Rebirth 2010, the best
Chapter 123 Successful Submission
Chapter 123 Successful Submission
Lu Yao just played and sang a short piece, but it made everyone's eyes light up.
According to Wei Qianqian, it is:
"The four words 'the whole building is for rent' are the essence. It feels like everything is in these four words! It's very vivid!"
While she was praising him, she felt a little unsatisfied:
"Anymore?"
"That's all. Just this part."
"Then why don't you improve it? Improve the melody first, and then we can split it up. My heart, the whole building is for rent... Don't change it to rent everywhere, I think everywhere is not good, change it to rent and give it to you..."
"That's a grammatical error."
"Hmm... that's right. Giving you everything... seems to be okay. Hey, this melody is good. How about we follow the style of Coldplay?"
"I can see it."
"Yes, I think the melody is pretty nice."
"Let's try it."
Eventually, the band, which had yet to take a name, decided on the style of the song.
The heavy responsibility fell on Lu Yao.
"Lu Yao, can you please improve the lyrics?"
"it is good."
Lu Yao nodded and took the laptop directly.
While moving his fingers, he said:
"Let's not talk about love, okay? I think since we've chosen rock, it's a bit petty to talk about love in the lyrics. Be more generous? In youth, love is just a tiny part of it. We can be more passionate."
"Does it mean that there should be a majestic vitality? And the emotions should be more complicated?"
"Yo?"
Lu Yao was stunned, looking at Mr. Xu who said this, feeling a little surprised.
Does Brother Xiaochen understand this well?
He didn't even give any guidance, and now they're on the same channel right away?
His words also attracted the approval of others.
Zhao Hang said:
"Indeed, it feels like all songs nowadays are about love. You love me, I love her, she doesn't love me, I love you... It's quite vulgar. It's like entering a vicious circle. It seems that if we don't write about love, no one will be able to write songs."
"Yes, yes, that's how I feel, too."
Master Xu smiled and stretched out his hand, and the two clapped their hands:
"I feel it's boring too. Love and affection, it seems like without love all singers would die. Let's not do something so cliché and old-fashioned, just follow my request and create a passionate and blooming youth. What do you think?"
"I think it's okay!"
Zhang Lina's eyes were also full of approval.
"Hee hee~"
Wei Qianqian was also happy, looking at Lu Yao and asked:
"Then I'll leave it to you. Use the Coldplay style and make the lyrics more passionate, so that our youth can bloom! ... How long will it take you?"
"Hmm... I'll try."
He created a document directly on his notebook.
Wei Qianqian was stunned and asked subconsciously:
"Now?"
"correct."
Lu Yao thought that the lyrics were already available, so why not just copy them?
"..."
"..."
"..."
Several people were speechless, just watching him sitting on the chair with the laptop on his lap.
After thinking for a while, I started typing.
"How are you, people in the rainbow?"
"Are you happy?"
"I was looking forward to it."
"Do you still remember singing, remember la la la..."
Damn, you’re really good at it?
Mr. Xu was a little confused as he watched him typing.
At this time, Zhao Hang muttered softly:
"I heard that... Jay Chou wrote "Dear, That's Not Love" for Angela Chang in just five minutes."
Master Xu looked at him speechlessly and nodded:
"I see, you mean Lu Yao is the same as Jay Chou."
"..."
"..."
"..."
Now it was the three's turn to be speechless.
Although I don't know what the lyrics of Lu Yao's song are like, but is he catching up with Jay Chou? ...Forget it.
What's his rank?
What's our rank?
Can I also try to scam Jay Chou?
For about ten minutes, several people watched Lu Yao pause, ponder, and strum his guitar occasionally... Finally, he said:
"almost."
Several people hurried over and craned their heads to look at the screen.
Sure enough... a lot of lyrics.
Wei Qianqian read down the lines one by one. Although she only had a vague idea of the melody, when she saw the words "I rode my broken motorcycle and wanted to take a spin, but I sold it", her eyes lit up instantly.
