work, but also very interesting." Lin Xiao also sighed, "But, I am very satisfied!"

"Character, there is no such thin feeling. And I have a hunch that many words will become classic quotes in the future."

That night, Lin Xiao immediately rated the script.

He didn't know how many times he did this move, and each time he made rectifications for the system's assessment.

"Assessment, Huapi." He said silently in his heart.

"Swipe!" A few minutes later, the system suddenly glowed with golden light.

"Script: Painted Skin. System Rating: Three and a half stars."

"Still three and a half stars?!" He felt disappointed.The difference of half a star is so difficult to achieve.

"Wait!" Just when he found it difficult to accept, his glasses suddenly lit up.

Because he saw that on the last half of the star, the frame of the other half of the star appeared!It radiates golden light!

Although it is not a complete star, it has already appeared in its embryonic form!

"Why! Why not four stars!"

After a moment of silence, the system's voice rang out, "One star's difference is the distance between immortals and mortals."

"This star is quite difficult to achieve."

"After a large-scale revision, the characters are fuller and the plot thicker, and a lot of thoughts and feelings have been brought in. But this is an accumulation, and it is still a bit thin. And according to the current plot editing, the total length of the film will More than 150 minutes, too long."

Lin Xiao thought for a while and asked, "If you describe the lines and details in depth, can it be upgraded to four stars?"

"Yes, but this is also a difficult process. A screenwriter who is extremely proficient in lines is needed as a comparison."

Lin Xiao nodded. He had already thought about this candidate.

Feng Xiaogang!

He can portray Uncle Li, and he can set this style, so he must have his own opinions on painted skin!

The next morning, he met Zeng Yu.

"30 has been credited to your card." Lin Xiao sighed and said, "You really don't want to go to the dawn?"

"Forget it... After this revision, I feel that I still have a lot of shortcomings. I need to recharge my batteries." Zeng Yu smiled and said, "However, I think I can really do it, and I will go to Beijing to find you."

"Okay, but this time, your name will definitely be on the screenwriter."

Zeng Yu was taken aback, "No, I'm an adaptation at most. The main story, you pick the story, you are the original."

"No, if it weren't for your participation, this script would not have reached this point." Lin Xiao insisted, "After a few months, its name will be resounding all over the country. Trust me."

……

Lin Xiao quickly returned to Beijing, almost without rest, and immediately found Feng Xiaogang.

"Is there something good about looking for me in such a hurry?" Feng Xiaogang was drinking tea in the private room, his eyes kept flicking across the materials in Lin Xiao's hand.

What made the other party so solemn, he already guessed it was the script.

"Good thing, read the script for me." Lin Xiao had long been familiar with the other party's temper, and he handed over the script without saying a word.

"Tsk, I knew it would be no good for you kid to find me." Feng Xiaogang made a look of disgust, but took it anyway.

A minute later, his eyes lit up, and he let out a soft "Huh".

Five minutes later, he put down his teacup and devoted himself wholeheartedly to the observation, his entire face turned serious.

After 10 minutes, his breathing was a bit heavy, and his eyes were completely looking at the treasure.

For 15 minutes, the whole room could not even hear the sound of breathing.

half an hour.

Feng Xiaogang let out a long sigh, his small eyes rolled around.

Then, he did something extremely limitless.

He took out a handful of money from his pocket, put it on the table, grabbed the script and left.

"Thank you for sending me such a good script. I gave you the tea money. Hey... hey! Lin Xiao, let me warn you that using force is against the law! I can sue you!"

Lin Xiao pulled him back by the shoulders, and said with a smile, "Brother, you are a little out of touch. This is the crystallization of my three months."

Feng Xiaogang smiled and said, "Well, I saw it, and it's not bad. It's rare to have this level for the first time. Let's say, [-], we Huayi bought it, how about it? This is a brother's price. Someone else? Hey, I'll give him two thousand and he should be thankful!"

"...I really appreciate your brother price..."

Lin Xiao withdrew his smile, and asked solemnly, "Director Feng, I am a junior in the script, and I am also the director. I came here to learn from you."

Feng Xiaogang looked at the ceiling, "The weather is fine today."

...Dare you have a see-through ceiling?

Lin Xiao gritted his teeth angrily, "Brother Feng, just say it straight and give me a comment. How about it? I came to you with full confidence. You can't treat the younger generation like this."

Seeing that Lin Xiao was serious, Feng Xiaogang put down the script.

As soon as he put it down, he picked it up again, fondled it several times, and asked more seriously, "Xiao Linzi, tell me the truth, can you shoot this script for me?"

As soon as he finished speaking, he smiled wryly, "Yeah, no, this is your Trinity script..."

"But, I'm jealous!"

"Standing in front of Baoshan! I couldn't even take a picture! Xiao Linzi, what the hell are you doing here tonight?! Are you here to covet my elder brother?"

