Who among the gangsters wants to fall in love?

Chapter 60: Remarks on the launch of the book and the end of the book
Book friends who have read my previous book know that I am a real literary youth. After finishing each volume, I want to write a few words of thanks.

This one is no exception.

The schedule was quite good this time. The first volume was put on the shelves right after it was finished, so the reading experience of my brothers and sisters would not be affected.

If you have finished reading the first volume and feel that the style of this book is to your liking, then brothers and sisters please take a little time to continue reading.

The book was originally called "Young Master, Please Stay". When I published the book, after discussing with the editor, I felt that a flop like mine could not use such a dull title, so it was changed to "Who in the Underworld Wants to Fall in Love". Thanks to the editor, the performance of this book is okay, but it did piggyback on the popularity of the top book.

I want to write something of my own, and I don't want people to look at the title and say, 'This idiot author is just trying to get attention? That's how online literature works. Once a book becomes popular, everyone else will follow suit, and this one is no exception.'

But I haven't read that book at all. I want to change the name, but I'm afraid it will affect my grades, so I can only do this for now.

But I still can't forget "Young Master, Please Stay". Unfortunately, the only trace of the title of this book can be found in the tender words "Young Master" from Su Qingqi's mouth.

Let’s change the subject.

I switched from Pokémon novels to martial arts novels... Is this a martial arts novel? I don't know. Anyway, the story is well written and can make readers feel comfortable. No matter what type it is.

In order to prevent a writing breakdown in the first volume, I did not make big steps. That is, although Luo Chaoyan's identity is very important, there is no top combat power like Wu Kui, or a mixture of various forces. Instead, the background is mainly set in Taiyuan City, and the identity is concealed to steal a few ponies. The story is not large in scale, and the context is simple and not complicated, so it is easy to control.

But even though I tried to control myself, I still felt that the first volume was a failure. The first ten chapters were not attractive at all. I wanted to change it but didn't know where to start. After entering Taiyuan City, the story gradually got better and the pace became a little better, but there were too many foreshadowings before the final battle, which made it boring to read. But without these foreshadowings, the plot would have felt abrupt.

This is definitely a question of my ability.

Fortunately, I have basically written down everything I wanted to write. I also like to use the blank space writing method... I have also written a lot (satisfied), and I have realized my shortcomings. I will slowly correct them in the next volume.

Some book friends often leave messages asking why the protagonist doesn’t have a cheat or something… Actually, it’s not that I don’t want to, it’s that I don’t have the writing skills… I don’t understand how to write the exciting parts after cheating, I can only focus on writing the story.

Just like when I play Dark Souls, Almighty Blade and other soul games, among all of them, I have always been a melee tumbling type, focusing on the fundamentalism of fighting the boss’ moves, and never play fancy styles such as mages… So I should be more old-fashioned in my bones (I bought the Almighty Blade DLC but haven’t played it yet, and I’m typing every day, but unfortunately my clumsy hands still can’t save a few drafts)

Whenever I see those imaginative and creative topics on the bestseller list, I am always secretly jealous and envious... Why the hell don’t I have such imagination?

Fortunately, I know myself well and try not to touch things I can't write, but this is a transitional work, so it is inevitable that there are many flaws and logical flaws. I hope my fellow book friends can correct me (I have already revised many problems pointed out in the comments, and the more I read, the more I feel that my writing is rubbish).

The comment section and chapter reviews are too cold. Please talk more. Many comments from book friends are very interesting. They are all talented. I also hope that one day I may be able to write a book by copying book reviews.

In addition, regarding the plot, although the plot seems a bit heavy, this is a refreshing novel, and the tone and style of the writing are still relaxed and refreshing. I will not write anything heart-wrenching. Just like Zhao Wumian's character, on the one hand, he is righteous and chivalrous, and on the other hand, he is humorous and witty. He always likes to tell some dirty words to make Luo Chaoyan and Su Qingqi happy, and he often quarrels with Guan Yunshu.

If the hero is not of this kind, but a cool guy with deep hatred, then with this kind of plot, the viewing experience will be too serious. Then there are the poisonous points... Basically, the poisonous points reflected by most readers are actually concentrated on Zhao Wumian's chivalrous trip to Hequ, and they all think that he should not meddle in other people's affairs while he is on the run.