"This is good! This verse is good! It echoes the previous one about renting out the whole building, just like a road movie, very vivid... I like this!"
Not to mention her, other people also think it's good.
It’s just that this kind of “good” has no intuitive concept because it only has lyrics but no melody.
So, several people looked at Lu Yao again.
Even Mr. Xu said directly:
"Brother Jie Lun, how should... we sing this?"
"..."
Lu Yao's mouth twitched.
After thinking about it, he picked up the guitar and played the melody again.
"The melody is right here... I'll go back and think about it. We have to do it bit by bit."
"That's okay too."
Wei Qianqian checked the time:
"It's almost time. How about we keep the same time tomorrow at noon?"
With the others nodding in agreement, it was finalized.
Everyone packed up their instruments and walked out together.
After we got downstairs, we went our separate ways because of different courses.
He and Mr. Xu walked towards the dormitory together.
"I find you're quite versatile."
Mr. Xu's tone was full of surprise.
“Can you write songs?”
"That's right. My buddy is a martial arts genius picked from thousands of people. Do you want to see the Half-Step Collapse Fist? I'll show you one."
"… Tell me who you're going to hit first."
"Hey hey hey."
Lu Yao chuckled a few times, but before he reached the dormitory building, his phone rang.
The person who came was Shen Yi.
He quickly answered the phone:
"Hello, Professor Shen."
"Where are you now?"
"I was just planning to go back to the dorm."
"Then come directly to the North District, my office."
"Um, okay, I'll go right away."
He knew that his article might be gaining some momentum.
So he threw the guitar case directly to Mr. Xu:
"Please take it back to the dormitory for me. I will go find Professor Shen."
"Oh okay."
Mr. Xu nodded and carried the two boxes towards the dormitory in a somewhat foolish manner.
Professor Shen Yi, the people in the dormitory are no strangers to him.
The reason is very simple, this person is addicted to games.
Liu Mingze borrowed two accounts on the Fandral Staghelm server and played against the thief, mage and priest combination, a classic arena combination in World of Warcraft, with his mage.
Although Professor Shen's skills were average, he was no match for Lao Liu and another teammate.
In a week, he was brought directly to the level of 2200 points. In the World of Warcraft Arena, if you want to get the Gladiator Dragon at the end of the season, you must be in the top 5% of the battlefield group. According to Liu Mingze's estimate, this score is about 2600 points.
Because I was playing with Professor Shen, after reaching 2200 points, the improvement was slower.
As the team's weak link, Shen Yi is always targeted.
So the scores go up and down.
Liu Mingze also knew how this thigh introduced by Lu Yao might help him in his future life, so he would basically practice it two or three days a week.
The relationship between everyone became closer in this state of both teacher and friend.
Over time, the people in 305 became familiar with him.
Lu Yao walked all the way to his office, knocked on the door, and walked in.
Shen Yi was typing on the screen.
But he didn't play any games. When he saw Lu Yao coming, he waved and pushed a few pages of paper on his desk over to him.
"Take a look first, and I'll tell you in detail when I'm done."
"OK, all right."
Lu Yao took it.
I saw that the name of my article had changed: "Inferring the possibility of changes in future international relations based on the development difficulties of the semiconductor industry"
And the author's name: Fuhua University - Lu Yao, Shen Yi
He was in front, Shen Yi was behind...
"The name has changed?"
"Well, this one is more detailed and more purposeful."
"But the word 'dilemma'..."
Hearing this, Shen Yi looked up at Lu Yao and shook his head:
"These two words are very appropriate. After reading your article, I showed it to several professors in your electronics department at school... The word 'dilemma' is quite appropriate. But your article will not be published."
Lu Yao was stunned.
"Not sending it?" "Yes."
Shen Yi finally took his hands off the keyboard, and then his printer started to ring.
