My game, you have no right to award
Chapter 115
Modified Chapter 115
I reread Chapter 115 several times and found that the foreshadowing was indeed insufficient and the logic of the characters' behavior was abrupt.
I've made some revisions now. If there are any issues or things that seem off, please let me know. (When I read my own writing, I sometimes lose my ability to perceive problems, like "not being able to see the true face of Mount Lu because I'm already there.")
I will listen to everyone's criticism of me, thank you very much for your corrections!!!
Finally, I would like to say sorry to those friends who read it first, for not being able to give you a good reading experience.
(End of this chapter)
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