The Great Thief of the Universe, Starting from Douluo
Chapter 31 Single Chapter
Chapter 31 Single Chapter
(The work was blocked and reposted. They said the content was vulgar. Haha, I don’t know who reported it...)
Some readers said that I was so black and strong that every one of my cards was black, as black as a centipede.
I reviewed the previous text and found that the so-called Black Jade Anus, apart from refuting his theory, only recounted what he had done? And only Chapter 29 is the main description of Dashi.
Does this make you a little black guy?
As for the negative comments about Tang San, I'm sorry that Tang San hasn't officially appeared yet after 100,000 words. This reader's comments are a bit premature...
Perhaps the Black Tang San that this reader understands is probably because the protagonist honestly exchanged the antidote for the magic grass, which completely solved the martial spirit problem of Dugu Bo and his grandson.
Look, looking at it this way, I've not only smeared Tang San, but perhaps also irritated some people's sensitive nerves? What a heinous crime, unforgivable, hahahaha...
To be honest, I haven't deliberately tried to discredit these two people since I started writing the book. It's just that their personalities are really untenable!
I know someone wants to write about the protagonist's devotion and the great talent of the author, but unfortunately he doesn't have the writing skills or the brains.
He sets up a love-struck character, but turns into an unreasonable mad dog when Xiao Wu gets hurt.
He established a smart character but ended up breaking all the rules. He came up with a set of theories that were all common sense for soul masters, and their sources were questionable.
Leading Tang San to hunt souls, he looked down on everyone before entering the Soul Hunting Forest, but after entering the Hundred Years Lone Bamboo Forest, he was able to make do. A 29th-level Great Soul Master was almost killed by a 400-year-old worm...
Let me put it this way, when the author writes, there will be a certain tendency to bring the author into the story. Many times when you read a book, you can see the author's general character and world outlook by looking at the protagonist's behavior, especially in books like Douluo Dalu, which are obviously full of immersion.
Someone started out by writing erotic stories, and then he kept posting cheesy love words to show his deep affection. He would take out the soul ring of an old friend to refine it for the smallest of things, and he turned around and overturned the table after finishing his meal. Damn, he himself is not a good person, so how can he write about a good person?
Ning Rongrong, Zhu Zhuqing, Liu Erlong, and Xiao Wu are even more useless, no PUA is needed, they are purely accessory characters.
Someone might have just met a good woman, and they're used to PUA at home. During the previous contract dispute, they tried to use their crooked logic to fool others, but their knowledge couldn't support their cunning schemes, and their true colors were exposed, leaving them completely humiliated. Think about the person's rhetoric during the contract dispute—isn't it the same as the rhetoric used by Ning Rongrong, the Flanders PUA?
Everyone in the academy is a genius, so why are you special?
I got out through the dog hole in the first place, why can't you get in through the dog hole?
It's a pity that not only is his writing terrible, but he also has very little knowledge. He probably has never heard of the saying: Just because it has always been like this, does that mean it's right?
Give me back Black Three Black Gang...
Do I still use black?
This character is rotten to the core, what can I say against him?
The early plot of this book is actually quite stable. The protagonist is either upgrading or on the way to upgrading. There are not too many settings, awkward pretense and face-slapping, and the rhythm is quite harmonious.
The results were good at the beginning, but unfortunately I had severe lumbar pain in the past two days, the number of updated words was not enough, and the traffic dropped sharply.
I wanted to write something more serious, about a serious young hero, but now I have no hope of follow-up recommendations. With more than 3,000 collections and no follow-up recommendations, I can't even make a living.
After reading this comment again today, I am too lazy to come up with any plot anymore. I'd better just try to update it and write something that everyone likes.
(End of this chapter)
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