She is my childhood sweetheart, how could I not understand her?

Chapter 144 Criticism is Motivation

Chen Shen had a premonition that he would be defeated, but he didn't expect that the defeat would come so soon.

Xu Suiyou and Liu Yujie both gave very good reviews, with more positives than negatives overall. This was not only because the game itself was indeed playable, but also because they both knew how much effort Chen Shen had put into this game.

But if we expand this scope to the entire grade 6, although most students gave a "awesome" comment after learning that this was a game he made, after trying it out, most people's answers were just two words.

boring.

The beginning is indeed very interesting. There is no game of this type on the market at present, and the novelty will motivate people to continue playing.

It was really satisfying to watch the equipment gradually take shape, and the sense of accomplishment brought by successfully finding the hidden super weapon, but afterwards it was just like Liu Yujie's evaluation.

There is too little follow-up content, a lack of depth, and few types of weapons as selling points.

Not to mention the currently insufficient art materials, the lack of background music, and a host of minor and major problems.

At first, Chen Shen listened very enthusiastically. After all, these criticisms would become the motivation for his future efforts.

But after hearing so much criticism, he felt uncomfortable.

After thanking a senior on the sixth floor, Chen Shen closed the notebook filled with feedback, returned to the dormitory feeling a little disappointed, and climbed onto his bed.

Liu Yujie had returned a long time ago. Seeing Chen Shen's state, he could guess what was going on. However, he did not comfort Chen Shen. Instead, he smiled and joked: "Are you shocked?"

After all, they have lived in the same dormitory for a month. Liu Yujie knows Chen Shen's character. He is not the kind of person who would be crushed by a few words of criticism.

"Somewhat."

"You didn't have any psychological expectations?"

"I did, but I didn't expect everyone to find it so boring."

"The main reason for boredom is the lack of surprises. Think about whether you can add some surprises."

Chen Shen sat up and crossed his legs: "These are all in the plan, but they haven't been done yet."

"That's fine. If someone finds it boring, just add more content. Besides, this is just a basic demo with a low completion rate. Just take your time."

Liu Yujie stood up, walked to Chen Shen's window, raised his hand and gently hit Chen Shen on the shoulder.

"If you need money, tell me."

Chen Shen smiled and cheered up a lot.

I have to say that players’ real evaluations are still very useful.

At this moment, he has come out of that anxious mood.

During this period, after realizing that Xu Suiyou was so attached to him and even wanted to marry him early, he gradually began to get anxious.

He was eager to achieve some results early to prove himself and also to prove that Xu Suiyou was not wrong about him.

But at this moment, he suddenly realized that this was different from his original intention of making the game.

He decided to devote himself to this career because of his passion, not because he wanted to prove himself.

"Indeed, I was a little too anxious."

"Well, that's the right way to think about it. And if you can really come up with a really fun game in two months, we will be too ashamed to live."

Liu Yujie muttered to himself, sat in Chen Shen's seat, and looked up at Chen Shen.

"Are you staying in the dormitory today?"

"No, I'm going to go to Sui Sui's place soon. I got a lot of suggestions and I want to go back and study them."

Liu Yujie had a face full of jealousy. He and Liu Jingxuan were still stuck in the ambiguous stage. It wasn't that he didn't make a move, but he felt that this woman was a little strange.

How to put it? To use a popular term nowadays, he felt like a fish in the other party's pond.

You accepted all the gifts from your mom, held my hand, and even hugged me, but now you tell him you don’t want to have a relationship yet?

His little umbrella has been in the drawer for half a month!
Chen Shen also noticed Liu Yujie's strangeness, and his curiosity began to rise. After confirming that they were the only two in the dormitory, he lowered his voice and asked, "You and Liu Jingxuan haven't gotten together yet?"

He still had some impression of this girl. After all, she was a freshman in the Computer Science Department.

She has a cute face and her outfits are all sweet girl style. In just over a month since the start of school, she has become a celebrity in their college.

On the first day of school, this person added him on QQ through the class group, but after He Yi revealed that he had a girlfriend, the number of times the other person contacted him obviously decreased by half.

He is difficult to judge.

Liu Yujie hesitated for a moment, and confirmed that they were the only two in the dormitory, then he sighed: "Damn, I feel like I'm being kept as a fish."

"Raising fish. Ah~ Keeping you hanging?"

"Yes, every time I ask her out for dinner or a movie, she agrees readily and buys me gifts, but she just won't date me."

Chen Shen was shocked. He had only dated Sui Sui in his life, and his Sui Sui was not that kind of person at all.

“Are there still such people?”

".How did you and your Xu Suiyou establish your relationship?"

"Well, on the day of our graduation party, I asked her if she wanted to date me, and she agreed."

Hearing this, Liu Yujie felt really jealous.

"Are childhood sweethearts really that beautiful?"

"You didn't?"

"Fuck you!"

Chen Shen grinned, jumped off the bed, pulled He Yi's chair over and sat down.

"If you feel like you've been fooled, just give up the idea. You won't have trouble finding a partner with your conditions. There are so many girls in the normal school next door."

“But I can’t swallow this.”

"What, you still want revenge?" Chen Shen said casually.

But seeing Liu Yujie's eyes getting brighter and brighter, he secretly said that something was wrong.

"Dude, that's not necessary."

"Old Chen!" Liu Yujie interrupted Chen Shen's speech, grabbed Chen Shen's hand, and pleaded on his face, "You have to help me."

"Me?" Chen Shen pointed at himself, bewildered, "How can I help you?" "Didn't she have feelings for you when school started?"

Chen Shen frowned and quickly pulled out his hand that was grabbed by Liu Yujie: "What are you talking about? I have a partner."