Being chivalrous and righteous is meddling in other people's business. Both Zhao Wumian and Su Qingqi know this. I have written it very clearly. So Su Qingqi suppressed herself, put the overall situation first, and chose to ignore it, while Zhao Wumian went to solve the matter personally... Thanks to this, Su Qingqi changed her opinion of Zhao Wumian and had a good impression of him.

Therefore, it is not that I can't think of this as meddling in other people's business, but this plot is purely designed to serve the character setting and emotional drama.

This leads to the emotional tone of the book. Zhao Wumian and the various heroines have a process of getting to know each other and falling in love. It is not that Zhao Wumian suddenly becomes a hero and saves the beauty, and then the heroines throw themselves into his arms... For example, if Zhao Wumian did not go to Hequ to be a hero, then until now, Su Qingqi would never have trusted him, let alone had a good impression of him.

It’s just that I wrote the emotional development of each heroine towards Zhao Wumian in a rather subtle way, for example, Guan Yunshu and Zhao Wumian lay in the snow in Prince Jin’s Mansion for almost a night, hugging each other for warmth. After Zhao Wumian went to harass Luo Xiangzhu, Guan Yunshu felt a little cold... Judging from her internal energy, it was definitely impossible that her body was cold, so this was actually an intention in her heart... That is, after Zhao Wumian left, the little nun felt a little lonely in contrast, but she didn’t know it and thought she was cold.

After all, I think since I'm writing about ancient oriental martial arts, I naturally have to write about the unique implicit beauty of our East.

However, when it is time to hit the ball straight, I will hit the ball straight, and when it is time to attack, I will attack. There is no need to be subtle about this. There are so many monk-like articles, so we have to let the book friends change their taste and read something refreshing.

The relationship between the hero and heroine is sweet all the way to the end, and I think my awareness of lightning avoidance is very high (Guan Yunshu's palm techniques are all about killing enemies from a distance, and there is almost no physical contact when fighting with people, which is evident)
Unfortunately, my writing experience is all focused on daily life, that is, the male and female protagonists will use a lot of dialogues to advance their feelings, and book friends may feel that the pace is too slow.

When other harem writers write about love scenes, they may be able to write several exciting points and advance several plot points in 10,000 words, but in my 10,000 words, I guess Zhao Wumian will only have a few arguments with Guan Yunshu and advance one plot point... I really envy other authors' ability to arrange plots.

I need to study hard and improve myself.

Finally, it will be available on the shelves after 12 noon on Tuesday, with a minimum of three updates.

The number of readers now is about 2500, which is not good, but the last book, Lalulas, had only 400 readers after it was 17 words long, and this one has about 2500 readers after it has only 300 words, and I also published it just after Sanjiang's release, which is much better. (The first order for the last book was 200, and I have already written million words. This book has improved so much, so it is naturally impossible to abandon it, so readers can rest assured.)
Taking into account that some book friends read pirated copies, I cut it in half and set the first order target at 1200. After that, I will add one more chapter for every 500 additional subscriptions.

(It only costs 10 cents to subscribe to one chapter, please support me, brothers and sisters!)
Qiu Guan is also an ordinary person. With good grades, he naturally has the energy to write. He writes every day after waking up... After all, the more he writes, the more he can earn, right?
Oh yes, and the old traditions.

If this book can make it into the top 500 of the monthly ticket list, I will write a special chapter that you all will understand... I will list the heroines at that time, and book fans will choose. The one with the highest votes will be the heroine of the special chapter.

However, the monthly ticket list is refreshed every month. If I can make it into the top 500 in the first month, I will write a sequel. In the second month, I need to make it into the top 400, and so on. It can be considered as a thought of progress... If I make it into the top 100 of the monthly ticket list, then I won't say much. I will vote for the heroine every month to ensure that the moderator will read it every month.

This is not just empty talk. The extra chapter about the hero and Gardevoir in the previous book is still posted in the group...

Above, thanks to Xiao Mingge, OK, Xue Xiao, Jing Xiang, Su Shao, and all the book friends who have read all the way here. Many of them are familiar faces from the previous book. I am really touched. I read your comments every time, and I try to correct the problems you point out (there are also many typos and wrong idioms. I am really illiterate)
Thanks again!

Please give me a first order!!!
(End of this chapter)