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Chapter 29 Which great god's vest is this? !

The director of the comics web department of Qun-Eisai, Saburo Mikami, was confused at this moment.

what happened?
Why is this remake here like a slap in the face? I just said it's a pity that there is no painting remake!

Is this a coincidence, or is someone deliberately framing me?

Saburo Mikami looked at his assistant.

The assistant also looked innocent.

Saburo Mikami calmed down for a moment, his mind spinning rapidly.

No, it was just a coincidence, not a deliberate frame-up. Although the assistant's ability is a bit questionable, he can be trusted.

[Ahem, everyone, please take a look. This manga was eliminated from the Teke Award because, on the one hand, the competition for the Teke Award is fierce and many excellent works have emerged. On the other hand, this manga must have some very big flaws.] Minister Mikami Saburo cleared his throat and tried to pull back the topic.

But the people below were still a little dazed.

Because anyone who sees the opening scene will give it a thumbs up: "That's awesome!"

"Is this a discarded comic?"

"Isn't that right? Is this a mistake?"

Some students have already begun to question it.

However, Fujido Kaoru did not stare as she did before, because she was also in shock and doubt.

She was shocked because the author she saw was still the web version of Oda Shingo. How could he draw such a wonderful picture? !

I was doubting that the web version would be remastered? Is that true? I happened to see it by chance, and it was when the lecturer mentioned the web version.

Also, will this work really be eliminated by the Shoujia Award?
Her thoughts were the same as those of most people present.

[Let’s take a closer look at this comic.] Saburo Mikami began to change the manuscripts one by one by hand.

There is no choice but to finish the lesson.

[Usually, 80% of the mistakes made by novices are that the opening chapter has nothing to do with the theme.] Based on his rich experience in rejection, Saburo Mikami tried to apply some common mistakes made by novices to this comic.

The second one is a close-up of the fist.

[Ahem, the close-up at the beginning of this comic is very relevant to the theme, at least it is not a rookie mistake.] Mikami Saburo secretly confirmed in his heart that this author's remake of his poor painting skills is acceptable.

Everyone has put aside the web version they had seen before, and their attention is drawn to this remake.

Is this explosion the result of the power of a fist?

Anyone would think so, because the previous series of scenes of the protagonist swinging his fists and close-ups of his fists have formed a fixed impression on people.

The third one is a close-up of the explosion effect.

The fourth one is still a close-up of the explosion effect.

On the fifth page, a strange man appeared and waved his hand to shoot out a ball of light, and another part of the city turned into ruins.

There was a slight wow from the audience.

The picture is shocking!
Saburo Mikami was stunned for a moment, then casually took out a comic book that he had used for demonstration before.

Compare at the same time and switch continuously.

There was a web comic as an example before, which also had many close-up shots. But when this "One Punch Man" came out, the previous one was dwarfed by the big one.

No, it's not on the same level at all!

The explosion scenes of both are simple shots, while the scene of "One Punch Man" is not only continuous, but also has a sense of progressive shots.

[The continuous switching of shots gives people a sense of movement, just like watching an animation. This is what the editor calls: comics that move!] Saburo Mikami gave his evaluation subconsciously.

In the cartoon scene, a little girl crying in the ruins attracts attention.

The monster's hand began to grow to a demonic size.

The huge devil's claws subconsciously remind readers of the protagonist's sandbag-sized fist at the beginning of the story.

The strange man grabbed the girl, and it seemed as if her flesh and blood would explode in the next moment.

But a figure appeared.

Close-up, close-up of the back, close-up of the cloak fluttering!

For ten consecutive pages, there is almost no speech except for the background narration.

It’s just the picture, yes, the picture, it’s completely expressed by the picture!
Now, Saburo Mikami continued to display the original comic drawings silently without saying a word.

The protagonist Saitama saved the little girl at a critical moment.

Weird people are surprised, weird people turn around, weird people are confused.

"Who are you?" The first line of dialogue in the whole article was spoken by the weirdo who is the villain.

The protagonist simply responded indifferently: "A man who became a hero out of interest."

After a close-up of the protagonist's sturdy figure from behind, a close-up of the protagonist's smile from behind, and a close-up of the protagonist's appearance from an oblique angle, the protagonist's face finally appeared. A bald head!
The previous storyboards that were so awesome and the painting skills that were so delicate and full of tension suddenly changed at this moment!
The painting style is very sloppy, and the protagonist's bright head!
Everyone on and off the stage felt that they were having a hard time recovering.

