Huayu 2007, Cultivation Superstar

Chapter 209 Such talent, even the coffin lid can’t hold it down
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"Lu Feng, it's time to eat."

Just after Lu Feng finished writing, no, copying the first chapter, Li Xiaoqin came up excitedly and called him downstairs to eat.

"Come here."

Lu Feng went downstairs to eat. During the break, he quickly opened the system and glanced at the original novel.

Not right.

He had not read the original novel before, but he had watched the TV series "Sito".

Compared to the TV series, the beginning of the novel is a bit dragged out.

I dragged my feet and wrote only after the 6th chapter, when the heroine Si Teng appeared.

The heroine in the early stage was a mistress named Anman, who was a concubine kept by Brother Zhao. It was because of Anman that the hero Qin Fang died.

The screenwriter of the TV series obviously realized that doing so would disrupt the rhythm, so he put this part of the plot at the end.

As a result, the plot is much more compact than the original.

Moreover, in the novel, Si Teng only has an arrogant attitude at the beginning, and is not as cute in contrast as in the TV series.

No.

My aesthetic taste does not allow the novel to be published in this way.

There is no other way, I have to start over again!
What a huge workload!
First, delete Chapter 1 and put it in the later memories. Let Qin Fang die at the beginning and let Si Teng be resurrected to stick to the theme.

The heroine only appears in Chapter 6. How can this be ridiculous?

Perhaps, novels written in 2008 are more suited to this slow pace.

But as Lu Feng who traveled from the future, he himself couldn't stand this slow pace, so how could he let his readers suffer like him?

change!
Thinking of this, Lu Feng hurriedly ate a few mouthfuls of rice and turned to go upstairs.

"Xiao Qin, I might have to stay up all night tonight. This novel is really killing me! If you're sleepy, go to bed first."

"Shall I prepare a midnight snack for you? What would you like? How about some wontons?"

Lu Feng made an OK gesture and went upstairs without looking back.

Li Xiaoqin was not angry at all, instead she smiled sweetly.

Because Lu Feng told her that this novel was written for her.

Now, Lu Feng is so concerned about this novel. Isn’t it equivalent to indirectly caring about her?
What is she so angry about?
Instead, I feel so happy and so blessed!
"There's no other way. You decide whether you want to accompany me..."

While cleaning in the kitchen, Li Xiaoqin hummed the song "Preference".

No need to ask, this song was definitely written for her, and it has become the theme song of [Qinqin Crab Roe Pastry].

In order to promote [Qinqin Crab Roe Pastry], Lu Feng really put a lot of thought into it.

Li Xiaoqin was very happy.

The only thing that made her unhappy was... the heroine in the MV, a woman named Yang Mi, who was so annoying. She looked too much like a vixen, and her eyes could emit electric currents. When she cried at Lu Feng, she looked a little unclean.

no doubt.

Another potential rival!
Kill kill kill!

"Lu Feng, I'm starving. Is there anything delicious?"

Li Xiaoqin had just cleaned up the dishes when Reba rushed in from outside like a gust of wind.

When she saw Li Xiaoqin cleaning up in the kitchen like a good wife and mother, Reba was stunned and stood there.

Oops.

I almost forgot that Li Xiaoqin is the big boss of this area.

Thinking of this, Reba immediately put on a sweet smile and said flatteringly: "Sister Xiaoqin, where is my brother?"

"He's working on something in the study upstairs. Don't disturb him."

Although Li Xiaoqin was a little unhappy when she saw Reba running in skillfully, this emotion only flashed by and was quickly hidden.

No matter what, Reba is Lu Feng's godsister.

At this stage, she is just Lu Feng's girlfriend.

Before she married Lu Feng, Reba's relationship with Lu Feng was definitely much closer than hers.

So, if she can live in this house, Reba can definitely live in it too.

It is absolutely impossible to drive Reba away.

For now, she could only keep Reba close to her and let Reba help her drive away wild women like Liu Shishi.

"Reba, we just finished eating. Lu Feng is such a jerk! He didn't even tell me you were coming back for dinner..."

Li Xiaoqin deliberately complained to Lu Feng a few words.

The subtext is to imply to Reba that Lu Feng doesn't take you seriously.

If he takes you seriously, how could he not ask you if you want to come back for dinner?
"Sister Xiaoqin, this isn't my brother's fault. I didn't explain it to him clearly. He probably thought I'd treat my roommates to a meal on my first day."

Li Xiaoqin's little trick made Reba sneer in her heart just by hearing her first words. You are too low-level to try such clever tricks on me, right?

Reba cracked Li Xiaoqin's routine in no time.

"Then shall I go out and get you some dishes?"

Unable to get Reba’s attention, Li Xiaoqin smiled awkwardly and decided to launch a gentle offensive, behaving like a qualified sister-in-law.

"No need. I'll make a call and ask Hot Air Restaurant to deliver the food to me."