Amid the noise, he said:
"Not only will the school magazine not publish it, you shouldn't submit it to other magazines either. There's no need."
“Is it because it’s not academic enough?”
“It has nothing to do with academics.”
Shen Yi shook his head, thought for a moment, and said with a more humorous tone:
"What's the saying on the Internet? Don't say anything that doesn't represent solidarity. Do you understand?"
"Uh... maybe."
"Ha. Actually, the main reason is that this kind of forward-looking article is not suitable for publication. Because it is guiding. Of course, if we talk about academic status, it is normal for a student to be full of worries about the future. Although this view is a bit "non-mainstream" for your identity, it is understandable that a newborn calf is not afraid of a tiger. And if your academic status is improved, it will be even more inappropriate to publish..."
“Because it is more instructive?”
"Yes. Authoritative and instructive."
Seeing that Lu Yao understood what he meant, he felt relieved.
"In fact, there are two aspects to this. On the one hand, we say... in the world, you are a nobody and your influence is not important. For example, if you publish to the school magazine, the only people who can see it are students. Some students are immature and they can't control what they think when they see what you publish. On the other hand, if you publish to other magazines, or whether it is a school magazine or a magazine, after you publish it, if they agree with your article, they are actually expressing an attitude. That is, they agree with it. Therefore, even if many people understand the meaning of your article, they will probably ignore it."
"Protect yourself?"
"Ah."
Shen Yi nodded:
"To be more precise, it is better not to meddle in other people's business. Academic journals should talk about science. As for other journals, the semiconductor industry itself has its own threshold. What you write is also not professional enough. Although it is very universal, it has too much guiding connotation."
Having said that, before Lu Yao could speak, he continued:
"Of course, this is not what you meant, but... there is no need to bring unnecessary trouble to yourself because of an article. Therefore, it is not suitable to be posted."
"But you... have polished it up a lot."
He asked as he looked at the article which had much more content than the few pages he had just read and was marked with light yellow sections.
"This is for you to read. At the same time, I will submit your article together with mine."
As I was speaking, the printer also finished printing.
He sorted out the stack of papers and handed it to Lu Yao.
Lu Yao took it and saw the title: "Inferences on the situation of international relations and semiconductor industry, and the multi-directional possibilities in the future"
The title is very long.
There is also a lot of paper.
Lu Yao took a quick look at it, there were a total of 9 pages.
He guessed a possibility in his mind and asked tentatively:
"Where to submit it? Didn't you say you wouldn't publish it?"
"what."
Shen Yi was happy.
Because he could finally see in this student... a bit of the innocence that only students have.
So he said:
"Every year, those of us who work in international relations actually have to give an inference to the internal affairs. To be honest, it was your article that gave me the inspiration to write this article. Although it took several months, at least the results are not bad. You just read it here and you can't take it away. Then I will upload mine and yours together."
Having said that, he thought about it and gave a reassurance:
"At least, in my opinion, your point of view has a lot of potential for discussion. Of course, there will be no reward for this kind of article..."
"It doesn't matter. I just wrote it because I saw the prospects of the industry. I didn't think about the reward."
Although he said this, his heart was as clear as a mirror...
This kind of “no reward” is the biggest reward.
Even now he doesn't know where the article will be delivered.
But precisely because the other party doesn’t say “where”, you can’t ask “where”.
After hearing his words, Shen Yi nodded:
"Well, you should first look at the parts I polished for you, and then look at mine, so that the two can be combined together."
"Ok."
Lu Yao sat on the sofa and started to watch bit by bit.
To be honest, the content of the article has been enriched a lot.
But...it doesn't look bloated.
On the contrary, it gives people a feeling of fine cutting.
Whether it is the words or the sentences.
At least he could see that even some of the things he had written before had been streamlined in terms of words and sentences.
It is obvious that the other party has put a lot of thought into it.
But the core idea of the article has not changed.