It was as if emotions had been stirred up one after another, but were suddenly slammed down at this moment.

[King's hand...] San Shang Saburo said in a low voice of surprise, but the microphone played the voice out.

This is a subconscious evaluation formed from years of reviewing comics.

A king move is a move in shogi that can capture the opponent's king. In the comics industry, it refers to a picture carefully drawn by the author that firmly captures the reader's curiosity.

Because the effect brought about by this powerful drop in picture is a strong curiosity!
This guy is the protagonist?!

Sure enough, in the lecture hall, many students began to look at each other in confusion.

Everyone knows that you must keep reading at this point, and you absolutely cannot stop! The comic has already been filmed at this point, completely capturing the reader.

No, no, we know the plot!

Some students reacted, and even Fujido Kaoru subconsciously let out a light "ah".

Everyone noticed that everyone's heart was captured by the remake of One Punch Man! They almost forgot the plot they had watched before!

It’s not that I forgot! It’s that the visuals are so tense and expressive that it feels like a lifetime ago, as if I had never seen it before!
Is this the same work?!
You are kidding!

Are you lying to Onmyoji?!
You lied to the eight million gods of Fusang?!
Everyone present couldn't believe it.

How can such a visual appeal be compared to a mere web version? The opening of the first chapter alone has already captured the reader's heart!
Then the weirdo started to talk a lot of self-boasting nonsense.

Seems to be very annoying...

Just when readers are about to get bored with the large amount of text, suddenly!

The entire comic suddenly returned to the state of presenting the plot in close-up! Just because...

The protagonist punches!
ONE PUNCH MAN!!!

Stop it abruptly!

Hearty!

It feels so good!

Hit the topic! Hit the topic! Hit the topic!

One punch to the point————!!!
Many people present recalled the importance of the theme of the work that the guest teacher had just mentioned.

This is the remake of "One Punch Man"!

Fujido Kaoru's breathing became rapid, and she stared at the huge projection screen in the lecture hall, unable to recover for a long time.

Even though she knew the plot before and was even very familiar with it, she was still shocked!
"..." Minister Saburo Mikami's hands were shaking. He did not use optical speculation anymore. Instead, he stood silently on the stage and looked through the original drawings.

"Keep showing it off!"

"I still want to see it!"

Some students began to get impatient.

But Saburo Mikami ignored him because he didn't hear it.

He was completely absorbed in rapidly flipping through the original drawings, with beads of sweat oozing from his forehead.

Quality...stable!
Storyboard...extreme!
The painting...excellent!

The plot... catches people!
The rhythm... is brisk!
Saburo Mikami took a deep breath and looked at the signature carefully.

Author: Oda Shingo...

Unrecognizable name.

Are you new?
Mashaka!
No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No!
Although young, Saburo Mikami has been immersed in comics for more than 20 years! As a department manager, his experience is no less than that of an old editor!
A layman sees the fun, an expert sees the door!
This level is absolutely impossible!
Which great god is wearing a vest? !

He took off his glasses and wiped the sweat from his forehead with a handkerchief.

[Excuse me, please take a break.] Mikami Saburo suddenly turned off the microphone, left the podium, and walked backstage.

A surge of anger welled up in him.

If you hadn't come to talk about comics as a guest, how long would this work have been delayed?

Because of the judgment of my editor, it was almost delayed!
Why can't the web department always produce results?
Why is the web department's work location arranged in the basement of the headquarters building? !

As the head of the web department, why am I always the last to speak at department meetings?!
Minister Saburo Mikami's breathing became rapid and his steps became heavy.

A school teacher immediately came forward to respond, but he had a serious expression on his face and picked up his phone and walked backstage, as if he had an important call.

The teacher had no choice but to go to the podium and try to save the situation temporarily.

The students in the audience were also talking a lot, and the situation was a little out of control for a while.

At this moment, a loud roar came from the backstage where Minister Saburo Mikami had turned to!
That was Saburo Mikami who was on the phone, roaring in anger that he couldn't suppress at all:
"Kamefuji! Baka no deer————!!!"

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