Reba knew long ago that she would have no food to eat if she lived under someone else's roof. Fortunately, she was smart and opened a restaurant early on, so she could have whatever she wanted to eat.

Li Xiaoqin, you big idiot, still wants to fight with me?

Can you beat me?

If Lu Feng hadn't protected you, you would have died 800 times!

"Then please do as you please. I'll go do the laundry. Lu Feng bought me a lot of new clothes today, and they all need to be rinsed and aired."

Feeling that she couldn't handle Reba, Li Xiaoqin could only quietly withdraw from the battlefield.

If you continue to fight, you might end up getting hurt.

But before leaving, Li Xiaoqin couldn't help showing off.

"Sister Xiaoqin, let me help you wash."

Seeing that Li Xiaoqin had no other options and wanted to escape, Reba suddenly started laughing.

Since you backed down, I'll let you go. After all, we all live under the same roof, and there will be plenty of opportunities to fight in the future.

You can fight, but you can't lose face.

This is called fighting without breaking.

If they lose face, Lu Feng will be in trouble.

I am so smart and clever, how could I make things difficult for Lu Feng?
Lu Feng, this damn guy, once he feels irritated, he will go on a trip on a whim. Maybe he will go to some place and meet some girl.

What if you end up having affairs with six people at once? Wouldn’t you be the one who suffers?
"Reba, you're going to register at East China Normal University today. Do you know any particularly handsome male classmates?"

Li Xiaoqin took Reba upstairs, unpacked the new clothes, cut off the labels, and put them into the laundry basket one by one, ready to wash them by hand later.

These clothes are quite expensive, and Li Xiaoqin is afraid that they will be damaged if washed in a washing machine.

"There are handsome guys, but they don't even have the courage to talk to me."

Reba helped Li Xiaoqin to take the unpacked new clothes to the laundry room downstairs. She accidentally glanced at one of the Pikachu pajamas, which was exactly the same as the one she bought for Lu Feng.

She was immediately happy.

Lu Feng, this damn guy, is really smart. How could he crack this?

Reba looked around and found that among the people around her, only Lu Feng was worthy of being her rival.

The IQ of other people is far behind.

"Why don't handsome classmates dare to talk to you?"

Li Xiaoqin was a little puzzled.

If Reba finds a handsome classmate, she will have no time to look for Lu Feng, which is equivalent to directly eliminating a small rival in love.

"My brother drove me to school in his Mercedes-Benz S400, added 5000 yuan to my meal card, and even took me out for a stroll and made my bed."

"Right now, the whole school is talking about this beautiful mixed-race girl who's joining the business school. She has a super handsome boyfriend who's super rich, super gentle and thoughtful... Under these circumstances, which boy would dare to talk to me?"

"Aren't you afraid of feeling inferior?"

Although the title of mixed-race beauty makes Reba speechless, she is pure, not mixed-race.

But she expressed her happiness at the rumors spread among classmates privately.

Yes, the truth is what you think it is.

"Why don't you clarify? Tell those male classmates that Lu Feng is your brother."

Li Xiaoqin asked with a smile, but her tone was a little harsh.

Reba, that damned girl, is actually acting like a bully outside? Lu Feng is your boyfriend, then who is my boyfriend?

"What's there to clarify? Those male classmates are so young, and instead of focusing on their studies, they're all over the place, obsessed with chasing after pretty girls. I don't have much to communicate with them."

Reba snorted lightly and said in a pretentious manner.

Compared with Lu Feng, those handsome guys are nothing but useless fools, and she totally looks down on them.

Li Xiaoqin felt a little overwhelmed because she couldn't argue with Reba and her relationship with Lu Feng was not as close as Reba's.

Originally, she planned to sleep with Lu Feng tonight.

However, based on her understanding of Reba, Reba would most likely say that she was afraid to sleep alone at night and wanted to be with her. Could she really refuse?
really.

In the next second, Reba hugged Li Xiaoqin's arm and said pitifully: "Sister Xiaoqin, I slept alone last night and kept hearing strange noises. I was a little scared."

"I understand. I'll sleep with you tonight."

Li Xiaoqin knew that Reba would have this trick.

Although she felt helpless, she had no choice but to agree.

Unexpectedly, Reba smiled slyly and whispered, "No. What I mean is, I want to sleep with my brother at night. Can you sleep alone?"

what?
It is simply contrary to Tiangang!

If I could agree to this request, I would simply stop calling myself Li Xiaoqin and change my name to Lu Xiaoqin.

"Hey, just a joke."

Seeing Li Xiaoqin was furious, his head was about to smoke.

Reba came forward and hugged Li Xiaoqin and coaxed her, "Sister Xiaoqin, I love you the most. I want to sleep with you. We can watch TV series together at night, leaving my brother alone and unable to sleep."

That's more or less.

