Wizards are mighty.

Chapter 226

"The following is the content of alchemy upgrade."

"We agreed on a time and place, and Sean went home to do alchemy. A few days later, Sean was promoted to level 6."

"We also successfully refined a combination potion."

"Well, Sean's leveling up through alchemy is a good way for him to grow. Refining a combination potion also shows that Sean has a certain level of attainment in alchemy."

"Of course, we can describe the alchemy process in more detail, such as Sean's concentration during alchemy, the difficulties he encountered, and the breakthroughs he made. This will allow high-dimensional observers to better understand Sean's growth process."

"Then there is the fourth main plot, which is to go on an adventure into the wild."

Q version of Vic quickly flipped through a few pages of the Book of the World and then said.

"After making preparations (including melee weapons, etc.), Sean sets out, describing what he sees along the way, communicating with his teammates, explaining the settings, describing Sean's performance along the way (such as using potions, being unfamiliar with the situation, etc.), and describing everyone's envy and jealousy. Once again, the supporting characters are used as a foil."

"This is quite reasonable here."

“Sean is ready to go, and what he sees along the way and his interactions with his teammates can show his character and interpersonal relationships.”

"The explanation of the setting can also allow high-dimensional observers to better understand some of the rules of this world."

“The description of Sean’s performance during the journey is quite realistic, such as his unfamiliarity with the use of potions, which is consistent with Sean’s growth process.”

"Everyone's envy and jealousy also highlight Sean's excellence from the side."

"Of course, you can also be more detailed when describing what you saw along the way, such as the scenery along the way, the people and things you met, so that high-dimensional observers will feel more immersive."

"Then it's about killing monsters."

"Reach the destination, fight the monster, and describe it in detail."

"Well, fighting monsters is a common plot in novels, but it's not easy to write well."

“Detailed description of the process of fighting monsters can increase the tension and excitement of the story.”

“You can describe the monster’s appearance, abilities, attack methods, and Sean and his teammates’ response strategies in detail. This will allow high-dimensional observers to feel the intensity of the battle more.”

"And then there was the turning point in the battle."

"I found the monsters too powerful to fight against. Several of Sean's teammates died. Sean ran out of mana and used Combination Potion I to kill the monsters. After the battle, he cleaned up the battlefield and described everyone's mood and summary."

“This episode is very dramatic.”

"From the monster becoming stronger to Sean's counterattack, this plot twist will be quite fascinating."

"The death of Sean's teammates will make high-dimensional observers feel the cruelty of the battle more. Sean's use of combined potions to kill the enemy also shows Sean's wisdom and adaptability."

"It is also important to clean up the battlefield after the battle and describe everyone's mood and summary. This can allow high-dimensional observers to better understand the results and impact of the battle."

"However, you can be more detailed when describing Sean's exhaustion of mana, such as Sean's fatigue and despair. This will allow high-dimensional observers to better understand Sean's predicament at the time."

"Then came the much-anticipated counterattack plot." Q version of Vic continued to read the contents of the Book of the World.

"In the depths, they found a treasure (which could be used to make a staff) and hundreds of seven-leaf white flowers. Sean first set up a shield, and then both sides turned against each other. Sean used the combination potion II, and then used magic to strengthen himself, and drew out a melee weapon to kill them all (because of insufficient mana, he could only fight in close combat. One person wanted to escape, but was killed by Sean with a catapult. It can describe the last person's thoughts and duel with Sean), describing the psychology of the crowd. Sean was slightly injured, but ecstatic."

"After returning to the city, concentrate on alchemy. Successfully reach level 7. Consider purchasing items and describing other life scenes. You can add more small plots or write in a diary style. This will last for three and a half months. The time is now mid-April."

“It is a reasonable plot development for Sean to continue alchemy and upgrade after returning to the city. Purchasing items and describing other life scenes can enrich Sean’s life and allow high-dimensional observers to better understand Sean’s daily life.”

“Adding subplots and diary-style descriptions can also make the story more interesting and realistic.”

"However, we can also describe the alchemy process in more detail, such as Sean's concentration during alchemy, the difficulties he encountered, and the breakthroughs he made. This will allow high-dimensional observers to better understand Sean's growth process."

"The follow-up is the connection content of the plot."

"Confirm the news of the war, join the caravan, become a mercenary, and set out together for Hogel City in the Kingdom of Karis. During the half-month journey, many soldiers checked and described the caravan's bribery, etc."

“This episode is very realistic.”

"After confirming the news of the war, he joined the caravan and became a mercenary. This is in line with Sean's personality and growth needs."

"The experiences along the way are also very rich. The scenes such as soldiers' interrogation and caravan bribery add to the authenticity and interest of the story."

"Also, you could have been more detailed in describing the soldiers' interrogations and the bribery of the caravans."

"For example, the soldier's expression, tone, and the process of the interrogation, as well as the way and amount of bribery by the caravan, will allow high-dimensional observers to better understand the plot of the story."

“What follows is a classic series of twists and turns.”

"We encountered danger on the way, and we worked together to solve it. We can consider monsters and robbers (explain the reason for becoming robbers). We learned about the spine of an apprentice-level mineral-eating beast and its matching seeds on the way, and bought them. We upgraded to level 8 on the way. There was also a part of the cliff that was paved. The time is now May)"

“This section can only be described as average.”

“Encountering danger along the way and joining forces to overcome it is a common plot in fantasy novels, but it is not easy to write well.”

"Explaining the robbers' reasons and the monsters' situation can help high-dimensional observers better understand the source of the danger. Learning about the trainee-level ore-eating beast's spine and purchasing it also adds to the story's interest and suspense."

"Also, the cliff is a clever foreshadowing. However, the description of the danger and the teamwork to overcome it could be more detailed, such as the specific manifestation of the danger, Sean and his teammates' response strategies, and the details of the battle. This will allow high-dimensional observers to feel the intensity of the battle more."

Q version of Vic said lightly.

……

After listening to the description of the Q version of Vic, both the imaginary Vic and the real Vic nodded with satisfaction.

In fact, what the Q version of Vic said is fully known at a higher narrative level and is not affected by information distortion between different narrative levels.

Because the Q version of Vic is actually a projection created by them detecting an intelligent being in a higher narrative level and using it as a template.

What it says can be completely replicated at a higher narrative level.

(End of this chapter)