Back to the 80s Machinery Factory

Chapter 149: Chen Gao is still the most prestigious
At night, Chen Luyang sat in the office with a lamp on.

Although Cao Qinghang said that it would be fine as long as the materials were simply modified to make it look better.

But after all, this is the material for participating in the selection of national advanced collectives.

Chen Luyang did not dare to be careless and used all his skills to carve patterns on the "Work Experience Summary" board.

Fortunately, he had done compilation work before and had written many summaries.

With the ready-made basic materials in hand, Chen Luyang started writing in the evening.

After writing several thousand words, I finally completed an article titled "Creating a New Situation and Taking on Heavy Responsibilities - Materials on Advanced Experiences and Deeds of the Integration Workshop of the Provincial Machinery Factory."

The next morning, Chen Luyang showed the materials to Cao Qinghang with dark circles under his eyes.

Cao Qinghang glanced at the title and turned the pages.

"Okay! Hand it in."

Chen Luyang: ...? !

"Engineer Cao, this is material for applying for a National Advanced Collective...why don't you take another look at it?"

Cao Qinghang: "I've read it! It's well written. Turn it in!"

Saying,

Cao Qinghang picked up a pencil and studied the drawing on the engine with a frown.

Although the car sells well, there are still many problems and details that need to be improved.

At present, in addition to the fuel consumption problem,
One of the most urgent issues that needs to be addressed is the shock absorption and safety of cars.

Chen Luyang drives frequently and has pointed out more than once that the shock absorption of cars is too poor. Sitting in the car, any slight bump is as uncomfortable as sitting on a hard bench.

People buy cars for convenience, not for suffering.

Moreover, good shock absorption can eliminate the characteristics of mechanical vibration as much as possible, and can also achieve noise reduction and reduce the damage caused by impact.

Seeing Chen Luyang still standing beside him,
Cao Qinghang asked in confusion, "Why are you still standing there? Go hand in your materials!"

Chen Luyang saw that Cao Qinghang had no intention of reading the materials.
He turned around and went to the factory office building and knocked on Hao Fengchun's office door.

Although Cao Qinghang did not attach importance to this material,
But after all, these were materials for applying to become a national advanced and outstanding collective, so he certainly couldn't just write them up and submit them casually.

At least the supervisor has to check it.

But Hao Fengchun carefully read it, not only looking at the headlines, but also focusing on reviewing several data in the materials.

No other comments!!
Not only did he have no objection, but he also praised Chen Luyang highly.

Praise him for writing the materials very well, ask him to work on the materials well, and let him write all the totals and plans for the workshop from now on!!!

Chen Luyang's eyelids twitched as he kept praising her.

Seeing that the first two levels have been passed,

Chen Luyang took the materials to find Yu Anshan.

As soon as I went upstairs,

Chen Luyang saw that the doors of the factory leaders' offices were all closed, and only the door of the factory director's secretary was open. He walked over and knocked on the door:
"Brother Ma, are all the leaders away?"

in the office,

The factory director's secretary Ma Jun is talking to Director Niu in the office.

Seeing Chen Luyang knocking on the door, Ma Jun stood up and said:
"Several factory managers are in a meeting. Comrade Chen, do you have anything to say?"

Chen Luyang said truthfully, "The workshop has an application for a National Advanced Collective and needs the leadership's review."

After hearing this, Director Niu looked over.

"Has our application for National Advanced Collective status been approved? Bring me the materials so I can see them."

Chen Luyang hesitated slightly.

Although this application represents the honor of the factory, but the office director thinks this is appropriate.

Seeing his confusion, Ma Jun explained with a smile: "The application materials will eventually be submitted to the provincial government through the office. It's okay to show it to Director Niu."

With Ma Jun's words, Chen Luyang felt relieved and handed the materials to the director.

Director Niu took the materials and began to read them.

Unlike Cao Qinghang's perfunctory observation and Hao Fengchun's superficial observation, Niu Yong looked at it very carefully.

The details are like your class teacher marking your homework.
Although Director Niu didn't say a word,
But the atmosphere around you is obviously depressing, as if you can find fault with your article at any moment.

Even though Chen Luyang was very confident in the materials he wrote, he was still a little nervous because of the atmosphere.

"You wrote this?"

"I wrote it."

Chen Luyang said earnestly, "Director Niu, if you find anything I haven't written fully, please give me some guidance!"

Director Niu smiled and said, "It's not really guidance, but it's well written!"

"It's these headlines of yours that are too focused on being neat and accurate, and instead 'harming the meaning with the words', weakening the theme and content."

As he spoke, Director Niu picked up the pen on the table and drew a horizontal line under a paragraph in the material.

"Look at this sentence,"

"'Focus on strengthening our own capabilities and fulfilling our mission of producing heavy machinery and hard-working vehicles' should be replaced by 'Work hard, practically and skillfully, and build the courage to build a new automobile production line.'"

"And this one,"

"'Working together to set a benchmark, striving for innovation and taking the lead' could be changed to 'working together to advance, driving force together to lay the foundation for a strong automobile company.'"

Director Niu spoke in great detail, and as he spoke, he wrote his words under the headline.

When he encountered some paragraphs with inappropriate wording, Niu Yong would specially write more appropriate words next to them.

A good material was suddenly filled with various modification symbols and supplementary sentences.

Although the overall changes are minor,
But with the addition of these details, the entire material looks much more advanced than what Chen Luyang had written before!

He really deserves to be the factory's office director!
This is so skillful!
Chen Luyang stared at Director Niu with emotion, his tone sincere and grateful:

"Director Niu, you're amazing! After you make these changes, I feel like our factory's fusion workshop will soon be recognized as a nationally recognized advanced collective!"

Director Niu smiled and said, "Writing materials is nothing special, as it all depends on a pen."

"Without your achievements and success, even if this document is written beautifully, it will not be recognized as an advanced collective."

Director Niu returned the revised materials to Chen Luyang and said:

"The factory meeting has been going on for over an hour and it's probably almost over."

"Take it back now and rewrite it. You'll just happen to catch them coming out of the meeting."

Chen Luyang quickly agreed and thanked him sincerely. After saying goodbye to Ma Jun, he turned around and ran back to revise the manuscript.

Watching Chen Luyang leave,

Ma Jun laughed and said, "Chen Gao is so influential that he actually got Director Niu to personally revise the manuscript."

"I heard that Deputy Director Liu's nephew asked you to help review a manuscript, but you refused."

Director Niu smiled faintly.

"Deputy Director Liu's nephew is so talented, how could I possibly show off my skills in front of him?"

Ma Jun glanced at Niu Yong.

Deputy Director Liu's nephew was appointed by Wang Qingzhou to join the factory this year.

He was originally supposed to be assigned to the office.
But it happened that the Propaganda Department was short of staff this year, so he was assigned to the Propaganda Department to do the work of writing materials.

(End of this chapter)