Immortal of Eternal Life and Endless Ages

The decision to rewrite the second life
Decided.

Rewrite the second life!
That is to rewrite the third volume.

After waking up today, I did some deep self-reflection and summarized my problems.

I can't feel any emotions. Apart from physical reasons, the root cause is the plot.

Currently the protagonist is severely under-motivated, and the plot points that would add motivation to the protagonist have been missed.

Adding this kind of plot now would only seem extremely stiff.

It’s like when you are halfway through a meal and suddenly a hot towel is brought to you and you are told that you forgot to wash your hands and you should wash them first before continuing to eat.

However, if I don’t change it and continue writing like this, I will only become more and more dissatisfied.

So, I hesitated all day today.

Finally, I decided to rewrite the second life and cook a new meal for everyone.

In the online literature industry, modifying the text is the biggest taboo among taboos.

Whether you ask the editor or your colleagues, the answer you get will not be supportive.

Even if other friends come to ask me.

I would also say: "You have already written it. Changing the article will only lose more readers. Think about the manuscript fee and full attendance. Just bear with it and wait for the water to pass."

"By the time you've finished revising your book, readers won't even remember it..."

"As long as there are more words, these plots are not a problem..."

So and so...

However, if this situation happened to me, I still couldn't bear it.

So, I decided to change the text.

Even if I have to give up this month's royalties and full attendance.

At the same time, you will also bear the risk of a drop in royalties for the next six months or even the entire book.

I still want to change.

The performance of this book is not bad, both the average subscription and follow-up subscription are very good.

As long as I update regularly, it is not difficult to earn over ten thousand yuan a month.

It can be said that this income exceeds that of more than 80% of people of the same age.

Even if the performance goes downhill in the future, as long as you get a few more recommendations, it will not be difficult to get 10,000 orders within two or three months.

But I still don’t want to compromise like this.

In my life, I don’t actually have obsessive-compulsive disorder and I never get entangled in anything.

On the contrary, I have very low expectations for myself.

Don’t take many things to heart. What’s past is past, and what’s happened has happened.

I rent a house by myself and send two thousand yuan home every month for living expenses.

My family didn’t even know I was writing a book, they thought I was still working (in fact, after I graduated from college, I only worked for about a year in my first job, then I secretly quit with a little over 10,000 in savings to write).

My daily life is to eat takeout, think about plots, and look for inspiration on the Internet by reading jokes and various popular science knowledge. Whatever I eat and drink is up to you. (PS: except for pickled vegetables such as sauerkraut, sour beans, pickled mustard tuber, snail noodles, stinky tofu, etc. I cannot accept other sour tastes except the sour taste of fruits.)
Not even much gaming.

The only thing that makes me feel conflicted is writing.

Once I have written it down and it has entered my heart, I will be very happy and have a great sense of accomplishment. I will walk with great vigor and even be able to jump up while walking.

If I feel that my writing is not good, I will feel lifeless and gloomy, and I can only eat a few bites at a time.

That’s why I decided to change the article.

……

From the beginning, I had two sets of assumptions about the second life.

One is to enter the medicine vein.

This solution can quickly create excitement, but its disadvantage is that it lacks follow-up power, similar to a certain Lu flow.

As for the second plan, it was actually what I planned to write at the beginning. It has a slower pace and is more long-lasting, similar to the beginning of the first volume.

I didn't choose this one because the plot points are repeated in the first volume, which seems to be a cliché.

Moreover, the pace is relatively slow, and space is spent on character development.

If I put it in the paid chapter, I’m worried about being scolded.

But now that I think about it, the routine still wins people’s hearts, and the second plan is more sophisticated.

Therefore, in the second life, let’s go with the second plan.

In addition, after the modification, some settings will also be modified.

……

Finally, the modification progress:

There will be a minimum of two chapters or four thousand words every day, covering the original chapters, and the number of words will not be less than the original chapters.

At the same time, the modification progress will be indicated on the title of this chapter.

The format is as follows:
10.15, changed to Chapter xx.

You don't need to click into the catalog, you can directly know the progress from the title of the bookshelf.

Currently, 28 chapters need to be revised.

Starting from tomorrow, the modification is expected to be completed on November 11st.

At that time, I will return the money for the previous monthly tickets and add more chapters.

Finally, I am sorry for everyone's expectations!!!
This time I was willful!

Ps:

Melatonin doesn't have as big of an effect as you might think.

Currently, I still wake up every few hours when I sleep and have many dreams.

However, now I can fall asleep again very quickly after waking up. I slept for nine hours in total from last night to today, so it is helping.

(End of this chapter)