Rebirth 08: Equipment God

Chapter 67 Writing is like this

At the intersection two blocks outside the gate of Woolen Textile Middle School, a Mercedes-Benz S50 was parked under the overpass, and passing students occasionally looked over.

In fact, in this small county, few people really understand or care about cars, but the pressure from money is still noticeable.

Passing cyclists avoid the eight-foot-wide road and almost walk on the motor vehicle lane. If it gets scratched, a year's work will be in vain.

In the car, Qian Yarong looked back helplessly and glanced at her sleeping daughter.

Lu Siwen, who should have been full of energy early in the morning, curled up on the car door like a kitten, with fatigue on his face.

It didn't feel like a night of sleep, but more like a night of playing.

He must have stayed up late reading miscellaneous books again. Qian Yarong knew Lu Siwen's hobbies very well.

But even so, when she went out, Lu Siwen still asked to stop under this overpass. She wanted to wait for "classmate Zhai" to go to school together, but when the car arrived, the people fell asleep.

When Qian Yarong was thinking about how to deal with the situation, she saw the boy that Lu Siwen was waiting for, flying poker cards towards the overpass.

With a flick of his finger, the playing card spun and flew diagonally upwards, then flew back into his hand.

I have to say it does have a great visual effect.

Cheating girls is definitely a sure win, Qian Yarong couldn't help but think.
What kind of high school girl can stand up to such a test in a micro-novel competition?
"Siwen? Siwen?"

Lu Siwen did not respond. Seeing that the boy was about to walk away, Qian Yarong could only lower the car window and shout to herself, "Student Zhai? Wait a minute."

Zhai Da turned around, put the Joker Poker back into his pocket, and walked down the rooftop again.

"Hello Auntie."

"Siwen is waiting for you, but seems to be asleep."

Zhai Da glanced back, waiting for the next words.
I thought, so what? Even if you scream, I can't go in and sleep with you.
Qian Yarong looked at Zhai Da, and her heart moved. She smiled and said, "She might be tired from studying for TOEFL last night. The child only has a few months left before going abroad, so she might be a little anxious."

It seemed like he was explaining, but in fact he was revealing some information while Lu Siwen was asleep.

It’s self-evident why.

Zhai Da suddenly realized, but was not surprised.

Going abroad is very suitable for the other party's family situation. Nowadays, anyone with a little financial strength will basically plan to go this way.

Zhai Da had no subjective opinion on this. As for whether a girl like a blank sheet of paper could withstand the repeated ideological shocks from outside, to put it bluntly, it was not his turn to express an opinion.

At least there is no reason to express your opinion in front of someone's mother.

"What about Zhai? Have you decided on your college entrance examination application?"

Zhai Da shook his head: "Fill in the application form when you know the scores, and there will be no time to check after the results come out."

Lu Siwen in the back seat rubbed his eyes when he heard the noise, and Qian Yarong ended the topic at the right time.

Lu Siwen came to his senses a second after seeing Zhai Da. He looked at the Longines Crescent Watch in his hand, quickly got out of the car, pulled Zhai Da's sleeve and walked towards the school, leaving only a sentence "Goodbye, Mom" for Qian Yarong.

Looking at the two people's brisk backs, Qian Yarong smiled.

She is not a bad mother, but she may be a realistic mother. She must be different from others. She is happy to gain some friendship for a short time, and she can accept even some love for a short time.

As long as it doesn't affect her plans for Lu Siwen's life.

Perfect planning.

On the overpass, Lu Siwen was still immersed in the excitement of last night. To be more precise, he said, "Student Zhai, I have finished reading The Long Journey. It is so well written!"

"How can you write so well and in such detail? You know so much about hospitals and patients. You must have looked up a lot of information, right?"

Zhai Da nodded absentmindedly: "I guess so." The movie only provided a context, and he couldn't remember the details so clearly. Most of them were accumulated from the six months that Yu Xiaoli spent wandering around the hospital after she was diagnosed with cancer in her previous life.

