Chapter 234

Q version of Vic smacked his lips and continued reading the rest of the story.

"Sean and the maid traveled all the way across the continent, describing their experiences in various cities and scenic spots, advancing their relationship. When passing through a small town, they encountered a formal-level slime, which they captured and gave to the maid as a pet. This took several years."

"Here, I think Sean and the maid's travels around the continent are quite interesting."

"In order to showcase the landscapes and cultures of different regions, we should describe in detail our experiences in each city, and it would be best if we included some of the local architectural features, customs, etc."

“These are all things that contribute to building a rich fantasy world.”

"Also, encountering a formal-level slime and giving it to a maid is an interesting plot."

"The slime's experience can be described in detail here, such as its habits, abilities, and past stories, etc."

"I walked all the way to Mika City, a prosperous city in the Seaside Empire, and contacted the Leviathan Adventure Group. I was told to wait for a while. I described the wealth of the prosperous city and spent a lot of money to travel around the city."

"We can have more tall buildings, elemental pool golems, and the like."

Q version of Vic is obviously in a good mood.

“In addition, the plot of arriving at Mika City should have a natural transition, and the description of the city should also reflect its prosperity and uniqueness.”

“Elements such as tall buildings and elemental pool golems can be described in detail to show the city’s level of technology and magic.”

“In addition, the plot of playing in the city can add some interesting events, such as meeting some local celebrities or participating in some city activities, making the playing process more interesting and rich.”

"The adventure leader and members came to receive them, talked with them, described their social life, and then signed a contract to join the group. They were led by the adventure group to explore various places in the city and have fun. This took several years."

"The reception from the adventure group was very good. Through communication, I was able to describe in detail the personality traits of the adventure group members and their relationship with Sean."

“In addition, the contract signing process can be more detailed, including the content of the contract, the rights and obligations of both parties, etc.”

“Being led by the adventure team to explore various places in the city and the plot of the tour can further show the city’s style and culture, and at the same time increase the relationship between Sean and the adventure team members.”

"We will head to the seaside and prepare to go out to sea. After flying at the port for a while, we will arrive at a vast sea area. The Leviathan will float up from the sea. It is best to demonstrate the hugeness and strength of the ship, as well as its various functions, and assign responsibilities to Sean and others."

"The preparation process for going out to sea should be described in detail. The process of flying from the port to the vast sea area can be described in more detail, such as the scenery on the sea and the feeling of flying."

"The appearance of the Leviathan is quite important."

"Sean can describe in detail the exterior of the ship, the interior structure, things like that."

"The allocation of responsibilities among the group can also reflect the organization and management of the team, and is also a preparation for subsequent hunting operations."

Q version of Vic said this, looking quite excited.

"Then, we'll set sail and hunt down master-level sea beasts."

"At that time, everyone's cooperation was perfect, and the target sea beast was successfully hunted down. Sean and the maid showed their strength and successfully won everyone's respect." "Hunting a master-level sea beast is quite exciting. During this process, we can introduce the appearance and abilities of the sea beast and the way everyone cooperates in detail, so that high-dimensional observers can better understand the intensity of the battle."

“The things that Sean and the maids do to show their strength and earn respect also reflect their importance in the team.”

"Hmm... By the way, decomposing the body, describing in detail the gains and insights, describing the comfortable life on the ship, and social activities such as dinner parties are also essential."

"The plot of decomposing the corpse can describe in detail the body structure of the sea beast, the treasures inside it, and the decomposition process. The description of the gains and insights can reflect the growth and progress of Sean and the members of the adventure team in this hunt, allowing high-dimensional observers to better understand their life at sea."

"Continue sailing, wandering overseas for several months, hunting several master-level and many formal-level sea beasts again, returning to Mika City, handling affairs, and dividing the money."

"The plot of continuing to sail and hunt sea beasts can add some new elements, such as encountering some dangers at sea or discovering new treasures, etc."

"Everyone dispersed to entertain themselves and do other things, describing Sean's training and socializing, and so on. This process of going out to sea and returning to the city lasted for 300 years."

"The time span of 300 years is quite long. In the description process, we can select some key nodes for detailed description, such as Sean's level upgrade every 100 years and important social events."

"At this time, the plot of everyone dispersing to entertain and do other things can show the personality traits and lifestyles of different characters. The description of Sean's cultivation and socializing can reflect his growth and progress in these 300 years."

Q version of Vic waved his hand, and the world in front of the three people evolved rapidly.

Time seemed to speed up at this moment. A strange light flashed before everyone, making the three of them dazzled.

“The story behind this is very interesting.”

"Xion was just getting upset because he couldn't get promoted to the official level, when suddenly a member of the adventure group brought news that a powerful patriot from a distant empire wanted sea tribe prisoners of war and offered a very high reward. Everyone was very excited."

At this point, Sean's frustration at not being able to get promoted could be described in more detail, so as to reflect his desire to improve his strength.

"Many masters gathered to launch a war against a country of the Sea Clan. Sean and the adventure group participated in it and took a leading role. Describe the various forces and social activities, etc., and describe Sean's reputation."

"More rules should be laid during this period."

At this point, Q version of Vic smacked his lips.

"Well... this scene is really big."

"The scene of so many masters gathering together to wage war is quite exciting and can demonstrate the strength and contradictions of all parties."

"At the same time, we can also tell more details about the various forces in the war, including their strengths, motivations, strategies, etc."

"Also, things that affect Sean's reputation and lay the groundwork for the conspiracy can make the story more complicated and interesting, and can make high-dimensional observers more excited about the sequel."

"Later, the war began. The sea tribe fought desperately. A newly promoted master targeted Sean. Danger was rife. The maid wanted to come to help but was blocked. In fact, it was intentional by his teammates. Sean was promoted to master in desperation and successfully held on until the maid arrived. The two of them teamed up to kill the newly promoted master of the sea tribe, and then killed several more masters of the sea tribe, and killed the leader of the organization who wanted to frame Sean and others, showing their momentum and dividing the spoils."

(End of this chapter)

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