After finishing his own, he read Shen Yi's article.
Only then can we see the "difference".
The difference is that Shen Yi's judgment... is bolder.
In other words, more intuitive.
For example, he believes that once the semiconductor industry rises, those whose interests are harmed will definitely use extreme methods to restrict it... or impose sanctions.
Although the words are simple, but...how should I put it, the meaning is very straightforward.
And, just as Lu Yao was seeking a solution but could not find one, there was no answer in his article either.
He just proposed various possibilities, and supported them with a lot of data that Lu Yao didn't even know where he found it, and made some bold guesses even to Lu Yao.
From this point of view alone, it's quite outrageous.
He had discussed these things with his mentor before. According to his mentor, there were experts in the think tank.
Moreover, occasionally when his girlfriend chats with him and talks about some news, he will also reveal a tone similar to that of a mentor.
But she said it more bluntly.
But if we say that Lu Yao truly felt this way, this article is the first time.
Straightforward, bold, and even chilling.
So much so that after reading all the content, he expressed his true feelings to Shen Yi:
“It feels a bit too bold.”
"International relations is about making bold guesses and carefully verifying them. This is inevitable."
Shen Yi stretched out his hand and Lu Yao returned both articles.
Then he threw it into the shredder.
Lu Yao instinctively glanced at the printer.
Sure enough, the brand of the printer is PANTUM.
Runtu.
This is normal.
Pantum is a nationally produced and independently developed printer, and will also be the standard printer for almost all institutional units in the future.
The reason is simple. Printers may contain confidential information. And the means of spies are hard to guard against.
Lu Yao can read this article, but it is hard to say whether other people can read it.
"Let's put it this way. I'll submit your article, but you don't have to wait for the results. There won't be any results, but I can assure you that someone will see what you're worried about."
"Okay, Professor Shen."
Lu Yao nodded quickly:
"Then I'm going back."
"Yeah. Oh yeah, ask Liu Mingze if he wants to play in the arena tonight. If not, I'll go with the guild."
"Uh...ha, okay."
Lu Yao smiled and nodded, then politely said goodbye.
After coming out, he called his girlfriend immediately.
A gasp was heard.
"Hello, baby~"
"Sorry, Sister Li, I'm bothering you."
"Hey you..."
Soon, Hu Li called back, her voice full of coquettishness:
"Bad guy! You teased me again!"
"Ha~"
Lu Yao, in a good mood, chuckled:
"Dancing?"
"No, I'm working out. Are you coming over tonight?"
"Well... let's not go today. I just came out from Professor Shen's place."
After he explained the matter, Hu Li said:
"Well, they have internal reference indicators every year. One of the important criteria for measuring status is the level of the leader who gives instructions. If I take you with me... well, baby, if you can publish more articles, I will get you a consulting award from Magic City next year, okay?"
"What a shit."
Lu Yao rejected it without hesitation:
"What level am I? Winning the consulting award from Demon City? I'm a technical worker, not a consultant."
"It's just a third prize, it's nothing."
"No, don't do that!"
"Hey, my last name is Hu, so when I do things, isn't that just Hu's way of doing things?"
"..."
Lu Yao was simply speechless and said unhappily:
"Okay, go do the gym, I'm going to go make some music."
"Oh yeah, how's the band?"
"It seems like we have some ideas. Everyone wants to create original music. We found a melody at noon and have come up with the lyrics. As for the details... will you come to see my performance on New Year's Day?"
"Of course I will. How could I miss my baby's growing years?"
"..."
"Hehehehe~"
Feeling her boyfriend's speechlessness, Hu Li smiled happily.
Lu Yao thought to himself, you wait until I get home.
but……
"Since you want to watch it... then just be patient. On the day of the performance... I'll give you a surprise!"
"Oh? So confident?"
"Ah."
"Hehe, then I will wait with great anticipation!"
She said seriously.
(End of this chapter)
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