Not a good memory though.

To this day, he can still clearly recall the never-ending "beeping" sound in the ICU ward, and can understand every number and wave on the "monitor."

Although looking back at the timeline, there is definitely nothing wrong with Yu Xiaoli now, he still decided to find a way to take his mother to a first-tier city for a comprehensive check-up after the college entrance examination, and to ensure at least twice a year in the future.

Lu Siwen didn't know what Zhai Da was thinking, and said excitedly: "In the end, Lin Manman and Lu Tu succeeded in fighting the disease, right?"

Zhai Da didn't say anything, just glanced at Lu Siwen.

Lu Siwen covered his mouth in surprise and said, "Failed? They tried so hard!"

Zhai Da thought to himself, I am the author. Success or failure is not determined by a single line of my words.

If I were crazy, I would just say that both of them were sent to another world by a dump truck.

For example, in previous online novels, there were also stories where the male protagonist looked in the mirror and found himself so handsome that he died.
The story of "Long Lu Road" is actually not complicated. It comes from real events in the previous life and was later adapted into a movie.

Of course, if we calculate the timeline, that real event has not happened yet.

Lin Manman, a young patient with uremia, suffered from long-term low-quality life, daily deteriorating health, and the hopelessness of waiting for a kidney transplant. One day, she was under pressure and had an emotional breakdown. She recorded a "marriage proposal" video and sent it to the terminal cancer group.

If the match is successful, she is willing to marry the terminally ill cancer patient and accompany him in fighting the disease. If the other party dies, she will receive a kidney transplant as his wife and take care of his parents in their old age.

Although he quickly withdrew the video because of his immorality, it was still seen by one person, the other person in the story's name, Lu Tu.

The subsequent story revolves around the two people's fight against the disease and the sparks of love that emerge.

At the same time, it also explores disease, human nature, society and family affection.

However, since Zhai Da copied a movie, it would definitely not be possible for it to be exactly the same. Movies and literature have different ways of expression, and he could not remember such details, so this story is at most 60% similar to the movie.

The name of the heroine was changed, and some other content that conflicted with the sense of the times was also revised. For example, WeChat did not exist at the time, so the heroine's video was posted in the QQ group. In addition, a clause "never marrying" was added to the promise.

Another very important part is that about half of the movie's time is spent using "comedy" as the background to advance the plot, such as various misunderstandings, nonsense, the hero's weird accent and even weirder personality. These things are not convenient to copy into the novel, and even words cannot describe things like "weird accent".

Zhai Da downplayed the comedy part and instead focused on the tragic portrayal. The male protagonist no longer has the attribute of a sand sculpture, even though he had a piece of brain tissue removed because of a brain tumor.
Therefore, the final outcome of the whole story will become very "sad".

The ending he arranged was that he would live alone, lonely and strong.

After all, it's not an online novel, and a tragic ending is better than a happy ending.

I guess a girl of Lu Siwen's age would cry her heart out in the end.
By the way, for novels of this theme, women of Lu Siwen’s age are the main audience.

Due to the effect of [Literary Girl's Pen], these contents are judged as "original" by the system, and emotions are injected into the writing process, so the quality is exceptionally high.

This has greatly improved the level of a "copywriter" who had never written a long story, and he even found some of the content touching.

What I write is really fucking awesome.

He felt that his writing style was not inferior to those famous authors, after all, he had a cheat code.

But Lu Siwen realized that Zhai Da was going to end up in tragedy, and she felt terrible. She had seen through it all. Lin Manman and Lu Tu seemed to be real. They pulled Zhai Da's sleeves and begged:
"Let them fight the disease successfully~ Please!"

I have to say, this aggrieved look is very pleasing to the eye, but
"No, the more tender the story is, the more beautiful and desirable the happy ending will seem. If the story is suddenly stabbed in the end, the reader will feel that the story has depth, right? That's how writing works!"

Lu Siwen was stunned.
She really wanted to measure whether Zhai Da's mouth was 38°.

How can you say such cold words?
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