"Oh, that's right, just ignore what I said."

Looking at Liu Yujie's depressed expression, Chen Shen scratched his face and couldn't help asking: "How much did you spend on her?"

"More than 3000."

This amount of money made Chen Shen respectful, and he also understood why Liu Yujie had such a strong resentment.

"But it's not that easy for you to get your money back for something like this that you both agreed to."

Liu Yujie waved his hand: "It doesn't matter whether it's money or not. I'm mainly disgusted by her behavior, and I suspect I'm not the only fish in her pond."

How can it not matter? That's 3000!
"So you plan to expose her? Do you have evidence?"

"If there is no evidence, find a way to create it. I will stake out her dormitory building tomorrow, and I have the camera ready." Liu Yujie walked to his bed and took out a camera.

Chen Shen was silent, and couldn't help asking, "How much is your camera?"

"twelve thousand."

"Brilliant."

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Chen Shen didn't have the time to accompany Liu Yujie to the girls' dormitory building to wait, so he took a piece of clothing and took the bus back to Xu Suiyou.

However, before entering the residential area, Chen Shen first picked up a courier, and then quickly walked into the apartment building.

It was the best time of the day at noon, and this was also usually the time when Xu Suiyou took a nap, and today was no exception.

Without hastily waking up Xu Suiyou who was taking a nap, Chen Shen put his things on the table first, and then returned to his room. Then, while looking at the feedback he had received from his classmates and seniors today, he was thinking about the direction of future game optimization.

There are many things that need to be changed and added. Let’s start with the game cover and UI design. This is the place that received the most complaints today.

First impressions matter.

Because the overall style of the characters is more Western fantasy, the overall art and UI must also be unified.

Of course, it’s not that he wanted to use this style, but the website where he found the materials was a foreign website, and most of them were in this style.

I was looking for suitable material on the material website when I suddenly heard excited cheers outside the door.

Chen Shen paused in sliding the mouse, and the corners of his lips rose slightly.

Maybe Xu Suiyou saw something on the table in the living room.

After a few seconds, the door of the room was pushed open. Xu Suiyou, who should have looked tired, had just woken up a few minutes ago, but she raised an excited smile and threw herself on his back.

"Where did the chestnuts come from!"

"My mother sent it."

He specifically told his mother two days ago to send him some chestnuts when she had time, and the address was Xu Suiyou's.

Of course, it’s definitely not hot anymore, but Xiaobao chestnuts are delicious whether eaten cold or hot.

When eaten hot, it is sticky, sweet and fragrant.

When eaten cold, the chestnuts are chewy and bouncy, giving a similar feeling to eating yokan, and are also extremely delicious.

He likes to eat cold chestnuts, while Xu Suiyou likes both.

The happy Xu Suiyou did not hesitate to give her boyfriend a kiss. She held her boyfriend's face and rubbed his lips actively, then turned around happily and went out to get the chestnuts.

In a few seconds, a peeled chestnut was picked up by the white and tender little hands and fed to the mouth.

Chen Shen naturally wouldn't be polite. He opened his mouth and took a bite. The sweet taste spread in his mouth.

Xu Suiyou peeled another one and put it in her mouth, and couldn't help but narrow her beautiful eyes with joy.

"Hmm~ This is the taste. I haven't eaten it for a long time~"

This thing is actually sold in Beijing, but it is not available near Peking University and Tsinghua University. Xu Suiyou was too lazy to take the subway and travel a long way just to buy a bag of chestnuts.

"Then when we get married in the future, we have to choose a place to buy a house close to Xiaobao Lizi?" Chen Shen especially liked the happy look on Xu Suiyou's face with her beautiful eyes narrowed and the corners of her mouth raised, and couldn't help but teasing her.

Xu Suiyou nodded repeatedly, and then peeled another one for Chen Shen because she liked to hear this.

Chen Shen also took a bite and chewed it slowly, his eyes still fixed on the computer screen with a serious look on his face.

Taking advantage of this gap, Xu Suiyou glanced at the notebook Chen Shen placed on the table, and gradually stopped what he was doing.

She subconsciously reached out and picked up the notebook, looking at it carefully.

It is filled with Chen Shen’s thoughts on how to improve the game.

This notebook was what Chen Shen asked her for before he left home today. When she gave it to him, the notebook was blank and there was nothing in it.

In other words, this was everyone's evaluation after Chen Shen returned to the dormitory today and showed the game to his friends for trial play.

So many pages
Taking another look at Chen Shen, who was frowning and muttering something under his breath from time to time, Xu Suiyou pursed her lips, feeling a pang of pain in her heart.

Quietly leaving Chen Shen's room, Xu Suiyou quickly walked to the sofa with chestnuts and sat down. While peeling the chestnuts, he recalled some details of his previous life that had long been blurred in his memory.

Chen Shen has always been a game enthusiast, including in his previous life.

And because Chen Shen often chatted with her, she should still remember something.

For example, why a certain game is popular and what is fun about a certain game.

She didn't know if she could help Chen Shen at this time, but she had to try.

Details
Why did she suddenly forget the details of their conversation at that time?
She had seen the chat records between them so many times.
The hand that was peeling chestnuts suddenly stopped. Xu Suiyou stared blankly at the peeled chestnuts in his hand. The tempting golden chestnuts in his vision gradually became blurred.

She seemed to remember the details of the conversation at that time.

A bitter smile slowly emerged, she raised the back of her hand to rub the corners of her eyes, took a deep breath, exhaled, and sniffed.

Because she was not interested in games, and at that time she was full of negative energy every day because of work. So she always replied perfunctorily.

so.
Naturally there won't be any details.

(End of this chapter)