"This kind of script... this kind of script!" Feng Xiaogang became excited, and the filming was crackling, "Do you want to tell my brother clearly that this year there is a movie called Painted Skin that will win the championship of the year, what do you want to shoot, brother?" Hurry up?!"

Lin Xiao was a little stunned. He never expected that Feng Xiaogang's evaluation would be so high.

"Tell me the truth." Feng Xiaogang also became serious. "Did you write this script?"

"Yes. Others were involved."

"You want to shoot?"

"Yes."

"Investment, are actors ready?"

"It's settled."

"Damn!" Feng Xiaogang opened his mouth and cursed, "Can you bring me some good news?!"

"Let me put it this way." He gritted his teeth and said, "This film, I dare to predict, it will be the second World Without Thieves! At least from the script!"

"How about we discuss it? I'll shoot the script, and you decide everything else. How about it?"

"I'm afraid that you, a novice, won't be able to make such a good script!" Feng Xiaogang sighed, "I don't even dare to say that I can write such a script. I didn't expect that you, a person who just set foot in screenwriting, could write it."

"Brother Feng, let me just say it straight. It is impossible for me to shoot this film for others." Although he has already received a systematic evaluation, which is slightly higher than A World Without Thieves, now that he has received Feng Xiaogang's evaluation, he is even more confident. Confident "I want to ask Director Feng for advice on the lines in the script."

"Do you think I will make enemies for this year's box office competition?" Feng Xiaogang flipped through the script and smiled slyly, "It's still such a terrifying enemy."

Lin Xiao smiled and said, "Because Director Feng, I owe you a favor."

"It's kind of human." Feng Xiaogang snorted twice. In fact, considering their relationship, they were in the honeymoon period, so he would definitely agree, but he just got upset and wanted to make things difficult.

One of the unpleasant things, why can the other party write this kind of script?He has been writing A World Without Thieves for more than half a year!

The second dissatisfaction, why is this kind of script placed in front of me, but the guy on the opposite side told him that he filmed it by himself?

What a waste of money.

"Come to Huayi tomorrow morning. I only have three days." Feng Xiaogang flipped through the script reluctantly, handed it to Lin Xiao, and sighed, "Think about it again. I said I was serious about filming. You can do whatever you want."

As the most hopeful to be promoted to the level of a great director, he is very aware of the potential of the script in Lin Xiao's hands.

Lin Xiao replied with a smile, "Director Feng, I'm afraid I have to say sorry to you this time."

"Damn, go, go, it hurts to see you now." Feng Xiaogang started to chase people away.

Next, another week.

Feng Xiaogang does have his own uniqueness, and Lin Xiao has already grasped the general direction under his careful or unsatisfactory revisions.

After three days, Feng Xiaogang refused to revise it again.In the remaining four days, Lin Xiao began to smooth out all the lines by himself.

His screenwriting level has improved a lot invisibly.

On the eighth day, the time has come to April [-]th.

Looking at the stack of printed scripts in front of him, he was suddenly filled with a sense of accomplishment.

The crystallization of more than two months...

He caressed the script paper as if he were stroking a lover's face.

It feels a bit like breaking through the shackles of acting at the beginning, painful and happy.

Self-torture... He laughed at himself, and said silently in his heart, "Assessment: script painting skin."

"Swipe!" This time, the golden light shone like a tide.

Suddenly, like a night of spring breeze, thousands of trees and pear blossoms bloomed.

"Script: Painted Skin. Rating: Four Stars!"

"The whole story is done in one go. The characters are full, the dialogue is round, and the harmony between the groups is fully considered. The story is very strong and makes people want to stop."

"Xiao Wei's innocence, indifference, infatuation, triple change of heart. Pei Rong's is slightly indifferent, meticulous, infatuated, and also has multiple moods. Wang Sheng values ​​love and righteousness, and struggles between two women. Although it is far from the original script Far away, but blue is better than blue. The three characters each have their own attractiveness. Like three magnetic fields, they will firmly attract the audience."

"If the right artist can be found to play these three protagonists, it will be a real business card. Although the thinking has certain limitations. But there should be a good market in Asia."

"Asia! Four-star!" The voice in his head was like the sound of nature, and the feeling of happiness and suffering was overwhelmed Lin Xiao in an instant.

My first four-star script is finally released!

Looking back on the maddening revisions in the past few months, he finally felt that it was worth the money!

"No, you can't be complacent. This is just a four-star movie modified from a three-star script. It's not a real four-star movie! I only know now how difficult it is to write a good script." He closed his eyes , took a few deep breaths, and suddenly laughed, "Time Warner, here I come. Don't you want to see the results? I'll ask your most 'Chinese' judges to judge, how do you play this film!"