EVA: Shinji Ikari Returns from the Dragon Clan

Chapter 79 Remarks on the launch
I wrote a lot of words of thanks for the launch, but after thinking about it, I felt that it was unnecessary.

I originally wanted to answer some questions about character appearances and harem members, but I felt that if I did so, facing the already determined ending, people might lose their sense of novelty, so I deleted them all.

So just answer these few questions.

Q: How many words should the author write?

A: About one million words.

Q: What? How can EVA fan fiction reach a million words? Aren't we all just reckless people like Ikari Shinji, who works hard and conquers the harem, and collects Asuka, Ayanami, Katsuragi, Misato, Akagi, and Ritsuko, and finishes all the Angels with a few hundred thousand or ten thousand words, and either the ending is bad or it's abandoned.

A: Apostles and the like are actually not important at all, mecha battles are not important at all, Asuka and Ayanami Rei are the most important.

For EVA's audience,
"As expected, the appearances of Ayanami Rei and Asuka are more in line with expectations!"

——I think this feeling is the core of this article.

Don't worry, you will have everything you want.

A harem story that is full of sweetness and excitement.

Q: Why does Asuka seem a little yandere? As an author, I’m so scared.

A: What gave you? Asuka in the TV version has no psychological problems. She is very self-respecting, strong and self-loving. She has no illusion of inferiority... She is inferior, jealous, stubborn, and wants to save face. She cannot accept failure. She lacks parental love. She is difficult to be independent. She relies on others for support. She pretends to be calm, refuses to communicate, and is closed. I think if Shinji really gave her a hug in the original work, she would definitely be entangled to death.

I am best at writing yandere (loudly)
Q: Why are there so few Dragon Clan plots?
A: Because this is, after all, a Return of EVA fanfiction, not a Dragon Clan fanfiction. People may have read too many Return of Dragon Clan fanfictions, so they always think this book is a Dragon Clan fanfiction.

I may have to say this again.

——This is the EVA fanfiction of the Return Stream!

——Not a Dragon Clan fanfiction!
Of course, the golden eyes and the spiritual words will still be useful. I haven't forgotten about this, so don't worry.

Q: Isn't the protagonist an elite of the executive department? He came out of a sea of ​​blood and corpses, so why is he still dating Asuka Ayanami Rei? Too childish, too nagging.

A: I remember that my role was as an intern college student who had not yet graduated.

After being led by my predecessors to participate in several operations, I died and was reborn in the Nibelungen in the Arctic. When did the setting of the executive department elites fighting through the mountains of corpses and seas of blood appear? When I saw this comment, I was a little confused, thinking, is there really such a setting for me?

Then I turned back to the beginning of the first chapter and breathed a sigh of relief, because I had not set it before.

Shinji Ikari is just a poor intern who is still collecting credits.

I should have written about it in the first few chapters.

When he heard that his father was the commander-in-chief, he thought about credits and graduation.

Please recall this carefully.

Besides, when it comes to love, Lu and Chen Wenwen are like Nuonuo, Chu and Xia Mi and Su Qian, aren't the dragons just like this when it comes to love? I'm really confused by this criticism.

You can also tell us what you think the elite of the Kassel Executive Department should look like?
Do Ye Sheng and Jiude Aki count?
I feel that falling in love with Asuka Ayanami Rei is just like the countless returning Dragon Clan fan fictions, which require falling in love with little monsters. It should be something that everyone enjoys seeing.

Lu Mingfei, who returned from being the Lord God, and Lu Mingfei, who returned from being the Sea Tiger, have both been through a lot of blood and blood, and have gone crazy, so why is he still looking for someone like Eri to fall in love with?

Everyone likes to see it, and the author has to eat, there’s nothing we can do about it.

Why can't you be a little considerate of others' desire to eat? You are the only one who thinks about yourself. Besides, being indecisive in love and being an emotionless killing machine on the battlefield - Senior Brother Chu gave you a thumbs up, is there any necessary connection between the two?
As for the character of the protagonist, I think it is more important to keep Shinji Ikari's youthfulness, so he was Chu Nan during those years in the Dragon World, and didn't mess around with any of his senior and junior sisters, and stayed chaste for Asuka and Ayanami Rei. I don't really like the story of an old and scumbag returning to EVA and cheating on two little girls.

Moreover, EVA has the concept of soul. If Shinji Ikari's soul was changed, it would not be accepted by Unit-01.

I have seen an analysis video about EVA before, and I don’t know if what the upvoter said is right - Asuka and Ayanami Rei both have cloning plans, but there is only one Ikari Shinji from beginning to end, and that is because his soul is special, and only the original one will be accepted by EVA-01.

Some people say it is mature, some people say it is childish and nagging, so I can only say that everyone has their own face.

Q: It copied too much from the original work, and it is completely the same as the original work. It is far inferior to any other EVA fan works, and the quality is quite average. There is no speculation on the original work's Black Moon, White Moon, Dead Sea Scrolls, Adam, Lilith, Selee, and the Human Completion Plan. There is no philosophical thinking at all. There are too few streams of consciousness that require radio waves to understand. Without streams of consciousness, there is no EVA flavor. There is no exploration of the stories behind the apostle code names. Moreover, why are there only emotional descriptions and daily love life? Asuka and Ayanami Rei quickly fell in love with the protagonist and joined the harem. Who is interested in reading your delicate psychology of the two of them?

A: You are right.

How about this, there is an app called Bilibili. You open this app and search for eva analysis, apostle analysis, and selee analysis on it. I think this is what you want to see.

……

The editor did not respond to this book's internal submission, and it was rejected when it was sent directly for contract review. It was only accepted on the last day of cross-review, and I received a message from the contract signing station.

I would like to thank editor Penglai for picking up a little loser like me who was unwanted by everyone.

Thanks to the big guys who recommended the book to me. They gave me some encouragement.

Thank you to all the readers who have supported me in the early stage. Without your comments and votes, I really would not be able to persist if I had only written silently by myself.

Currently, there are more than 3,000 followers. Although it cannot be uploaded to Sanjiang because it is a fan fiction, it is not too much to dream of 2,000 orders, right?
Add update rules:

Everyone knows how long it takes to write a chapter with delicate writing style, so I can only owe it and pay it back slowly. I will count the amount I owe every week.

For every 200 additional songs, one more chapter will be added.

One more chapter for every 400 monthly tickets

Every 200 rewards will add one more chapter

As for the leader... will there be one? Definitely not. If there is, I can update it overnight.

So far, I need to pay back the monthly tickets for 2 and the rewards for 3 (currently 1400 monthly tickets, originally 3, but I owed more updates during the new book period, but I couldn't update more at that time)

Now 5 more chapters are needed.

I couldn’t return it when the new book was on sale, but now I can finally return it to everyone.

The third or fourth update will be available tomorrow. I hope you can support me by placing an initial order.

Everyone guessed that I was not a newcomer with a new book, but that I came from there. Although I was speechless for a moment, it is true that days four and five are the basics, days six and seven are surprises, and days eight and nine are the limits.

By the way, I'm setting up a book club. I wonder if anyone would like to chat. The number of fans will gradually increase in the future.

Title of next volume:

The Beast That Calls Love at the Center of the World

(End of this chapter)