Li Xiaoqin breathed a sigh of relief and felt a little happy. Reba was quite sensible. She knew that she couldn't sleep alone at night and was willing to watch TV series with her.

wrong.

What's there to be happy about?
Originally, I could sleep with Lu Feng and watch TV series together!
……

The two little girls downstairs are fighting openly and secretly.

Although they act like sisters on the surface, their secret life is filled with swords and sabers, and they kill people with every word.

And upstairs, after thinking it over, Lu Feng decided to delete the 6000 words he wrote yesterday.

Of course, these texts can be used later, so save them in the draft box first.

After reading the entire novel and having a general idea of ​​it in his mind, he decided to make some cuts and adaptations based on the TV series version.

In this way, the word count can be reduced from 40 to about 20 words.

I wrote one chapter of 3000 words every day and finished it in two months.

Lu Feng just deleted the post he posted yesterday, and many posts appeared in the Li Yi forum asking the reason.

"What's going on? Boss [Yi Jian Zhong Qin], why did you delete the novel? Does anyone know the reason?"

"Yesterday I was discussing with someone how to write the second chapter, and Lu Feng deleted the novel today? Is he too tired from filming?"

"I asked someone, and Lu Feng hasn't been on the set these past two days. Someone calculated that their crab roe cake factory is now making millions a month, tens of millions a year. He's probably gone back to being a rich second-generation kid!"

"A local from Kunshan came to testify that what's said above is true. We have a relative who is a supermarket purchasing manager. Lu Feng's crab roe cakes are in such short supply that you have to wait in line for at least a week to get them."

Just as netizens were discussing it.

Lu Feng released the remastered version of "Half-demon Si Teng".

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In late December, on the 23rd day of the 11th lunar month, it is the waning half moon, and the moon rises at midnight.

Qin Fang remembered it clearly. When the half-moon hung high in the sky, his heart suddenly started beating again.

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"In which year did the Japanese cause riots at Marco Polo Bridge?"

In the night, the vines swayed and the woman just looked at him. The scene was very strange.

Qin Fang looked at her tattered cheongsam and suddenly understood something. He asked hesitantly, "Did you die in 1937? My name is Qin Fang, and I died two days ago."

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"Ms. Si Teng, watch your step."

Si Teng ignored her and turned around proudly, but soon found that her feet were stepping on the mountain covered with sharp rocks, which was very painful and cold.

Si Teng stopped and turned back to hum softly: "What did you just say?"

"Ms. Si Teng, you are not wearing shoes and your clothes are very thin. Do you need..."

Qin Fang didn't finish his words.

Si Teng raised her chin, opened her red lips slightly, and said lightly: "Beg me."

……

Chapter 1 was revised and edited.

Lu Feng suddenly felt that the plot became much more smooth and Si Teng’s entire character became much more lovable.

This is a brand new version he created by combining the original novel and the TV series.

Another second creation.

Revising his manuscripts every day like this, Lu Feng suspected that he might really become a great talent.

……

After revising Chapter 1, Lu Feng immediately grasped the style of the entire work and spent the entire night typing away on the keyboard.

Until the morning of the third day.

He directly revised 20 chapters.

The main plot basically follows the plot of the TV series, and the text is copied from the original novel, but he has made some modifications and added some of his own writing style.

The pace of the novel is a bit faster than the original work.

At the same time, Lu Feng deleted a lot of descriptive parts and used more dialogues, so that when it was adapted into a script later, his own workload could be greatly reduced.

……

It was pretty much the same as Lu Feng had imagined.

After the second version was released, the comments suddenly became much more cheerful.

In the first version, those netizens just came to check in and watch the fun. In view of the success of Lu Feng’s first two novels, they didn’t dare to say anything.

After all, Lu Feng is considered a big name in Tieba, and both of his novels have achieved unprecedented success.

A large amount of iron powder has been gathered.

Now, if anyone dares to say something sour, he will probably be scolded by a bunch of people.

Therefore, netizens dare not make random comments, maybe there will be a huge reversal later?
After the second version came out, more and more people started speaking without restraint.

"My name is Qin Fang, I just died two days ago... What kind of self-introduction is this? It's hilarious. I'm really afraid he'll say, 'Add me your contact information, and come to my grave to dance when he's free?'"

"I have no clothes or shoes, and I'm freezing right now, but you have to beg me... beg me, and then I'll wear them. This heroine is so tsundere, I love it."

"Half-demon Si Teng is indeed very demonic. I feel it."

"Brother, don't sleep. Your talent is so great that even a coffin can't hold it back. Hurry up and get up and write a novel. If you don't start, I'm afraid that after your crab roe cakes sell like hotcakes and make a fortune, you'll stop writing and become a rich second-generation kid."

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Almost all of them are positive reviews.

Lu Feng took a glance and immediately smiled with satisfaction.

I glanced at the time and it was already 5am.

sleep.

(End of this chapter)